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It was interesting how the author had a sense of entitlement towards having internet access. If my child were to give me a hard time over something I payed for, I'll just drop em off in the woods for the weekend.

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time left infinite was so relatable to me because i feel like when i dont have my phone on me time stops for me and the day gets longer and sadder by the second

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"Later that evening I sneaked downstairs with my 8-year-old brother to switch the router back on. But it was being heavily guarded"
I liked it because of how she had a good description and had a great sense in action.

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"When I am watching Netflix, time seems to accelerate and before I know it, the hours have flown by. But with the internet gone, time became my worst enemy."
This is relatable to me because when I am bored it feels like forever. I like they made a connection and a relatable statement so that the reader came understand more. I will use this in my essay by trying to put sentences that the reader can connect to.

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"But they still have the capacity to understand and learn from me as I do from them"
i like that she talks about the way she sees things

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"Later that evening I sneaked downstairs with my 8-year-old brother to switch the router back on. But it was being heavily guarded"
I liked it because of how she had a good description and had a great sense in action.

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"Despite the lessons I learned from this experience, a part of me wishes that my dad had taken a different approach in encouraging us to spend more time as a family." I really liked this sentence because of the way they rethink of the beginning and the outcome.

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"Time felt infinite"
When i think about it, its true. I spend so much time using the internet, in my room while time just passes by and i don't realize there are many other things i could be doing. Yeah using the internet is fun but life isn't forever and there's plenty of things you could be doing to enjoy every second and not just wait for it to turn night to finally turn of the phone and wake up and repeat a cycle.

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The author is quite relatable the statement"i tried the neighbors' wifi but it was password protected" i would do the same in that scenario like i said in chat"walk to my neighbors house in shame asking them whats the wifi password rinse and repeat till i get the wifi at someones house" there is alot of common interest young writers and young readers have and thats something that sparks interest in my own writing and on my perception of life but this isnt a philosophical tedtalk so i'll address the elephant in the room (haha transition words) the wifi/internet my take on it is that if we have something we should use it to too its fullest if we have wood we should set a campfire and build tools and houses if we have water we should drink it and save some for later uses so why don't we use internet in the same way turning off the internet would in the same way be turning off over 2000 years of work and the ability to creatively think on a social platform.

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"In the absence of technology, we went for walks, baked cakes and cycled together. My mom taught me how to cook some of my favorite meals from recipes handed down from my grandmother. But when it came to baking we had a few disasters. I made a misshapen, overly sweet cake which no one ate, not even my little brother"
it's cool how she tried to learn how to cook and bake because i'm learning how to cook and bake as well and learn new things.

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"My daily life differs so much from my parents’ younger years, and it’s hard to imagine they were ever teenagers".
I relate to this because every now and then when me and my parents are talking they always bring up how lucky I am to have all these opportunities. So to me it's hard to believe that they weren't as lucky. Since now all I have is opportunities.

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"At first we were in denial, and could not believe that the box was not in the house. We searched under the beds, behind the TV and even in the bathroom." I can relate to this because me and my cousin always explore the whole house when we get our devices/ internet taken away.

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my favorite thing in her essay is how she organized the paragraphs, i thought what they meant by "introduction body conclusion" was just like to use 3 paragraphs

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"Dad is just saying what many parents say because they are unsettled by how much time my generation spends online." I liked this sentence because it was true

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"My daily life differs so much from my parents’ younger years, and it’s hard to imagine they were ever teenagers"

i can relate to this because my parents even express this themselves that our life is completely different  from how theres was outside and playing .v.s. staying in and on the phone or the video games

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"Time felt infinite"
When i saw this i just thought about all my good memories cause are life is short we gotta make the most of it ya know. It interesting because there is so much in those three words it makes you think of memories you have had good or bad. I would you this in my essay to talk about my past or to go deeper in the memories ill be describing .

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"But in the moment, we refused to accept defeat"

I like this sentence because it feels brave and like they're fighting back. its interesting because I don't think I've heard that sentence in a text before.
I would use it in my essay by explaining how I'm not going to give up on trying a certain trick and then I finally land the trick.

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My daily life differs so much from my parents’ younger years, and it’s hard to imagine they were ever teenagers.                         I like it because it makes sense                              Phineas

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“ Time felt infinite “
When I heard this it reminded me that when u spend ur time doing just one thing u forget that there is a lot of time in the world we just use it in one activity which makes us lose track of time

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"I looked elsewhere for inspiration."
This interests me because inspiration is something i recently came to have a liking on especially when it affects my life and other lives. I might use this as my own way to say it as well.

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"Time felt Infinite"

Like i know time does go fast but i never even notice that someone watches Netflix a lot and literally time goes on faster than waiting on a flight to go to L.A. or in Singapore

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"Time felt infinite."

I noticed this sentence because she only used three words, but it expressed something so VAST and unending. She also made this the first sentence of a SUPER SHORT paragraph, so I know she did this on purpose to make sure the reader slowed down and paid attention to how it felt to her when time took forever and she had nothing to do and no one to connect with. I think it was a brilliant way to make her point. I think I will DEFINITELY use a short sentence or a really short paragraph to emphasize an important idea.

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'But in the moment, we refused to accept defeat"

i am not the type to accept defeat but sometimes you gotta let go from what i've been told, and that's okay! but i really real like we don't need our electronic devices all the time we need breaks.

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"I worried that my friends would think I was ignoring them, but I was later able to explain what had happened — much to their amusement."
i dont really care about any fancy choice of words that make a passage sound like its written by a trained proffesional, but i think i could use smething along the lines of this, were you flash to the future for a sentance. its a fun detail.

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"Would I have listened otherwise?"
Though I am to steal this, I will not be using it in the way it has been used. The way this has been used is in the sense of 'Would I listen to my parent'. It stands out to me mostly because it makes me realize how we view things. I notice that the Author know them self. What I mean is the Author said this  'I wished he had spoken to me first and given me the chance to make decisions with them' and then said this "Would I have listened otherwise?".
I'll use the stolen quote for music related purposes.

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"Later that evening I sneaked downstairs with my 8-year-old brother to switch the router back on. But it was being heavily guarded"

I liked it because it gave a sense of action

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"Quote copied over from the essay"

Comments you make about the quote
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Why did that strike you? Why is that interesting?
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one thing i like about this essay was of how he/she wrote his thinking and what hes dad did and toll her about spending time with his family,and its more interesting reading i letter that has paragraph that just i stonks of word.

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"But they still have the capacity to understand and learn from me as I do from them"

Since the essay I am doing is about my parents, I might include this sentence somewhere near the end or beginning.

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"My daily life differs so much from my parents’ younger years, and it’s hard to imagine they were ever teenagers"
i can relate to this i feel like alot of peoples lives dont realize that they are alot diffrent from our parents lives and even though its not a big statement it still shows alot