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Great job bestfran

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You do a great job of precisely describing everything in your paper, Sanaai.

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I liked how you explained it

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Amaya I like your story it is so descriptive.

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I like your introduction and good use of details

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Great job💕bestfran

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Quanari, you do a good job of including theme in your story.

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Great setting

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I see that

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Good job boi😂

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Wow long long line

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I like you setting Q💕

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Love your story👍

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Good job👎🏽

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Details and dialogue

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Did it have any turns?

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Q I like the way you use better transition words. 👍🏻

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Jonathan, you do a great job describing the fair. Sounds like it was fun!

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Love your story👍

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I like your setting and dalioughe

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Fun setting and good dialogue

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Lucky

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Jonathan, I like how you started with descriptive words. ✏️📝👍🏻✍

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Nice details

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Such an emotional story

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Love ur beginning 😔

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Wow 😎

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Vary discreptive👍

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Descriptive details

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I like the information💕

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Gavin, I am so sorry about your uncle.  He sounded like a great guy.  You have a good lead in your story.

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Gavin, I like how you started the story. 👍🏻😢

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Been their

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Storytelling

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Yeesssss

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Says the character's names

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Wow

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Love ur story

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#relatibale 👨🏻‍🏫

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Anaya, I like how you have alot of detail ✍✏️.

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Amaya, you do a good job of describing the cafeteria.

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Wow story

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Good description ⚡️⚡⚡️😅😂😡👅👅👅❤️👑

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Good pun

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Nice story

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U have descriptive words❤️

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I loved how you told what type of dog 🐕 and the name of the dog

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Spencer, I like how you have a detailed story 📝📝✏️✏📖📖📖.

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Spencer, you do a good job telling the inner and outer story.

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Has dialogue and descriptive details

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Wow❤️👍😱

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Very descriptive. Nice job 👌

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I LOVE YOUR WORDS👅😍😍😍❤️❤❤️

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Cool 😎 and aww

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Cool

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I like how u used figurative language

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Loved how you named the names of your friends

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Ada, you do a great job with dialogue in your story.  You also have alliteration!

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I like how you used alliteration

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I like your descriptive words

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Family is important

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Show GG

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Ada I like how you start your story with alot of energy and how detail it is 💄💅🏼👒👛👗👠👍🏻!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I ❤️ Story

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Nice describing what your doing

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I like how you used descriptive words👍

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Wow cool

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Did the bike have trying wheels

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I like you conflict

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Do you still have coco?

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The way you describe everything that occurs in your story helps to create a picture in my head!

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Wow

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Jenny, I the way you use descriptive words👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 and how detailed it is.

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Have a setting and di

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Liked how you told the setting

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I like how you told us what you did. 🐶

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Long time

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I like how you describe the setting

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Wow😱

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Descriptive details and dialogue

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Ayanna, that sounds scary!  You do a good job of telling the inner and outer story.

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Sounds scary

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How you describe your characters

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Ayanna, I like the way you use dialogue 👍🏻.

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I like how u described your friend and good description

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Good starting 👌🎶

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Nice story

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I like that you tell us were you were at the beginning

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Wow 👍👌😌🎥

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Time go fast

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I like how you describe your feelings and how they relate to others destiny

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Wow brave👩‍✈️