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What made you think of oysters?

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I would just say that I did understand a good amount , but in some areas I need some clarification because I’m quite uneducated in this field. But overall, nice structure and amazing presentation. 👏

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Is there only one species of oysters?

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Very good job, presentation was very informative. This projects seems like a lot of work and a little far fetched for a high school student, but if you are confident stick with it.

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The presentation was well organized and follow able I feel. I sometimes get lost on the scientific information because of my lack of knowledge but he seemed to explain it well with detailed slides. Their methods are clear and concise as well he is using qpcr which is very expensive. No questions really. Explain more science information. I would definitely think about a backup plan if you have time.

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What will you do after you test the oysters? How will it be used towards the help of other studies?

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Your presentation was really concise and informative. I think as far as feasibility goes, it would be safe to have a backup plan in case you can’t conduct your experiment. Also, are there any other data analysis methods other than qPCR that would deem the same results?

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What type of oysters are you choosing? And why?

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What type of oysters are you choosing? And why?

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What will you do if you can reach a lab?

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Very interesting. Also, very easy to understand for a beginner that know little about AD. What if the experiment is not feasible? Do you have backup plans? Will the independent be what you feed them?

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It was very easy to follow nice organization to make the most out of your project

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Put bullet points instead of paragraphs

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How will u measure different behaviors? What classifies as abnormal compared to normal?

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I know flies are your only option for the experiment but would the vitamins working on flies with Alzheimer’s really transfer or correlate to a human with Alzheimer’s?

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Love the project and since we talked about your project there has been made progress. I think you have a lot of information but I would try to organize it better as I struggle with the same issue but I still understood the concept of what your doing.

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Your presentation was really informative and clear. Something you could  look into a bit more is your data analysis method. What will you be using to synthesize the data? Also, what’s your assay?

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Very detailed for not having done much research. I think you project will develop well

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Your presentation was clear, but the slides itself could be better organized. How will you analyze your data if it turns out to be feasible?

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Very easy to understand and to relate to. Good tone and mood. But a tip is to think before you say something, because I see a good amount of colloquialism through your presentation. But overall, great job! 👍

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I think your alignment needs some more explanation. Also, you said you had a lot of variables so maybe you should explain some of the limitations or difficulties you have from that. Also I thought ms burkowitz was your mentor? Feasibility wise, it seems that you don’t really have something in mind to get your data yet, so work on that as well.

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It’s good that you have a direction, but a deeper understanding of your method and mathematical equations would greatly help your project advance.

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I really liked your interest and enthusiasm toward your project. It was easy to follow and understand. It is clear you have a direction but I would dig a bit deeper into some specifics.

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Your project seems really interesting! I would like to know what areas you are targeting specifically though. Are you comparing data from different cities or comparing more rural areas to cities? Also I would love to know more about how pollution and other effects caused by traffic jams can be decreased, and data proving it. Great job overall!

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I think your project is really interesting. One thing I would recommend is to maybe expand a little more on the variables you are working with.

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What’s the most ideal amount of participants? What if the participants had a negative/traumatic experience with AI? Would it impact the results? How can you prevent bias? But good job! Very cool topic! 👍

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- How to account for bias?
- Large sampling size
- DO THE PANDAS LICKING KITTEND VIDEO
- Sampling errors (voluntary response bias)
-Formula for outliers 1.5* IQR?

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It was clear how knowledgeable and informational you were regarding your project. The specific and direction of the project was really solid and noticeable. For some feedback, I would try to be less monotone and more more powerful when presenting.

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You should explain your analysis and the actual content of your videos. Additionally, explain how you will get the subjects without getting biased results, (example, voluntary response bias from doing it online). Also be careful with the wording of your questions in order to make sure there’s no bias from that.

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Great idea but why do you have to bank on a mentor that much? Can’t you research why the equation is or isn’t effective on your own?

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- Lead sinkers are being lost
- What resin are you using?
- Is there a reason for choosing epoxy resin you may want to emphasize that because there are different types of resin
- what makes it an accurate representation of digestion?
Your presentation was engaging

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Great idea but was epoxy resin the first thing that you came up with? Did you think of replacing lead with another heavy and non toxic material before the resin coating idea?

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This was very thorough, the presentation could use some images as well. However what made you decide to use epoxy resin? I think you need to display more reasoning behind this point. Also, I know this is from a study you referenced, but maybe mention a bit more about why rock tumblers are a good model for the digestive system, bc at first thought I thought it would only mimic the stomach at most.

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What water are you experimenting on? Is it a very feasible project? I’m very interested in seeing where your project is going! 👍

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Your project is super interesting and I like how well it was thought out. But I would love to know more about the tests you’re doing. Maybe list specific details about each test, so the audience understands the tests more.

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I like how clear and precise your project is. However, how come you focused on epoxy resin? I like how impactful and meaningful your project can be.

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I think your presentation was really easy to follow, and also a very interesting topic that has a clear gap of research. Is there another type of resin other than epoxy resin that wouldn’t have adverse effects?

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Will the use of epoxy be more cost effective in terms of buying all the epoxy to use on the sinkers, or would designing new sinkers in general be a better value?

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I don’t get the connection between flies and mice,. You are using 40hz based upon the mice study, but how do you know it applies with such a biological difference? Your background is very solid. Maybe I just missed this, but I don’t understand why the hertz are a very important factor for AD. I get that it effects it, but why choose hertz over other factors? Very throughout methods as well though, accounting for bias and even species, so good job.

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I like your project very creative but how are fruit flies comparable to humans and mice? If you talked about this a little more your project would greatly improve as this was the only gray area I saw in your project.

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I found your presentation really engaging. Also it was clear how knowledgeable you were regarding your topic. I would suggest to try to sum up your project in a more clear and consist way, especially your methodology and gap.

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Very thorough but I would definitely recommend putting into lay mens terms when presenting at wherever we present because it is a complicated topic but research was very thorough and I was a little confused but I think I got that gist of it. It wouldn’t hurt to define a few words in the beginning

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Your information and research was clearly very thorough. I might have missed this part, but if you didn’t, you should write about how flies are similar to humans just so there is more clarity.

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Has there been a proven connection between that of human brains and that of flies?

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You did really good. The project was very detailed. I would recommend talking more about the correlation between mice, flies, and humans.

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Great project but do you have any plans on how to beat the clock? If the time is working against you is there any way to speed up your processes so that you can get everything done in time?

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Will you have anyone help you out with the timing issu?

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Organization and presentation and content was just very engaging and well emerged with detail. You clearly know a significant amount about your project. My main concern was the time table as you mentioned because also not just coming in every day but how long does the overall experiment take to finish? Will you have enough time to analyze your data? Also for the procedures wise I see you have been working with Mr. Shanker have you considered him a possible mentor?

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You did a great job explaining your project and it was clear how knowledgeable you were regarding it. As a suggestion, I would focus on the significance of the study and why it is important. Also, how will you counter the clock?

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The presentation was very specific and easy to look through. I got a good gist of it, but there are certain areas I don’t understand much of yet. I would recommend to describe it in a simpler way or it just I didn’t hear everything. Overall, good job!!! 👍

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You did very well on the presentation it was well in-depth but the only issue I had was with the value, how exactly would the phages help with bacteria that is becoming more resistant?

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Basically the same feedback as what I gave on your inquiry proposal: Say that temperature does help fight back against e coli, Can temperature be easily changed during bacteria phage  therapy? I think you should explain more in depth as to how your results can apply to practical therapy. Additionally, since temperature is the factor, basis, of your study, maybe you should talk a bit more in depth about the study that led you to choose temperature, as I didn’t get a good idea as to why temperature is the most important factor to look at.

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The presentation had a lot of information and I got lost in some of it. Maybe including some definitions or examples throughout your presentation would help.

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Price seems like a big concern here as well as the size of the build. Any ideas on how to lower the price? Overall great project though.

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Great project I see where you are going with your design but what have you learned about solar panels? Have you gotten an estimate of how much energy is needed to how much energy a solar panel can generate?

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I did not quite understand your research. I recommend you structure your presentation more clear. Also, I recommend be less hesitant because from the back, it’s a little harder to hear more clearly. Some questions are how will you conduct this experiment?, what measurement are you going to use?, and is it very feasible? Great job 👍.

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Your presentation was really well structured, but I’m a little bit confused on what kind of data you will be collecting. Are you just looking at the appearance? Also how are you analyzing that data?

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I see that you’ve thought of weight and efficiency, but have you considered price yet? Additionally, you didn’t really describe how you’re going to measure the mailliard reaction, the browning (a big factor for appeal). Additionally I didn’t see much about the actual electrical design. Nor analysis.

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Your hypothesis mentions the cooking efficiency of your electric grill concept but you don’t go back to that issue. Is it part of your plan to actually use the grill or are you trying to just make a small scale solar charged battery. How will you convert the solar energy into heat energy.

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Your project is very interesting and it could be very beneficial to low income areas but how would you test if it works, what are you collecting?

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Very clear explanation on how melanin works as an agent to remove heavy metals from water. Why does heat need to be regulated?

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Very thorough, just say what you said to said to me about melanin having a lot more carbonyl groups and therefore being more efficient

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It had a nice flow, but in some of the terms, I did not really get. Can sink water from the school be compared to larger areas of contaminated water? Also, are you targeting larger areas of water or small ones? Great Job! 👍

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The way you described your project and how you got there really helped understanding and clarifying the rest of your project. As lead is the most common heavy metal found, how will you test for other heavy metals, if it is a different process?

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It was a very good presentation however I think it was kinda unclear as to why you chose melanin. How does the melanin get in the water?

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What’s your time table for building this machine? And what time in your day can you find to build this machine? This seems like a lengthy build