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Revising & Editing Tips for Narrative Writing Pieces:

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Revising & Editing Tips for Narrative Writing Pieces:

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Revising: Adding details to describe character's actions, thoughts, and feelings. Using powerful words to create exciting mental images for the reader.

Editing/Proofreading: Continue to help your child use proper capitals, punctuation, indentation (paragraphs), quotation marks to signal character dialogue, and sound out words as carefully as possible for proper spelling.

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To give your child additional support at home, please refer to the Revising, Editing, and Proofreading guides/ checklists located in our "Informational Writing" Padlet (the first Padlet of the year).

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Student writing pieces will be evaluated based upon the aspects in this rubric.

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In order to help students develop their own narrative stories, the teachers created this model. We used this model to assist students with each step of the drafting process.

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This is the anchor text that we used to model the focus of this narrative piece. After reading this text, teachers explained that students would be creating their own narrative story to include a farm animal character with a problem. In order to solve his or her problem, the farm animal must receive assistance from another "friend" animal on the farm.

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This is the graphic organizer we are using to help students organize the parts of their narrative piece. Students can reference this model to ensure that their writing includes the required elements.