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Brackets are when some one is speaking you use brackets in a play script for an example:he gave me a bonus (500).

Rating 5/10.      Linking Hpl because I am referring to the last lesson

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Parentheses are use to add more information to a sentence and the parentheses are put in the brackets. If you remove the parentheses in the sentence the sentence will still make sense because the parentheses are just used to add more information to a sentence.
HPL
I have used linking because I have used my previous knowledge about parentheses.
Rate : 6/10

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They add more information
Linking hpl level=4 because I only remember 1 thing about them,if they were 2-3 things it would be 5 rating

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Parenthesis: you use it for adding n

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Parenthesis helps to add more information about a topic. In a play script parenthesis are used to add stage directions.

Linking HPL: 4/5

I rated 4/5 because I have used linking by connecting what I have learnt in the last lesson.

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So parenthesis are like brackets  and parentheses could be like saying a action but in a word kind of form

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Parentheses is like a sentance in () or “” example: he returned home (after 8 hours of school)

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Parenthesis is form of punctuation to add more information in scripts,paragraphs and more.Parenthesis can be found being used in play scripts to show what the character is doing or their current emotions.

I have used linking and analysing.
Linking:I have explained where you can find parenthesis.
Analysing:I have told the correct use of parenthesis.

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Parenthesis are brackets that you add extra information in.So you wright one bracket then write the sentence you want to wright then put another bracket .
Linking=6/10
I said 4 because I think I remembered and recapped what we learned about parenthesis and because I feel like I did a good job for the beginning of the lesson.

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I know that the parenthesis are used in play scipts because they will know what they are doing and they add extra detail and information.

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parenthesis are brackets and we use brackets in a play script so that we can tell some information in them as they can help the performer to have a better line.

Rating for using the HPL contributes 1-5:

I have used linking because I have linked parenthesis from my previous lessons.

Rating of my HPL contribution:
I rate myself 4

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Parentheses are words or phrases that are marked of by brackets,commas and dashes

Rate:4⭐️Practice HPL

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HPL:I used linking because I linked my example to dubai

Parenthesis

Another word for Parenthesis is simply :brackets
We use them to specify somthing or add details for example :
We are going to burj khalifa(also known as burj dubai).

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The () is using for relative clause or describing aperson felling or what they are doing or action

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fateh parentheses are known is non chronological report and is 2 and extra information I rate me 4

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fateh parentheses are known is non chronological report and is 2 and extra information I rate me 4

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I think we use them to separate sentences and to give more information.

Rating 3/5   Linking HPL

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parenthesis is used to give ore information brackets could be left out but it just gives more information about the text if the writer

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Time in () for example and I think places as well.
(After 20 minutes)
(School)
HPL: Linking

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Parenthesis used to separate words that are similar to the topic example- our teacher(who loves science)whose name is ms Lakshmi.

My HPL linking is 4 because I use most of the past HPL linking but not all of them.

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parentisis or brackets in a play script help further explain what is really going on or a narrator explaining

linking 4/5

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It is because to show what emotion the character is doing in the act while speaking.

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The Parenthesis is an important part of a play script for the actors because the parenthesis show the stage directions. Stage Directions are the actions that the actors have to do.

HPL Linking : 4/5

I have used linking by connecting what parenthesis in a play script are and the stage directions for the actors and I came up with my answer.

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Parenthesis is important because the actors would just say their line and they don’t know what to do example:(quickly gets out of the room)where is it ?
If there were no parenthesis the actor would just say where is it ? But it will not make sense .
Linking =4/5
I used my past knowledge and I remembered and recapped what we learnt about parenthesis.

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parenthesis are important because they contain stage directions and they stage direcions tell the actors how to act and brackets also tell the actor not to say how they are supposed to feel

i have used meta thinking to show how parenthesis is a important part of a play script

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It’s important because the actors would just say there line but the parenthesis shows that you need to refer to the writing in brackets

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Parentheses are important because they tell how the actors are acting and feeling example: Gorge (angrily threw his book across the room)

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Parenthesis is important in a play script as it tells the actor what their characters stage directions,emotions and how they have to say their lines.

HPL:I have used linking because I have used my previous knowledge.

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Parenthesis is important for actors because they will understand what to do and if there was no brackets they will not understand.

3/5 Linking.

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Parenthesis is important in a playscript because it tells the actor how you should act on that sentence just like a stage direction. But if that wasn't there then the play would not have some reactions and it would be people just talking their lines.

HPL Skill:
I have used linking in in this challenge because I have linked my learning of playscripts and parenthesis

Rating: 5

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Because the parentheses help the actor with the stage direction and the how they should act and information in the play script.
HPL : Linking.

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I agree with Miss.L because  play script A has used parenthesis at the wrong place and has less lines, but play script B has included a good amount of lines and has used parenthesis at the places which needed to include parenthesis.Parenthesis are used to show the stage directions,emotions or how their character is supposed to say their lines.

I think I have demonstrated linking by using my knowledge from parenthesis for this task.
I rate myself 5.

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It adds some extra information and firm stage directions.
HPL:linking
Rate:4 because I made it quite clear but I could've added more info.

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It shows how they should act

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Parenthesis is important because without it the actors and actresses won’t know want to do for Example: (Smiles) I would have cleaned the floor.

HPL USED Linking= 5

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Parenthesis (brackets) are important because they tell the actor the stage directions and they also tell them how to say the line example:(Angrily)I will not talk any more. Another example: (Leo picks up the robot confused)”What is this doing here?”

Hpl leve linking level=5 Because I linked back to the beginning of the lesson

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To show emotions  and
How he should act. Hpl level linking 3 I did not really link back to the lesson

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I agree with Miss Lakshmi because B has used the parenthesis for the stage directions when A has used parenthesis for the dialogues.

HPL Analysing : 4/5

I have used Analysing to Analyse which play script has used the Parenthesis correctly.

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Ms.Lakshmi is correct because  the brackets are put where the actor is doing something or like showing a facial expression so the actor knows what to do .
Analyzing =4/5
I used analyzing to analyze who used parenthesis better.

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parenthesis gives actors directions of how to act the emotion example Mr gamfield: (desperately) "come on everyone you are being hard on me" so desperately is the parenthesis

realizing 5/5

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Parenthesis  helps the actors to explain how to say and act

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A parenthesis helps the actors to explain how to say a diolouge or act a scene

5stars as it is how parenthesis work in a play script and I have used linking to link it to a play script

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a bracket is used in a play script when you are doing the stage directions.

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Miss.L is right because her the option B placed proper bracket in the proper area unlike A.

4 out of 5 because I used most of my past knowledge here but not all of it

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because it show more information about the actor or the feelings of the actor 5/5

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To Show some emotions

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I think that Ms lakshmi is correct because she used it to show what the characters are not saying but doing .Ms Jessica's is just random brackets.

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Ms. Lakshmi is correct because miss has had many more information than miss Jessica

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To act out the words for the bracket s for example:when someone said to act out like a lion you have to act like the lion

Rating:5 level
Hpl=linking

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fateh The play script is inportant for da actor because then without it the actor won't no what 2 say

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fateh The play script is inportant for da actor because then without it the actor won't no what 2 say

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I agree with Miss.L because the actors shouldn’t say these thing it’s just to help the actor act and how does the actor say something  example : firmly or sternly. But Miss Jessica didn’t put these in brackets in the correct place. So, Miss.L is correct.

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agree with Ms L because she put the parenthesis in the right order and she used lots of features

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Miss Lakshmi is correct because it doesn’t make any sense when you put brackets on ha ha ha or narrator or even I’m fast because you can only put parentheses on how a actor is acting or how there feeling on a play script example:Amiy (happly walked to school)
Rate:4⭐️ Because I think I have understood parentheses in a play script well enough 😊
HPL:thinking skill because I thinking on where to put parentheses on a play script

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i would say that ​play script b has used parenthesis more effectively because they have used parenthesis in all of the stage directions and i rate it a 5/5

play script b has used parenthesis in the dialogue of the characters
and i rate it a 2/5.    i think i used my demonstration 4/5 i think i have used meta thinking to think about which play script was good

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I agree with Miss.L
As she used the parenthesis when the text is explaining how to act but miss Jessica has no pattern in her parenthesis

Analising what is wrong and right

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Play script a has used the parenthesis more ofecctive so I will give it 4/5
Playscipt b did not use the paranthisis effectively so I will give it 0/5

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Parenthesis is important because the actors who is playing the script would just say their line and they don’t know what to do.

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I agree with miss L. because her script was using brackets properly because it made more sense and the brackets were not put in the script randomly.
Hpl linking level=5 because I linked back to what we learnt.

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Parenthisis is important because if you don’t add any brackets the people wouldn’t how to perform the script

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I agree with miss lakshmi as scriptB is correct as it uses brackets in the right place
analizing 3/5

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Mrs Lakshmi was better because she placed the brackets correctly

I used analising
4/5
Because i analised which  script Is better

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Mr. Gamfield  : ( sits down to talk to gentlemen) I need that boy to do floor polishing.
Mr. Limbskin : ( not persuaded) I do not need you to take him from me.
Mr. Gamfield : ( whispered to man) Can you help me persuade him?

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I agree with miss lakshmi because  script b used it properly and script b uses brackets anywhere is the script hpl linking level 5 because it shows the proper parenthesis

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Mr.Limbkins (whisper ) do you really want him
Man ( sits to talk ) yes he can be my cleaner
Mr.Limbkins ( stands and laughs very hard ) means you can’t do any chores hahahahaha

HPL 3/5

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Man:(looking bored) Fine, we will accept your offer,but we would like 5 shillings to go with it.
Mr.Gamfield:(Joyfully happy)Thank you gentlemen.
Mr.Limbkins:(Looking gloomy)I suppose that is a lot.
Mr.Gamfield: Ok,now can you take me to him.
The Man and Mr Limbkins take him to the Boy

I think I have used the HPL Creating as I have created another scene for the play script.
I rate myself 4/5 because I have used parenthesis but I think I needed to add a bit more.

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BScript better than  A Script
Because  the script B is correct using the parenthesis in the script writing but A script is not correct because they put anywhere but it need to be in the feeling and action of the actor 3/5 hpl

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Mr.Gamfield :(sits down to talk with the gentlemen)I need that boy to do chimney sweeping so is that okay?
Mr.Limbkins:(Not persuaded)I do not need you to take him from me .
Mr.Gamfield:(whispers to man)Can’t you try to persuade him?
Man:I don’t know …I don’t think we will agree.
Mr.Gamfield :Please ,Please ,Please  I need him ,I need that boy.
Man:(annoyed from mr.Gamfield)Fine,fine,fine .I will do it just stop moaning .
Man:Well, sir Limbkins just give him the boy .The boy isn’t doing anything to us.
Mr.Limbkins:(Listens to what the man said )Fine ,he can take him now.
Mr.Gamfield:(Whispers to man)Thank you soo much.
Mr.Gamfield:(happy)Thank you soo much Mr.Limbkins.
Mr.Limbkins:Your welcome
(Mr.Gamfield takes the man and exits to get back with his donkey and the boy )
End
HPL:Hardworking=4/5
I think I was hardworking because I wrote a whole scene using parenthesis correctly but maybe with some mistakes .

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Mr gamfield

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I agree with ms Lakshmi because the parenthisis was put in the right place of the script

Level 3hpl thinking

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Parenthesis is important because it helps the actors understand what do.

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I chose b because the parentheses are in the correct place and it not because it’s long it because it interesting and peeling to the reader

Level 4 Hpl linking

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I agree with miss Lakshmi because script A parenthesis is wrong for example from script A: (narrator) so the two friends agreed to race to the meadow. They lined up at the nearby tree.
HPL: linking
Because, I showed on of the wrong sentence from script a.
4/5

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I agree with miss.L because In B the extra info and stage directions are in brackets

HPL skill:linking
3/5 because my sentance was very
short

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I agree with miss. L because parenthesis are used for stage directions or extra information.
HPL: linking
I rate myself:3

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A script than better b 5/5

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They are important because they tell the actors what to to or the stage direction
HPL:linking 4/5
Because I liked with passed learning

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Ms:L because she put the braket

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I agree with miss L because A is not using it correctly but B is correct

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Mr.gamfield (talking to the other gentleman) you need chimney sweeper is it okay?
Mr limbkins: im not agree until its a boy going to do it
man: boys as been killed in the the chimney
mr limbkins: but i need to clean my chimney and the others
mr.gamfield: ok im going to give you a boy to be a chimney sweeper is that a deal?
mr limbkins: deal!
hpl 3/5

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Mr. Limbkins:(Starting to get annoyed and devastated with arguing with Mr.Gamfield)I wont say one more word,either three ten or you don’t get him.
Mr. Gamfield:(Starting to cry)Fine then I will take him for three ten
(The play ends)

Hpl linking lvl:5 because I linked back to previous learning

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Mr gamefield: please give me the descion I haven’t got all day for u to nag at me all the time please I don’t want to be rude.

Man:(Nervous)My goodness are you serious i dont want another lecture you have the last chance