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Hello Patrick and Ralph,

I wish I could go to Queenstown  looks like you had an amazing time!  Thanks for showing a map so we could see how far Queenstown is that was very helpful. I like the way you made the slides move too.

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Hi Patrick and Ralph,

I liked the additional information that you added, it was amazing, and me as the reader was really intrigued and wanted to keep reading more! :-}

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Hi Patrick and Ralph,
I really liked how you added  interesting information and how you put the maps in. It sounded like you had a lot of fun skiing and snowboarding!

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Hey Patrick and Ralph!
I liked how you said what you had to bring and where you went first.  Great job including the photos as well.

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Hi Patrick and Ralph,

I really like how you placed everything out and I like the photos because I didn't know were half the thing were that you went to.

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Hi Patrick & Ralph,

I really liked your DLO that you used to show us what happened on your trip; also I liked how specific you were with telling us what you did and where you went.

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Hi Patrick and Ralph,

I really liked how long it was and how much you explained what you did. This is really well laid out.

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Hi Patrick and Ralph,

Your blog post is really good. You show the photos of where you went, and the arrows of the spacific place.It was good with the transishoins it really fit the theme.

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Hi Patrick & Ralph,

I really liked the way you set out this presentation, it was really interesting. Also I really liked the images and the arrows!

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I Liked it because  it had detail a expretion.   Patrick , Ralph.

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Hi Patrick & Ralph, I really liked how you used detail and information.

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I Liked that you added facts,photos,and proof of what Patrick/Ralph) did.Good job.

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Hi Patrick & Ralph, I like all the information and photos about the places you have been to.

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Hi Patrick & Ralph,
I liked your slide because if you went to Queenstown you would have an idea what it has to offer and where to go.

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Hi Patrick and Ralph,

It is a really good post because nobody else has done anything like that. I t's something different and has a lot of information. You were really specific. Also the images made it better.

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Patrick and Ralph, it looks like you had fun going to Queenstown, going skiing/snowboarding, messing around with G-forces and staying in Arrowtown.

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Hi Patrick & Ralph!
This post sounds like you had an amazing time! I really like the way you transitioned your slides, they made the post even more interesting. I like that you added lots of photos.

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Hi Patrick & Ralph, this is a brilliant presentation; I love your stunning use of images and transitions!

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Hey Patrick and Ralph
What I thought was Outstanding Is that, you thought all of this out. Also what I liked overall is that you have shown specific places and sports. I think you need to work
on adding more information, not just working on one sentence. I liked you added what kind of sports and rides.

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I like the way you have added interesting information about your trip, and how you added pictures to keep us intrigued.

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Hi Patrick and Ralph,

It sounds like you had lots of fun in Queenstown! You were very specific about where you went and what you got up to in Queenstown. I like how you added pictures to keep us interested in what you were doing in Queenstown. I hope you had a good time while you were away.

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It was really cool how you put lots of pictures so that it wasn't just words.

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Hi Patrick & Ralph,
I like how you used transitions on your slide. Also how much your theme fitted your slide and how you used the map in you slide to show your readers where you went.

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I really liked how well you set out the slide show. It looks amazing and I love how much detail you added.

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I like how you specifically told us where queenstown was, so when people see the post, they know where queenstown is.

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Hi Patrick & Ralph,

I really enjoyed all of the transitions when moved from slide to slide.

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Dear Patrick and Ralph,

Wow that is a big trip! I like how you really showed me where you went in Queenstown and what specifically you went to in Queenstown. That slide was very good as well.

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Patrick & Ralph's Blog Post about their recent trip to Queenstown. Patrick & Ralph go to Christ the King School in Auckland and are one of our blogging schools we love to share our learning with.

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Patrick & Ralph's Blog Post about their recent trip to Queenstown. Patrick & Ralph go to Christ the King School in Auckland and are one of our blogging schools we love to share our learning with.

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http://ctkashe.blogspot.co.nz/2016/09/patrick-and-ralphs-trip-to-queenstown.html