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Bank Loan officer: cares about your ability to pay back the loan; will the business be successful enough that you will sufficiently pay the loan back when it is due. Is there collateral, and what is your plan?
Zach: cares about the success of the business; is there a plan in place? Are there contingencies? What is the risk, and how will the profits be split.

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my audience is the bank loan officer and they care about how profitable the bungee jumping business is

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my audience is the bank loan officer and they care about how profitable the bungee jumping business is

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The loan officer cares if you can pay back the loan with interest.

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The loan officer cares if you can pay back the loan with interest.

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The audience are potential creditors and they care about the risks. Risks associated with providing money to someone they don't know. Will they get the money back? When will they get the money back? Will there be interest?

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Audience is the bank loan officer. They care about if you have a good plan in order to give you the loan. Do you have a good business plan? Will you be able to pay the loan back? How long will it take? Are they both capable of making it happen?

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Audience is the bank loan officer. They care about if you have a good plan in order to give you the loan. Do you have a good business plan? Will you be able to pay the loan back? How long will it take? Are they both capable of making it happen?

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My audience would be the loan lender and they care whether if I will be able to be successful with the business and be able to pay back my loan.

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My audience is the bank loan officer and they care about if zack and I are eligible for the loan to start our bungee jumping business

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My audience is the bank loan officer and they care about if zack and I are eligible for the loan to start our bungee jumping business

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My audience are the people wanting to participate in my bungee jumping operations. We have many promotions such as t shirts, banners, advertisements, etc that would attract many customers persuaded by their children

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The audience is the loan officer.  They care because they want us to be able to pay back the loan so they do not lose money.

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The audience is the loan officer.  They care because they want us to be able to pay back the loan so they do not lose money.

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Me and my Friend Zack are going to use this loan in a smart and responsible way to make our business successful and have a good return on our investment.

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my audience is zack, he is my partner

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obtain a loan in order to start my own business

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He cares about our business idea and the potential earnings it can make.

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My audience cares about why and how I will manage to get/take the loan as well as what I will use it for. Therefore, my audience are the bank loan officers. They care because they want to know who their money is going to and WHEN that exact same amount of money will come back to them.

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To obtain a loan in order to allow my business to grow and prosper. 

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To obtain a loan in order to allow my business to grow and prosper. 

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They are the money lenders and they care about the investment return.

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They are the money lenders and they care about the investment return.

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My goal is to obtain financial assistance to start my bungee jumping business

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My goal is to acquire capital so that I can purchase the necessary equipment to successfully run my business.

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my goal is to help zack and I to get a loan and start our bungee jumping business

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my goal is to help zack and I to get a loan and start our bungee jumping business

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To gain enough respect/trust with the loan manager to eventually get them to consider allowing a debenture for my project.

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To gain enough respect/trust with the loan manager to eventually get them to consider allowing a debenture for my project.

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Form a business partnership with Zach and achieve a loan to further our Born To Fly bungee jumping venture

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My goal is to get a loan in order to start my business and achieve financial freedom

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My goal is to get a loan in order to start my business and achieve financial freedom

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Goal is to make sure that Zack is clearly understood of our situation, and since I'm gonna be preparing for next year, I would like to put forth a plan that would benefit both of us, and end up with Zack agreeing with me

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My goal is to get a loan which will help me further my business

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My goal is to get a loan which will help me further my business

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is to obtain a loan that will jump start business so I am able to operate successful business

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Obtain a loan to further pursue my business opportunity.  Communicate to Zach that the business is indeed a goal.

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Obtain a loan to further pursue my business opportunity.  Communicate to Zach that the business is indeed a goal.

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As a young manager in training who is seeking to start my own bungee jump business, my goal is to get the loan and complete my goal.

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my goal is to get a loan which will help me start my bunjee jump business

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my goal is to get a loan which will help me start my bunjee jump business

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A business university student with experience in a bungee jumping business pursuing the opportunity to run a business of my own.

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A business university student with experience in a bungee jumping business pursuing the opportunity to run a business of my own.

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My idea is unique and has a high chance of making it rich 

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My idea is unique and has a high chance of making it rich 

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An Academic who is attending a university to not only learn many subjects regarding this business but also learning essential skills such as critical thinking and organization

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An Academic who is attending a university to not only learn many subjects regarding this business but also learning essential skills such as critical thinking and organization

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a student looking to gain experience in running a business related to bungee jumping

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a student looking to gain experience in running a business related to bungee jumping

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A uni student with experience in bungee jumping operations and various roles in business and financial analytical skills

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a university student trying to make money and looking for experience

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a university student trying to make money and looking for experience

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A university student with some experience with a crane-based operation. I am looking to start my own Bungee-Jumping business this summer. During the summer of 2003 I took a Bungee-jumping training course, worked for two and a half months at an amusement park in the US. I am ambitious, and have a good friend that is willing to invest in this operation with me. I have done extensive research on the operations and safety required to run a bungee-jumping business; I have even established my own set of safety rules to ensure that my liability is even further limited.

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university student working, also looking to start business

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university student working, also looking to start business

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An ambitious university s

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Manager in training who is keen in learning how to run and start a business on my own

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Manager in training who is keen in learning how to run and start a business on my own

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A university student that has bungee jumping experience but looking to gain more experience within the business side of bungee jumping. I would like to pursue the opportunity to create a business that helps me financially as well as others.

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A university student that has bungee jumping experience but looking to gain more experience within the business side of bungee jumping. I would like to pursue the opportunity to create a business that helps me financially as well as others.

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Business Partner

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uni student working 4 days a week drowning in work

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uni student working 4 days a week drowning in work

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A high school graduate who has 10 weeks experience in bungee jumping looking to start my own operation

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A high school graduate who has 10 weeks experience in bungee jumping looking to start my own operation

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Student pursuing experience and a successful business

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A university student with experience in the management and operations of the bungee jumping industry in need of money to start a potential Bungee jumping venture

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A university student looking to start a bungee jumping business

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A university student looking to start a bungee jumping business

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Looking to get involved in born to fly over the summer for employment.