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A nice and important topic to right about
It could’ve been a little more kid friendly

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:You had a very good PowerPoint, over not to do drugs and how it can be very  effective on you life
It was really good, love overall concept of your children’s book, but your vocabulary would be too much for a kid to understand

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I like all the information you put into your book
I think it should be more kid-easy because children have short attention spams, so more pictures and less words

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Praise: very informative and is a great resource/guide for children to look at when needed
Polish: maybe use more kid-friendly words so that it could be more easily understood unless your age group is targeted towards older kids

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Praise: adding pictures and having a character was good
Polish: a little too long

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I like the power point and how it is informative. I would have put the character a bit more.

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I like how he chose a serious topic to write about

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Praise : I like that you added pictures
Polish could have beeen a little shorter

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Praise: very very generous amount of detail
Polish: Not much , very very well

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I like that the explanations aren’t too much for a child but enough for one to understand the harsh effects, good job (:

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Smart how you added a character for children to relate to, I never would’ve thought of that. It seems a bit complicated for children to understand but you did a great job in simplifying it down as much as you could

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-I like how you fully explained in depth everything
-I think the depth of the book might be too much for children but possibly good for middle school

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Pr:very informative
Po:it could e appealed to kids more

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- I like how you started off with your book and adding a character for children can relate to in the story and put in important information.

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Praise: You did a great job at explaining the topic of drugs for a G-rated audience.
Polish: It was a bit too wordy; most kids wouldn’t have the capacity to read all of it.

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Praise: it was really informative
Polish: I don’t know if it was really for kids, I wasn’t felling a children’s vibe.

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I liked how you created a character for the kids so they won’t get bored.