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In the article, “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity”, by Stazyk et al (2014), the authors claim that sustainability can be described as the need of intergenerational social equity. Accordingly, they assert that even though the mission to achieve this seems highly unlikely to be successful, there is still hope for it to be possible if the need to move towards it is explicitly considered as an obligation. The writers develop this argument by explaining the meanings of environmental, social and economic sustainability. They believe that to achieve environmental sustainability it is necessary to use the natural resources of the world in a way that they benefit the current populations but also don’t run them out for future generations. Similarly, economic sustainability can be achieved by applying the same principle to the economy’s assets (make sure two models stated by the writer) and social sustainability can be accomplished by understanding the concept of ‘tragedy of the commons’, and then working towards avoiding this phenomenon (briefly state what should be avoided? what is the tragedy?).  In conclusion, the writers are confident about the potential positive outcomes if importance is given to attaining sustainability and intergenerational fairness after thoroughly understanding the problem at hand.

Thank you for the task. It is a well-organized summary, but please go over my comments.

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MET

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The article “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity” by Stazyk et al(2014) the writers discuss the meaning of sustainability. They talk about what they’re going to do and what can they do about this topic (be specific here: what do they state? what should we do?) . this topic is all about providing a good future for future generations by doing what?).
At first, writers are telling us (use a reporting verb here) the past of sustainability they talk about ancient civilizations. they give us an example 2500 years ago there was a group of people who lived in the Athenian city. they have one specific goal, this goal is all about to provide a good future and sources for their children. for this purpose, they make an oath.then they discuss Greeks. The Greeks claim the current generation has is obligations towards the future generations abound.

Here you need to also mention what do authors state about economic and social sustainability?

They talk about (use a proper reporting verb) two related topics sustainability as a form of equality and fairness it means it doesn’t matter where do you live or what time you lived in. The sources must be equal every people around the world should provide their basic needs.

Make sure you cover all the supporting points, use reporting verbs and linkers.

Best,
MET

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In "sustainability and intergenerational equity" by stayzk et al. (2014), the authors describe sustainability as an attempt to transfer try of convey the present resources to future generations. it became crutial/crucial from Ancient Athenians. even ancient Greeks based on their society on team work and sharing. This ongoing idea which mention in  bruntland report(2006) to,create significance for is based on three aspects of human life; economic, social and environmental aspects. The authors claim that people need to ensure equity for either their or future generations. the world has limited environmental resources and if any of them will take more it means social balance will be broken.on the other hand it is a mission for government as heal(1998) one model justifies y. sustainability has the power of provide economical strength.governments need to concern about their resources and providing human needs. (mention the second model too) in brief, for protecting resources for future generations based on history and it is an continual idea

to provide equity as authors claim (grammar makes it difficult to understand).

Please complete your summary and get feedback.

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MET

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In the article of “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity”, Stayzk. et al (2014) mentions the importance of sustainability and intergenerational equity. The author states that the term of sustainability is not a new term. We can see it’s examples 2500 years ago in Athenian citizen oath. In today’s world sustainability means much. People should use the resources of the world for their needs but also they should consider about the future generations. They should leave left the resources to the future generations at least as it was left to them. The authors surveys that topic in three categories. They are environmental equity, economical equity and social equity. Environmental resources are common values and everybody deserves that. In economic equity the author mentions two economic sustainability models. In Heals The first model claims that idea environmental assets should be protected by government. On the other hand the second model Bratland advocates that owners should do that.

As a conclusion people should protect the resources for the future generations because it is people’s obligation. If people work for their obligation, they can achieve the sustainable world.

Thank you for the task Mert. Make sure you use linkers to guide the readers and refer to authors.

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In the article “Sustainability and intergenerational social equity”, by the authors Stazyk et al (2014). the authors discuss firstly about definition of sustainability today in present and the e affect of current generation's actions on the future. They also explain the sustainability from three points, environmental aspect, social and economic aspects. However sustainability is not a new concept, it was there from the time of ancient Greeks. In addition to that the writers explain intergenerational fairness and how the current generation must care what they are going to leave for the next generations to come. For the environmental sustainability aspect the writers emphasize on the important of preserving our ecosystem and natural resources for future generation. Also, The appearing of scarce resources and the limitless demands in some countries (rewrite this part as language hinders understanding) and how they deal with it, the writers outline the two models of economic sustainability, the first model argues that it is exclusive for governments to maintain the natural resources, in contrast, the second model is about giving the responsibility specifically to individuals. Finally, the social aspect here the authors are sound hopeless because for the future generations to have a healthy community they need the same resources that we have today which seems un infeasible. In conclusion the writers are hopeful (in the previous sentence you have a contradictory claim. Go over this! Make the link between these ideas clearer) about the knowledge that we have now and how can we use this knowledge to embrace intergenerational fairness.

Please go over my comments.

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MET

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In “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity” written by Stazyk et al(2014). The article authors gives the information about (use repoting verbs here) some terms of sustainability such as economical, environmental and social. First, the authors are concerned s about future generations. In addition, the authors believes that people still think  about themselves what are they doing. Therefore, using sustainability is crucial for future generation. As the writers mentioned ‘environmental resources must be shared with future genarations’ we can easily understand that (use reporting verbs here) environmental resources are limited and our generation should use them at in an useful way. To conclude, (use reporting verbs to reflect the author's attitude) sustainability connects our generation with future generaiton generation. So people should be careful about their usage.

Make sure you use reporting verbs to reflect the author's attitude and make sure you state all the supporting ideas, you need mention their ideas about economic sustainability, too.

Best,
MET

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In the article piece,"Sustainabilty and Intergenerational Social Equity",by Stazyk et al (2014),T the authors discusses about sustainability how it that will a effect our future generations.He embraces the idea that we should to keep this countinuity,humankind in present days must be aware of the resources that can be go extinct. The focuses of the author is pointed with three elements (use a reporting verb here to reflect the author's attitude) :social,environmental and economic attitudes.Also they assumes the resources that the humans have is universal and it shows the value of humanity. THey suggests that there is some responsibility of present modern humans to keep the belongings safe for to the future  generations.These "Modern Man"s should focus to the natural goods so that prospect genereation can be counted as "healthy genesis".In the rear,the author feels that there are some limited resources that the earth has and it should be held safely and fresh(with no chemicals in it) you have already mentioned this idea, no need to repeat! so that every solution that will be done,leads to another problem solution that will provide the humans to solve their problems just by raising awarness of it.

You need to use linkers and reporting verbs so that the readers can follow the ideas and understand the author's attitude. You need to also mention all the supporting points, make sure you mention economic sustainability.

Best,
MET

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Alara                                           In the article ‘’Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity’’, written by Stazyk et al (2014)  consider the definition of sustainability for the present and the future generations. Author also focuses on the three elements: social,environmental and economic aspects. For the social equity the author mention about what should society to do live in harmony and community. For economics aspect the writer indicate two different solutions. One’s shows us the governments sustain the natural beauties and natural resources. Second’s is only accredit for the individuals and private citizans. And the social equity of the writer seems positive for the future generations that they obligated to have the same opportunities for us. .In conclusion for the text, if we care about the next generation we will carry of the sustainability. 

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Alara                                           In the article ‘’Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity’’, written by Stazyk et al (2014)  consider the definition of sustainability for the present and the future generations. Author also focuses on the three elements: social,environmental and economic aspects. For the social equity the author mention about what should society to do live in harmony and community. For economics aspect the writer indicate two different solutions. One’s shows us the governments sustain the natural beauties and natural resources. Second’s is only accredit for the individuals and private citizans. And the social equity of the writer seems positive for the future generations that they obligated to have the same opportunities for us. .In conclusion for the text, if we care about the next generation we will carry of the sustainability. 

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Alara                                                  In the article ‘’Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity’’, written by Stazyk et al (2014)  consider the definition of sustainability for the present and the future generations (nake sure you state the main argument here). The Authors also focuses on the three elements: social,environmental and economic aspects. For the social equity the authors mention about what society should to do live in harmony as a and community. For economics aspect the writer indicate two different solutions. One’s shows us the governments should sustain the natural beauties and natural resources. Second’s is only accredit (check grammar here) for the individuals and private ownership citizans. And the idea of  social equity of the writers seems positive for the future generations that they need obligated to have the same opportunities for like us. .In conclusion for the text, if we care about the next generation we will carry of the sustainability (sounds Turkish, rewrite this sentence).

Dear Alara,

Thank you for the task. Please go over my comments.

Best,
MET

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Ezgi:  In the article "Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity" by Stazyk et al (2014) the authors discuss the history of sustainability concept with intergenerational equity.The authors provide some examples from Athenian citizens and Greeks that what did they do for the sustainability and intergenerational fairness.The authors also discuss the three pillars of sustainability which are environmental, social and economics.They claim that people should protect and share natural resources with future generation Moreover, current generation should maintain environmental assets for the benefit of future generation.It is apparent that we should not be ignorant and also focus on how to we improve current society for future generation.

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Ezgi:  In the article "Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity" by Stazyk et al (2014) the authors discuss the history of sustainability concept with intergenerational equity.The authors provide some examples from Athenian citizens and Greeks that what did they do for the sustainability and intergenerational fairness.The authors also discuss the three pillars of sustainability which are environmental, social and economics.They claim that people should protect and share natural resources with future generation Moreover, current generation should maintain environmental assets for the benefit of future generation.It is apparent that we should not be ignorant and also focus on how to we improve current society for future generation.

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Ezgi:                                                    In the article "Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity" by Stazyk et al (2014) the authors discuss the history of sustainability concept together with intergenerational equity.The authors provide some examples from Athenian citizens and Greeks that what did they do for the sustainability and intergenerational fairness (be specific what did theu state?).The authors also discuss the three pillars of sustainability which are environmental, social and economics.They claim that people should protect and share natural resources with future generation Moreover, current generation should maintain environmental assets for the benefit of future generation.It is apparent that we should not be ignorant and also focus on how to we improve current society for future generation.
So far your summary is good, but also make clear what did they state about economic sustainability? and wrap up by stating the authors' main argument and attitude towards the point they discuss?

Best,
MET

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Onat                                           In the article “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity” wrltten by Stazyk et al(2014). The writers explain sustainability’s meaning and Brundtland.They show sustainability is not new and they give example from Athenian citizens who took the oath that protect their enviroment and improve their city for future generations. The writers, also focused on three points.These are social, economıc and enviromental aspects.

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Onat                                           In the article “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity” wrltten by Stazyk et al(2014). The writers explain sustainability’s meaning and Brundtland.They show sustainability is not new and they give example from Athenian citizens who took the oath that protect their enviroment and improve their city for future generations. The writers, also focused on three points.These are social, economıc and enviromental aspects.

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In the article “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity” wrltten by Stazyk et al(2014). T the writers explain sustainability’s meaning and Brundtland.They show sustainability is not new and they give example from Athenian citizens who took the oath to that protect their environment and improve their city for future generations. The writers, also focused on three points.These are social, economıc and enviromental aspects.For economic aspects the writers show two solutions. One of them is govermental, other solution is about private community (be specific what is the solution about?). Societies can improve them irselves for a healthier community.To conculude t

Make sure  you state the supporting ideas and the main argument. Complete the summary and get feedback.

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MET

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Muhammed                              In the artıcle “sustaınabılıty, Intergeneratıonal Socıal Equıty, and the socıally Responsıble Organısatıon” by Stazyk et al. (2014) the wrıters fırstly descrıbe the meanıng of sutaınabılıty and  references the Brundtland commısıon defınatıon. First, The Wrıters that stress that sustaınabılıty ıs not a recent topıc and they brıng an example of the  cıtızens Athenıan  cıty ,2500 years ago who took an oath to the leave thıer cıty better for future genertatıons. Following this, the wrıters claim that the best way to balance our current needs wıth our oblıgatıons to the future generatıons ıs to treat the topıc of sustaınabılıty as ıntergeneratıonal equıty equally,  the wrıters mentıon Rawls, a leadıng advocate for ıncludıng generatıon ın justıce to back up thıer poınt. The wrıters also brıng up two dıffernt solutıons to protect and preserve natıonal ınterst. One of those ıs  that enıvormental assets should be handled by the government and the other is that ıt should be handled by prıvate cıtızens. The wrıters show a bıt of enthusıasm ın  the end of the artıcle as they say”  we should seek to adopt and implement policies that support intergenerational fairness.

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Muhammed                              In the artıcle “sustaınabılıty, Intergeneratıonal Socıal Equıty, and the socıally Responsıble Organısatıon” by Stazyk et al. (2014) the wrıters fırstly descrıbe the meanıng of sutaınabılıty and  references the Brundtland commısıon defınatıon. First, The Wrıters that stress that sustaınabılıty ıs not a recent topıc and they brıng an example of the  cıtızens Athenıan  cıty ,2500 years ago who took an oath to the leave thıer cıty better for future genertatıons. Following this, the wrıters claim that the best way to balance our current needs wıth our oblıgatıons to the future generatıons ıs to treat the topıc of sustaınabılıty as ıntergeneratıonal equıty equally,  the wrıters mentıon Rawls, a leadıng advocate for ıncludıng generatıon ın justıce to back up thıer poınt. The wrıters also brıng up two dıffernt solutıons to protect and preserve natıonal ınterst. One of those ıs  that enıvormental assets should be handled by the government and the other is that ıt should be handled by prıvate cıtızens. The wrıters show a bıt of enthusıasm ın  the end of the artıcle as they say”  we should seek to adopt and implement policies that support intergenerational fairness.

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Serhat and OnatIn this article “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity” written by Stazyk et al (2014)argues that sustainability and equity between old and new generations. 

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Serhat and OnatIn this article “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity” written by Stazyk et al (2014)argues that sustainability and equity between old and new generations. 

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Mert Kasım:In “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity”, Stayzk. et al(2014) mentions  sustainability and equity between generations. 

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Mert Kasım:In “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity”, Stayzk. et al(2014) mentions  sustainability and equity between generations. 

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Alaraİn the article ‘’Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity’’, written by Stazyk et al (2014)  argue the sustainability between the old an

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Alaraİn the article ‘’Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity’’, written by Stazyk et al (2014)  argue the sustainability between the old an

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Ceren Otu: Stazyk, , Moldovanova, and Frederickson, (2014) , in their article “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity ''says what is sustainability. The author thinks that sustainability reflects an increasing awareness that existing human needs and expectations need to be balanced against the immediate and long-term capacity to support ecosystems. Sustainability is not a new concept. 2500 years ago, the citizens of Athens promised to leave the city better for future generations. The definition of sustainable development sworn by the Brundtland Commission and the Athenians is similar due to the fact that  both are concerned for future generations. The author claims that current generations have responsibilities toward future generations abound. Unfortunately, people’s  obligations to future generations are difficult to be balanced against current needs and expectations. Ecology is an important concept in sustainability because environmental and natural resources should be shared with future generations in sustainability. The economy is processed in terms of sustainability. The idea of ​​intergenerational sustainability in the economy is based on the idea that “the current generation does not fulfill social and public responsibility to protect“ environmental assets amacıyla in order to generate income for future generations (Brätland, 2006, p. 13). There are two models of economic sustainability. According to Heal (1998), the government should be concerned with sustainability, while Brätland advocates private property. According to the author; social sustainability is generally defined as a system that not only meets the needs of existing members, but also supports the ability of future generations to maintain a healthy society.  A well-known theory, the tragedy of the commons, focuses on this issue. This tragedy shows that sustainable social interaction and cooperation does not seem realistic under conditions of scarcity.  There is a significant improvement in the prospects of future generations about sustainability because, regardless of the current weaknesses, there is a case where their interests are explicitly accepted as an obligation. People should adopt and implement policies that support intergenerational justice.

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Ceren Otu: Stazyk, , Moldovanova, and Frederickson, (2014) , in their article “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity ''says what is sustainability. The author thinks that sustainability reflects an increasing awareness that existing human needs and expectations need to be balanced against the immediate and long-term capacity to support ecosystems. Sustainability is not a new concept. 2500 years ago, the citizens of Athens promised to leave the city better for future generations. The definition of sustainable development sworn by the Brundtland Commission and the Athenians is similar due to the fact that  both are concerned for future generations. The author claims that current generations have responsibilities toward future generations abound. Unfortunately, people’s  obligations to future generations are difficult to be balanced against current needs and expectations. Ecology is an important concept in sustainability because environmental and natural resources should be shared with future generations in sustainability. The economy is processed in terms of sustainability. The idea of ​​intergenerational sustainability in the economy is based on the idea that “the current generation does not fulfill social and public responsibility to protect“ environmental assets amacıyla in order to generate income for future generations (Brätland, 2006, p. 13). There are two models of economic sustainability. According to Heal (1998), the government should be concerned with sustainability, while Brätland advocates private property. According to the author; social sustainability is generally defined as a system that not only meets the needs of existing members, but also supports the ability of future generations to maintain a healthy society.  A well-known theory, the tragedy of the commons, focuses on this issue. This tragedy shows that sustainable social interaction and cooperation does not seem realistic under conditions of scarcity.  There is a significant improvement in the prospects of future generations about sustainability because, regardless of the current weaknesses, there is a case where their interests are explicitly accepted as an obligation. People should adopt and implement policies that support intergenerational justice.

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Stazyk et al. , , Moldovanova, and Frederickson, (2014) , in their article “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity ''says state that what  sustainability is. The authors thinks that sustainability reflects an increasing awareness that existing human needs and expectations need to be balanced against the immediate and long-term capacity to support ecosystems (make sure you express ideas in your own words). Sustainability is not a new concept. 2500 years ago, the citizens of Athens promised to leave the city better for future generations. The definition of sustainable development sworn by the Brundtland Commission and the Athenians is similar due to the fact that  they  are both concerned about future generations. The authors claims that current generations have responsibilities toward future generations abound. Unfortunately, people’s  obligations to future generations are difficult to be balanced against current needs and expectations. Ecology is an important concept in sustainability because environmental and natural resources should be shared with future generations in sustainability (do not repeat the same idea. The economy is processed in terms of sustainability. The idea of ​​intergenerational sustainability in the economy is based on the idea that “the current generation does not fulfill social and public responsibility to protect“ environmental assets amacıyla in order to generate income for future generations (Brätland, 2006, p. 13) do not cut copy paste ideas from the original text, rewrite the ideas in your own words. There are two models of economic sustainability. According to the first model Heal (1998), the government should be concerned with sustainability, while the second model Brätland advocates private property. According to the author; social sustainability is generally defined as a system that not only meets the needs of existing members, but also supports the ability of future generations to maintain a healthy society.  A well-known theory, the tragedy of the commons, focuses on this issue. This tragedy shows that sustainable social interaction and cooperation does not seem realistic under conditions of scarcity.  There is a significant improvement in the prospects of future generations about sustainability because, regardless of the current weaknesses, there is a case where their interests are explicitly accepted as an obligation. People should adopt and implement policies that support intergenerational justice. (rewrite the ideas in your own words).

In summaries, you need to express your ideas in your own words.

Best,
MET

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Berk Sürmen / Arın Aydoğan: “In the article Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity” by Stazyk et al. (2014) the writers discuss the term sustainability throughout history and today to understand intergenerational equity. They illustrate situations from the history itself such as the Athenian city and how the society worked together to achieve sustainability. The writers take on the term on three major topics such as economic, social and environmental. With social equity they explain what societies should do to create and live in a greater community for all generations. On the other hand, they claim that the society should work together to accomplish a greater economy. Also the writers suggest people to protect the environment for future generations. To conclude Stazyk et al make it clear that with people focusing on these three topics we can achieve sustainability.  

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Berk Sürmen / Arın Aydoğan: “In the article Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity” by Stazyk et al. (2014) the writers discuss the term sustainability throughout history and today to understand intergenerational equity. They illustrate situations from the history itself such as the Athenian city and how the society worked together to achieve sustainability. The writers take on the term on three major topics such as economic, social and environmental. With social equity they explain what societies should do to create and live in a greater community for all generations. On the other hand, they claim that the society should work together to accomplish a greater economy. Also the writers suggest people to protect the environment for future generations. To conclude Stazyk et al make it clear that with people focusing on these three topics we can achieve sustainability.  

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“In the article Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity” by Stazyk et al. (2014) the writers discuss the term sustainability throughout history and today to understand intergenerational equity. They illustrate situations from the history itself such as the Athenian city and how the society worked together to achieve sustainability. The writers take on the term on three major topics such as economic, social and environmental. With social equity they explain what societies should do to create and live in a greater community for all generations. On the other hand, they claim that the society should work together to accomplish a greater economy. Also the writers suggest people to protect the environment for future generations. To conclude Stazyk et al make it clear that with people focusing on these three topics we can achieve sustainability.

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Cavit CICEK :                             In the article “Sustainability, Intergenerational Social Equity” by Stazyk et al (2014) the authors argue that sustainability is associated with the environmental movement and following the logic of intergenerational social equity, and we should seek to adopt and implement policies that support intergenerational fairness.

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Cavit CICEK :                             In the article “Sustainability, Intergenerational Social Equity” by Stazyk et al (2014) the authors argue that sustainability is associated with the environmental movement and following the logic of intergenerational social equity, and we should seek to adopt and implement policies that support intergenerational fairness.

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Nadia Ahmed Uqaili:                In the article, “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity”, by Stayak et al (2014) discuss the meanings and ways of achieving sustainability and intergenerational fairness

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Nadia Ahmed Uqaili:                In the article, “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity”, by Stayak et al (2014) discuss the meanings and ways of achieving sustainability and intergenerational fairness

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Nurlan                  “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity” by Stazyk et al(2014) , is mainly discussing about the sustainability and intergenerational equity of presence and future                  

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Nurlan                  “Sustainability and Intergenerational Social Equity” by Stazyk et al(2014) , is mainly discussing about the sustainability and intergenerational equity of presence and future                  

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Tarık and Cem:                          In the article ‘’Sustainability and intergenerational social equity’’ by Stayzk et al. (2014)

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Tarık and Cem:                          In the article ‘’Sustainability and intergenerational social equity’’ by Stayzk et al. (2014)