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i sat on the couch not very still though (because i have adhd) i laid down and got pretty sleepy, about 13 minutes later mother came
upstairs ''maybe she came up here to make some coffee.." i thought to myself. she looked at me, it made me quite nervous. she walked toward me and held up a tiny cup to my face "drink it." she said. i sat up and drank it, "whats this for?" i asked. there was no answer.. i took it as she was giving me the silent treatment for some odd reason. she went to make coffee just like i thought. i got up from the couch and walked toward mother, ''whats the pink stuff for?" " its to help your tooth to stop hurting." she explained. "oh.. ...okay" i replied. mother started to make tuna fish, she walked over to the cabnet and snatched out some crackers. after making the tuna fish and crackers she rushed downstairs and slamed the door shut.thats the last thing i remeber before i driffed off to sleep. (6 days later.) mother had relised that the tooth needed to be removed from my mouth because my grown up tooth was trying to come out!  i was nervous but two days later she pulled my tooth. it hurt big time. i washed my mouth out with salt water. it tasted very very bad. i drank some juice to take away the bad taste. ( 6 days later.) another tooth was loose i was wiggling it a lot then... bam!!! it came out. (the end)

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one day i was waking in to school
i was so nevis to meet my new techr and frends and it was like i was a fox on a leraning gerny to
lrenane math and siyincs  and all
sorts of things  but i was stil nrvis
to meet them but my tech r didint
she walk up to me and sed i will be
your new techr  for 1rst grade my name is mrs rork wahts your name? and i sed sophie and she sed sophia wat a pritty name i sed thank u  maby meeting pepiol is not to bad the necst day was scary with out my mom but like yesdrday i was  telling my self to be brave sophie so i enterd the classroom
evry one was eating brekfast
i got some brekfast and sat down and then a littl girl came and sat down nekst to me she sed hi my name is lindzy wats your name?
i raplid sophie and then day aftr day
i got betr and betr
then feld day came i was so exsidid
to play al the games on the feld  it will be exsidingthar wor so meny pepol yelling woooo!!!!
i beet thay are having fun
im going to have fun
to!!!,wen we got to our frst game
it was a sack gump frst
misr grifin told us the rules and go!!! and off thay go our tem
won that rond thar wr a lot more
games i missd my daddy so much but i dont know why some of
my famly was coming to feld day
yay:) who colde do the best

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It was a cold night at the end of June. I couldn't wait to .... go outside and roast marshmallows!

My cousin and I started playing hide and seek and said "stop hiding where everyone hides!" The next thing that happened was we spent two hours searching all around the campfire and everywhere! We looked in the outside and notice that he had gone back to his own camper!

WE never even found him, our parents told us!
we did bean boosled i said thats disgosting and spit it out
went to virgina with my family we played around in a camper  we made smores and played hide and seek we hid in closets and under beds and we had and went swimming  and there was a big frog to slide down fishing and caught a snaping turtle it broke my fishing rod and i was drawing and made a lizerd and had fun and left and wanted to go back to virgina

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kart well or some thing  it was so much fun  aftr we did a copol games we got to see the bucit band and our moms and dads got to come my ant and unkll came and mommy we hade lunch to and gifvtts        one was a pezza with a graguwashin hat  and a siriys   of junyiB jones so cool but in the mene time thay left my mom sed byebye i sed byebye evryone sed byebye 

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kart well or some thing  it was so much fun  aftr we did a copol games we got to see the bucit band and our moms and dads got to come my ant and unkll came and mommy we hade lunch to and gifvtts        one was a pezza with a graguwashin hat  and a siriys   of junyiB jones so cool but in the mene time thay left my mom sed byebye i sed byebye evryone sed byebye 

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One time I went to the store with my mom I wanted Pokemon cards but she said no.so we left but the security alarm my mom thought I stole the pokemon cords but it was the

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It was a hot day,I was over my Grandmother's and we could not go to the community pool because it was a big group of people and we did not have enough passes, so my Mom had the idea to go to the river so we pack our floaties and bags with food and make the cooler ready with ice and water and juice and watermelon my Mom order a new Hammack so we got in to the van and we drove over there and the entire place was only for us we were happy we love the water the current and  the sound  the river makes the fishes swimming on the water the weather was perfect also the dog tito enjoy it too was a beautiful day and after we ended to the ice cram shop rita and I ordered a hiuch chocolate ice cream I love summer time.

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it was my favoret sesoin sumer i was at hershey park and i saw this huge roler coster and i was tall anohph to ride it . me and my dad got on . we whent slowly up the roler coster we whent so . fast my dad screamd like a girl and said aaaaaaaahhhhhhhh tnis is crasy fast . it was  so fast that when we got off of it we where disy .then we got to get somthing from the cafa i got some  french frys and chiken
tenders after that we whent on the water park finaly we whent home i fell rihgt asleep .

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I had a sleep over with my bff Aiden.

He had a nintendo switch and a x box the x box had forx 3 and Minecraft.

We had so much fun. I stayed up to 12:00 he stayed up to 1:30.

and he woke up before me and when I came in the living room he was playing Minecraft and I'm like bro its 7:30 I go to bed first and u get up before me. We both laughed

We played together again and his sister came in and played with us.

We got the house way bigger and we got a lot of iron.

I had full iron armor and my friend was mad but we all had a job my job is hunter for food his sister was the raider and my friend was the miner we all were good at it and when he saw me with the full iron armor he got mad but I said I need it I need to get the food.

I will have to fight some mobs that are hard. He finally found a diamond and he used the 1 diamond for a shovel. I'm like bro all that work for that! We both laughed we played a racing game that he was so good at but his sister was better but the father was the best but for my first time at that game I did good. We would have to come over again some time.

The End

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we fed goats, we fed them carrots.we also fed the horses, we fed them the bigger carrots. we picked pumpkins, i got a jar of honey. the goats were loud and the emu was big. we brought the pumpkins home, we will carve them and make them into funny faces. then we went to eat we went to an out door diner. i got chicken it was huge. my cousin got french toast and my mom got a salad.it was a great great day we got to feed animals and eat food with our family it was a good day

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and the we went home aftr     i meete my tchr

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and the we went home aftr     i meete my tchr

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won time wen I traveled to florida and evrey time i ate I threw up and wen i drunk some thing

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One time I went to the store with my mom I wanted Pokemon cards but she said no.so we left but the security alarm my mom thought I stole the pokemon cords but it was just the receipt
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This summer I went to the go-kart track but I had to wait forever to drive because their were a lot of people. The people who worked there controlled how fast the cars went.
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i was at home i was bored but my friend nook't on my door then i jump't do

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February 14... Eli's birthday....
one day. I woke up And it was my birthday. I seen Blue Berry muffins on the table Just for me  I said "WOW that looks so good! next Then I ate pizza with my friends!" It was so good" Eli said. Then I went to sleep. Then... I woke up. BOOM There was food and so much stuff on the table. It was yummy me and my sisters ate it up!  I said "wow"
then... They got me A Ticket to go to sky zone!!! I was super happy we jumped for 1 hour! then I was super tired "I said I need a break" so I went home... and I seen my HUGE CAKE my dad put it all over my face. "I said Dad Lol" then he started to laugh to. I looked so funny! It was super good Me and my aunt and sisters ate it all. then my presents I got Clay,food.toys And more! and from that day. I Still remember it.

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frst game
it was a sack gump frst 
misr grifin told us the rules and go!!! and off thay go our tem
won that rond thar wr a lot more
games i missd my daddy so much but i dont know why some of
my famly was coming to feld day
yay:) who colde do the best 

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My first time riding a  2 wheeler  bike was when I was four almost five years old.

My mom says im dare devlesh to ride a bike at that age.

I started to ride a bigger bike almost bigger than me! I think I was pretty dare devlesh.

We had a park and a parking lot! So we can learn pretty fast. Its all flat too! I got lucky of where we live.

The End

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One fantastic but cold fall day I had a soccer game and suddenly I wake up at 7:00 and I had to eat breckfast suddenly 3 hours later I had to wake my mom up at 10:00 and she made eggs and pancakes for her me and my little sister for breckfast and my mom got in the shower and I got dressed and my sister did to.Now it was time to go to Churchville and now it was time to get to the field I asked my mom "can I go the field?" She anwsered"yes you can Madison."I ran to the field.Suddenly I had to get to warm ups,I dropped my bag on the very green grass and ran to my coach to tell him I was here and do warm ups with my other teamates and we did 30 jumping jacks then we did 15 push ups then I asked my coach"Can we shat goals to get ready?"He said "yes we can!"

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So... On February 14 I woke up. And it was my birthday! So I got up. when I seen it Muffins blue berry muffins were on the table Just for me! so I ate them! there were really good! I got new shoes for the birthday. Also. I invited some friends! they were super nice and It was super fun! Then. the next day, Woke up. I went to sky zone. I JUMPED WITH EVERYBODY AND IT WAS SO FUN. this was the day I couldn't forget. But then someone Knocked on the door. *thump* when I seen it

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HI MY NAME IS ALEECE AND IT WAS MY GOD BROTHERS BIRTH DAY. HE WAS TERNING 2 YEARS OLD SO WE WENT BOWLING AND WE HAD LOTS OF FUN. FIRST BEFOR WE WENT WE MADE GOODY BAGS AND THEY HAD ALL SORTS OF CANDY LIKE TOOTSE POPS AND TOOTSE ROLLS WITH SOME SMALL CANDYS TO .EVEN WHEN WE GOT THERE .THERE WHERE COOL BLUE BALLONS. DJ GO,S FIRST .MACENSE GO,S SECONT.COBE AND CODY WHENT THIRD AND FORTH AND I WHENT LAST THEN FINNALY WE EAT CAKE IT WAS SSSSSOOOOO GOOD AND WE GOT GOODY BAGS BEFOR WE LEFT I ALMOST GOT LEFT BEHIND ! THE END

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Keep it up, Arianna! I am happy to see you writing up a storm this afternoon :) 

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Keep it up, Arianna! I am happy to see you writing up a storm this afternoon :) 

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Great job, Shalom! Looks like you filled a WHOLE page today :) 

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Great job, Shalom! Looks like you filled a WHOLE page today :) 

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After washing out my mouth I went back upstairs then I laid down on the couch (because we don't have a room yet I recently moved in with my aunt) I started to cry I didn't want it to come out like that! I started to push and push my tooth back in my mouth, the pain grew stronger. I cried harder, 2 minutes later I tip toed back downstairs looked my mom in the eyes ''do you have tooth medicine?'' I asked. ''no.'' replied my mother. A tear rolled down my face, I went back upstairs gently without the stairs making a crack noise. my heart broken into 2 pieces.

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I couldn't imagine having to brush my teeth more!! this was so much stress!! I don't know what to do!! i know washing out my mouth would help but she was so calm!! and.. and I was so scared!! she's not worrying at all! thought to my self... ''maybe  I should calm down...''  then I calmed down and thought about things that were happy and not things like losing teeth. I then gently washed out my mouth.

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i had night school i wtrite a story of me going to las vagas with my family the story o\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\

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i had night school i write a story of me going to las vagas with my family the end the story of

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because i can play games like socore and football

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me and my brother was playing when i had night school i watch a video it was fun then  i writeted a story  about me going to las vagas

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OLIVIA! This is BEAUTIFUL WORK! I am so proud of you ;)

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my story

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My 3 hour drive to our cabin. I think it was worth it honestly. We had a room for a hot tub and a tv to watch while your in it. when we got in it was 104 degrees. and i got the master bed room with the master bathroom it was on the top floor our parents got the main floor that one is a bed room not the master they had a way bigger bathroom but I got the master everything so yeah. We did our school just not the live meeting we had a fooseball thing in the basement when we left were all good.

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When it was my birthday i. Got a new computer and when i  asked my mom if i could have my own password she said NO and i said why and she just ignored me so then she put in the wi-fi password for me and then  i opened all of my other gifts and then i opened the last gift....IT WAS MY WII REMOTE !! I was so happy and then i let my cousin play with it and i said please dont get my wii remote dirty or messed up and they just ignored me and went back to there game i said WHY IS EVERYONE IGNORING ME! then i went back downstairs then i played roblox on my pink computer and when i played my favorite game IT WAS LAGGY and then i played kogama with my cousin then when he left i asked my mom if i could go to his house then she said no then i was crying upstairs then when my sister said mommy its her birthday she said no again the my sister jen said she would take me and my brother and she did then my little brother josh put his fingers in his mouth and touched ME! then my brother was having fun sitting in the front seat i was angry but then when we got there i said FREEDOM then i played roblox on my new computer until 9:00 witch was are bedtime then my brother slept upstairs and me and my cousin slept downstairs and we begged are brother and he said no and we asked and asked until he said NOO! then we just ran downstairs and went to sleep and when i woke up at like 7:45 my cousin was awake then we played among us then we went home and i also have pink headphones and fat wad. :D
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It was Saturday morning i woke up hearing my mom say "Get up Victor and get dressed, almost time too leave for Gettysburg." So I got up and got dressed and ran downstairs. When I got downstairs my dad had breakfast ready. My dad ask me "do you want some pancakes or do you want some cereal?" I said " Pancakes!" I ate my whole breakfast I  was hungry. After breakfast me my mom and dad and older brother got in the car and started driving too Gettysburg. I asked my mom "How much longer till we get there?" she replied " about a hour left". I was getting so excited! We finally made it too Gettysburg, I looked out my window from the car and there was some cows running around a huge farm. There was also a lot of trees, hills, and open fields of grass. So then we found a parking spot and we all got out of the car, we were going hiking on a trail that lead us too Little Round Top. Me and my mam walked in the back it was a hard steep hill too get up. My mom said "Victor be careful and take your time so you don't fall!" So I slowed down and walked with my mom because my legs were starting too hurt. We got all the way too the top and there was information on little signs and my dad started reading them too me. One of the signs that my dad was reading was "Little Round Top is the smaller of the two rocky hills and 134 men were killed." After my dad was done reading we all walked around and there was a a big castle looking building my dad called it Monument. Me and my brother Tyler went in the monument it was really cool it has really skinny stairs that you have too climb and when i reached the top it was so high up! so me and my brother took a picture together and from up there you could see a spot called Devils Den. I yelled down too my dad "Can we go there?" He said "we will go there next". I was so excited, there was a lot of rocks too play on! So we all got in the car again and we drove down the street too Devils Den. We all got out and my dad started too read some of the history from the signs too me again. He said "Devil Den was used for the soldiers too hide during  the American Civil War". I then asked him "Can I go climb on the rocks?" He said "yes just be careful". So I ran and climbed on a really big rock and then I slid down on my 🤬 too get down because it was really high up! After I played on the rocks for about 30 minutes we got back in the car and drone to another part of the park this time we were at Big Round Top, We got out of the car and i said too my mom "IM Hungry!" my mom said " After this we will get lunch". So we walked up another big mountain and my legs were getting so tired but I made it all the way up! I was glad I did the view from up there was so nice. So once again my dad read too me. "Big Round Top was the biggest of all the mountains." After my dad read too me we took a family picture on a rock I was a little scared because it was really high up! After the pictures we walked back too the car and I was so tired and my stomach was rumbling! My dad said "its time too go home" and I was a little sad because I wanted too go too the museum but my mom said "Maybe next time buddy there are too many people in the museum we need too be safe". So we started driving home and next thing I know we were at McDonalds I got some chicken nuggets, some fries and a drink I was so happy because I was really hungry! After I ate I feel asleep I was so tired from all the walking but I had so much fun learning about Gettysburg and I cant wait too go back again!!!

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I had 2 cavities in my mouth and I got them filled at the dentist. My mom payed a lot of money and I had to brush my teeth better. now I have to brush my teeth better and I have to floss and use mouthwash

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Hi Victor! I see you are typing instead of uploading the picture, either way works! Keep up the GREAT WORK!

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Hi Victor! I see you are typing instead of uploading the picture, either way works! Keep up the GREAT WORK!

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Met on 10/6 with Mrs. Brennan- writing in journal - Skyzone birthday party! WOW! :) So proud of you, Elijah!

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Met on 10/6 with Mrs. Brennan- writing in journal - Skyzone birthday party! WOW! :) So proud of you, Elijah!

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One day i went to dave busters and i had the BEST DAY it was so so fun i played a lots of games and on top of that i had some good chicken tenders the pace was almost go to clothes so everyone song happy birthday to me and we left the pace and i was so tired when i got in the car i was sleeping in the car i had so so so much fun my parents are the best people ever.

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I had the BEST chicken tenders they were spicy, but I still ate them!

The next thing that happened was...

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one day it was a spectacler fall day and I had a soccer game.I ran to the field from the parking lot to the field I play on.I was ready to play the game,we are agenst my cousons team and I score a goal in the last 30 minutes.I hope my mom and dad are proud of me I said in my head and if they are we won the hole game.It was the end of the game,and we had brought snacks and drinks for the team so it was snack time like after ever game or practice. My mom brought the drinks and snacks acrost the field.Now it was time to go home from soccer so we went home so we can the had lunch. I had a ham and cheese sandwich and with a cup of water to drink and that was what I had for lunch.I asked my mom "What are we going to do later?"

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I was in Pennsylvania and we went to my first consert and we got a hotel to stay in for a day. that night we went to PPL center we saw some bands but our Favorite band is five finger death punch. they sang. My Dad came and my Step mom Linz. I was on dads shouders and I got called side stage! WHAT my dad said " Jekyl and Hyde it my favorite! ". it was awesome. After that we slept. The end

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It was my 6th birthday and I woke up excited. I woke up smiling. I went to take a bath and when I got out I put my cloting on. I put on my birthday shirt. My shirt was pink and white and blue. It looked like fireworks on my shirt. Then I walked like a princss to my mom and dads room. I woke them up and they got ready and my brother got ready. we went to sky zone. When i got to sky zone we went to the register and got our jumping socks. It was loud in there. Other kids sounded like they were having fun. My socks were blue and green..
I was ready to bonce. All my friends came with there parents. Me and my friends ran as fast as we can to the trapaleans. We bounced all day. We played dodgeball and went on the slides. I could even fill the breeze. We played basketball together. Then we went back to the room it was time to eat. it was peperoni piazza. We all sat down we ate pizza it taste good. Then they brought out the cake. They said Happy birthday to me. We eat cake. We siad bye to everyone. Then we left back home after one our. we went to Arbes. We got cruel fries. Then we eat the food it was good. We eat some diner it was fried ciken. Then we all took a shower with hot water. We went to bed i said good night to evrone. I could not stop thnking about my birthday. I had so much fun. It took a long time for me to go to sleep because I was thninking about my birthday.

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One day I was sad when my mom and dad went on a trip to Las Vegas.
I really miss them because I wanted to hug them. I wanted to see them now. They were gone for 4 days that was a long time.
I was in my room crying in my bed. I was under my covers. I was really really sad a lot.
My nana looked after me and she gave me a warm hug. She said prayers with me in my room and she went to bed and i said good night.
my nana woke me up in the morning.she said your dad and mom are coming back dont worry. I got on my tablet and my auntie coley cole came over too. Then we played the game operation. Then my aunt said goodbye and left. Nana said come on Zaya go and take a shower. I got out the shower and put on my lotion and got dressed. I put on a blue shirt and it had a Z on it. Then I went back downstairs and I watched tv with my nana.

My mom and dad came back and I was excited. I gave my parents a hug.

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YAY! Keep it up, I love your characters.

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YAY! Keep it up, I love your characters.

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Continue to STRETCH out those important parts adding lots of details. 

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Continue to STRETCH out those important parts adding lots of details. 

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WONDERFUL! You have action and dialogue, I love it.

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WONDERFUL! You have action and dialogue, I love it.

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Yes, Aleece! THis is a brilliant start --- Your characters are ALIVE :) 

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Yes, Aleece! THis is a brilliant start --- Your characters are ALIVE :) 

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This summer I went to the go-kart track but I had to wait forever to drive because their were a lot of people. The people who worked there controlled how fast the cars went.

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a couple days ago, in the night wiggled and wiggled my tooth then I pushed it outwards from my mouth a few seconds later... POP! It was half way out my mouth! i was scared. to have it come out just like that!? or I thought... I raced down stairs and stared to worry. ''just wash out your mouth.'' my mom said calmly. ''plus you know I can't see in the dark.'' she was so calm I wonder how.. I still wonder to this day. The next day mom told me ''if we pull it out the the gum will grow over the roots and the but if we keep it in then you'll have to brush teeth a lot more than normal.'' but i didn't want to.

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My Birthday

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When the Pool was Closed we went to the pool hill we went down the hill to learn how to ride bikes. I went   down the hill 70 times then I did it I won a game because did awesome! then I was able to ride with big kids

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One day it was a spectacaler fall day and I had a soccer game. I ran to the field from the parking lot to  the field I play on.I was ready to play the game,we are going agenst my cousons team and I score in the last 30 minutes.

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I had a sleep over with my bff he had a nintdeo switch and a x box the x box had forx 3 and minecraft. We had so much fun. I staed up to 12:00 he staed up to 1:30 and he woke up before me and when I came in the living room he was playing minecraft and im like bro its 7:30 I go to bed first and u get up before me. We both laughed and we played together again and hes sister came in and played with us and had fun. Finliiy I had to go home.

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one day i was on lunch break and i saw my friends give me a note and i sind it they siad it was a cheer compatishon i was sooo shoct i dash up the hill in a rush my friends

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boys say a girl is aprinses we are not we are people boys

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Writers, today we studied mentor texts to make our writing even BETTER! Use the resources below and type OR take a picture of your newest writing!

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Writers, today we studied mentor texts to make our writing even BETTER! Use the resources below and type OR take a picture of your newest writing!

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Let's fill this Padlet with our GOLDEN writing.