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Exemplar 3 - most suitable
Exemplar 1 - might be suitable
Exemplar 2 - least suitable

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1. SEF 1
2. SEF 3
3. SEF 2

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Most Suitable 1
Less suitable 3
Least Suitable 2

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Concise
Evidence is clear
Highlights positives

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1. SEF 1
2. SEF 3
3. SEF 2

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1. SEF 1
2. SEF 3
3. SEF 2

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Add impact

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Precise
Easy to read
Contains data but not overwhelming

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Short and to the point
Gives evidence

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Evidence

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Easy to read
Concise
Data is evident

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Almost too much information

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SEF 3 - Too much information
SEF 2 - No data

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Show data

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Amount of suggested evidence
Honest

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Could include impact
Could give more detail

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Needs more infomation
Evidence

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Include date
More indepeth information
Include impact

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Sef 1
Sef 3
Sef 2

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Consise

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Data heavy
References impact
Clear plan for future
Knowledge of subject
Language and vocabulary

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X not a clear overview of data - lots of unnecessary percentages
X discussed internal and external together
X no talk of impact
X no SEF vocab

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Detailed

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Inconsistent

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Too much data included. Not enough for inspectors to find out

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Organised
Honest

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Writing frame is clear

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Accurate terminology used

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X no SEF terminology
X no data / percentages

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Gaps in analysis
Missing data

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Detailed and thorough

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Very comprehensive
Data rich
Evidence is referenced

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Use quantitative terms

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Too detailed
Very wordy
Giving everything to the inspectors rather than allowing them to find it themselves