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1) The plot is very thought through, its captivating.

2) i like the main character's persona as it seems as if you get to see many sides of his personality, from being a well educated individual to a man that has quite possible lost his mind, it will be interesting to see how we get to see this change.

3) I would change the name of the film as it does not portray the genre is really is, maybe possession, or something like that just an idea.

4) the old women could also been seen as crazy, as seen in the horror film Ouija the old lady is seen as crazy covering for the evil spirit. Men could also be seen as stubborn, for example the assistant may not believe in ghosts and evil spirits until something happens, again as seen on the Evil Dead, the main character persistently would not believe a demon possessed his sister in till a paranormal event happened to him.

5) Jump scares are effective as it feeds suspense, which makes the film less predictable and more interesting.

6) i would defiantly see this in cinema, its a unique story in which just by a plot you can imagine the film.

7) maybe Angelia, Alice, Ursula, Meredith, Hagatha ? i dont know

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1. The thing I love most about the plot is it's circular narrative. I think this makes it creepier and more appealing to the target audience.

2. I do like the main character's persona as it reminds me of Frankenstein's obsession over the monster. This is a very clever ode to a traditional horror influence.

3. I'm not so sure about the name. Perhaps something like Trapped? or something playing on the circular narrative you have created.

4. I think the conventions are good. You have enough to make it clear that it's a horror film but you have also created an original narrative. The conventions should stay the same - don't add any more.

5. Jump scares are very important in my opinion but only use a couple of times otherwise the audience begin to expect them and they don't end up doing what they're supposed to.

6. I would definitely watch this film in the cinema.

7. I think for the name of the spirit-being should be something playing on her youth. Perhaps something like Alice or Maria? They're not really that scary though. I suppose Alice could be pretty creepy if you get something whispering it like a ghost.

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I would change the name because it's to generic, I do not know what I would change it to.

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Yeah because he is very conventional

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Yes because it's very different

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Yes, the plot is very intriguing and also different from most other plots.

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6. Now you have read the plot would you see this film in the cinema?

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6. Now you have read the plot would you see this film in the cinema?

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7. I am considering a name change for the main antagonist "Tabitha Rosemary", I think it could be scarier do you have any suggestions?  

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7. I am considering a name change for the main antagonist "Tabitha Rosemary", I think it could be scarier do you have any suggestions?  

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5. How effective are jump scares, do you think they are an important technique or not 

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5. How effective are jump scares, do you think they are an important technique or not 

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4. Do you think I could include any more
conventions of horror? Please specify. 

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4. Do you think I could include any more
conventions of horror? Please specify. 

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Those I have used include:

·  Old person is represented as feeble and weak

·  Men are represented as capable and brave

·  The third point is reversed when one of the male protagonist dies. The female antagonist become the powerful one.

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3.The film will be called “Tabitha”. Do you think
this is appropriate now you have read the plot, would you change it? What would
you change it to? 

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3.The film will be called “Tabitha”. Do you think
this is appropriate now you have read the plot, would you change it? What would
you change it to? 

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Please read the pitch on my blog  before answering this its the sixth one down and bright blue. This is the link if you have not read pitch   

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Please read the pitch on my blog  before answering this its the sixth one down and bright blue. This is the link if you have not read pitch   

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http://oscarharrisona2.blogspot.co.uk/p/planning.html

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2. Do you like the character’s persona? If so what
do you like about them?

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2. Do you like the character’s persona? If so what
do you like about them?

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To answer the question double click and write in the box. Then click on the page and drag the answer under the question. 

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To answer the question double click and write in the box. Then click on the page and drag the answer under the question. 

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1. Do you like the plot. if yes please specify. 

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1. Do you like the plot. if yes please specify. 