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your story is pretty good

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You all used terrifying imagery in your tales. - Ms. Hall

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Harrison's story has so many humorous components including amazing descriptions, funny images, and more. Definitely check it out!!

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THIS WAS SOOSOSOSOOSOSOSOSOO GOOD!! The first few paragraphs were REALLY interesting and made me want to read it even more. ALSOO I really like that it was transcribed from an audio recording because it's super creative

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OMG THAT WAS SUPER ULTRA AWSOMEAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS JUST RIGHT CREEPEY WOWOOWOWOOWOW

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Good job Seanie boy you made nice character names

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Good job Seanie boy you made nice character names

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I really like your spooky story, Luther! I liked how creepy it was and thought it was especially funny when they started doing the Thriller dance.

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Tui made an amazing story with a great cliffhanger, and just a really funny but at the same time spooky!

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I really like the images and the cliffhanger ending

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King Billeresticanington would be so proud because of course he always wins

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I loved that it was so detailed!

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YOUR SPOOKY STORY IS AMAZING!! I love love love love love love love love love love love the plot AND ALSOoooo you used super good words (the werezombie winding up to pounce, the description of the sky at the end) AND I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Good job Mira! But you don't need to write a sequel. Uno, Dos, and Tres won't be alive for much longer...

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I like how you described all the characters and explained stuff that had happened in Scarlett's life before going into the story!!!! IT'S SUPER GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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or else I will see you soon

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Good job Grace! That's what my loyal follower KENZIE said... But, Tsk, tsk, puppies stealing my fame with their "cuteness"

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I love how you used your dog and how the mansion was 387 steps!

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Your story was a spooky and awesome story I love all of the part where the monsters were and how I was king in your story

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Good job Anna your story was good though you need to practice your spelling

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Good job Anna your story was good though you need to practice your spelling

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Nice Clio

It was amazing how you made it so Kira kept getting interupted and the warning sign up front

Love Diya

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I really like your story Kenzie. I think it is really smart and creative.

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I like how the main character throws the doll in the fire it's really funny

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I love your story a pictures.

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I really like the ending and can you PLEASE make a sequel?

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I LOVE THE ALIEN PART AND WHEN THEY SAW THE BIG BUTTON

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I like all the pictures and how the setting seems like it could be real!

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good job Luther! I love how clear you are with your writing and I love your imagery 

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good job Luther! I love how clear you are with your writing and I love your imagery 

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I LOVE TWIX, UNIVERSAL, AND YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I love the cliffhanger!!!

Grace

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I like your story sean :)

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anna you made a good story though you need to work on your spelling

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I LOVE HOW YOU DESCRIBED EVERYTHING!!! Also Eclipse is a really cool character but all the characters are amazing!!!!!!! GOOD JOBB

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Cynthia I love your story. Even though it scared me it. I thought it was really smart when it ended with the boy failing his sister

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its good:) and scary.

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Great Job! I like the part when the aliens arrive and try to take over Area 51

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I really liked your story Harrison

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I really liked the Character names and how the dud has a unicorn head

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Wow your pictures are adorable Grace. How did you come up with this? You added soo much figurative language it's AMAZING.

Love Diya

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I love the setting and KING DYLAN

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I love how you put so much care and imagination into your story

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everyone did a good job

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I like the part when the Hedge Hogs try to defeat Billy ,but they will be back next Halloween and will come prepared

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I love your pictures !!! good job

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I really liked the minions in your story :)

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Clio I liked how you added a sister

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KENZIE thinks it's good again *eye roll*

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KENZIE thinks it's good again *eye roll*

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I would be soooooo much scarier than a uh what was that "soompie wherewoof"? But good job Naia I guess...

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That dog is so cute!

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I liked it

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I love how there was a person stalking a nother and your writing is on a nother level

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I like the name Dude-iloo, also the plot was really creative!!! I like that it turned out to be a dream and then the main character saw the werewolf

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Your topic is so creative and I wish I had thought of it.

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I like how The Abandoned Universal Studios and how it incorporated some of the stuff you had in your amazing ghost poem

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I really loved how detailed you described the doll (Lacy) that kept following the young girl (Lucy)!

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TTTTTTTTTTTTTUUUUUUUUUUUIIIIIIIII I loved everything in your story :) :):) :):):):)

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:0 who's noboo?is he irl

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I love Johny and how he only has one friend

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Max I liked all the pictures you added

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I like how it's told from Dude-iloo's POV this time and Parker's is from Bro-boat's POV and it's really funny!!!! Also Manly-man is the best character (in my opinion obviously)

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The horrorrrrrr! But children like KENZIE and you would be horrified! I'll give you some of my pink crystal candy though Hunter...

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I love how your story is long

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I love the 2 dudes that are twins and they are in love with twix bars

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it is nice

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I like how the people want to dress up as the minions and how you used a picture of the real minions,but be aware because one of these days the werewolf and the minions are going to join forces and take over the whole store

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I love your pictures, story, and your font.

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I like your story, Kenzie. I'm sure that King Billeresticanington VIII will be impressed.