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Loved your digital identity, cool design. I also liked how you showed us your favorite websites and gave personal insight. Your video was also very concise and you covered each topic very well. I think you could've explained the digital dialogue less and gave a definition of an assistive technology. Overall I was very impressed.

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You spoke very clearly in your video, which was good because it was easy to follow! One thing you could have done was added a little more detail when explaining each thing. Your video was also a bit short, but overall it was great!

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Your digital identity was so pretty, loved the shape and colors! I liked that you gave each item a short but informative description. I also liked how you explained your examples for the lesson plan. You also spoke very clearly, however one thing I would be careful was the flow of the video-- your voice cuts out at times and it also appears a bit too structured. Nice work girl!

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I liked that your video didn't sound forced, you talked to the viewers in a conversational manner. However, there was a lot of long quiet pauses. You were very detailed and I loved that you gave a personal experience in your AT Smore. I also liked that you included videos with it, although I don't think you needed to spend that much time on the one topic.

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I liked that you introduced yourself in the beginning and that you gave your opinion on each piece. Your voice echoed a bit in the beginning and got softer as it went on to the nest tab. I would try to record in the same way for each part of the video! I loved that you had a perfect amount of detail for each part. Nice job (:

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I liked that you introduced each tab before beginning with your home page description. I also liked that you thoroughly described each piece of technology, however, some portions were a bit long, like with the lesson plan, and it would be easy for a student to lose focus. You also spoke very clearly and didn't stutter, which was great!

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Your website was very clean and informative. For next time, I would try to have less long pauses between slides and when introducing new technologies. Also maybe give an example of one of your Assitive technologies!

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Your website was very bright and your digital identity added to this theme in a fun way. Your descriptions were kinda cut short, and your sentences seemed unfinished at places. Don't be afraid to give more detail! You spoke clearly, which was good.

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Daria your video was almost PERFECT. You spoke clearly and gave detailed descriptions of each technology. Your google classroom was also clean and bright, with no distractions. I was able to stay focused to everything you were saying. The only thing I would have done was spent less time on your digital dialogues, as they were more essay-based. Really a great job!

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I loved how fun your website looked with your creative backgrounds! I like how you used personal examples and real world references. For next time, try to plan out what you say more to avoid stutters. You described each new tab with a lot of detail, which was great, but make sure not to over-sell it. Overall it was really good.

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Your digital identity was so cute! Your background was also very cheerful and helped give your website a positive vibe. I liked how you gave personal insight and your speech did not sound to rehearsed. I think you could have spent a little less time on your digital dialogues. There were some awkward pauses and I think you ended kinda abruptly, but overall great work girl!

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I think you should have added your website to your screen cast, I'd love to show you how! I think you explained your technologies well and I liked that you made real world connections and related it to personal examples.

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You spoke clearly, but it sounded very rehearsed, it was easy to lose focus and miss pieces of what you were saying. You were very informative, but I think you spent a lot of time on your home page and your video seemed cut short in a way. I think you could have also shown us the other tabs on your website. Your website was also very clean and organized. Love your children's book choice!

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In the beginning there was a bit of a glitch, i don't know what happened with the sound. Your digital identity was very colorful, loved it. Your website was overall very organized. You spoke clearly, but you talked a bit fast at times, next time just try to slow down!

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I liked how you included yourself in the video! It made it seem more like an open conversation. I think if you had more structure, their would be less pauses and stutters. However, you were very informative!

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I like that you went into detail on the apps and devices you liked best. You spoke very clearly and spoke in the same volume throughout the video which was nice, it also did not sound very rehearsed. One thing I would have tried to eliminate the pause before each new tab to keep the flow throughout the website. I also don't think you needed as much time with your digital dialogue. Overall, your video was one of my favorites!

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You were very informative and your website was very clean and organized. You sounded a bit unsure about some things you were saying, try to speak with more confidence! It would also help to try to eliminate any "uh's"
Overall great job.

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Loved the crown design for your digital identity! You spoke very clearly but I think you could have gone into more detail at some parts! Overall, it looked great!

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