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My area of weakness is finding the info and putting it in the paragraph. Like for example if I had a passage and I had to write an essay about it I get stuck when I have to put abbreviations and citing where i got my info. I usually get that part wrong and i'm working on getting better at it. I like essay better when they ask about you and you don’t need a passage to answer the question.

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One thing i learned from this is to explain a lot. Don’t just say one thing and then change the subject without explaining your reason of saying that.

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A weakness I have is that I struggle with making my paragraphs flow

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One thing that I took away from the lesson Friday was that your essay should have good evidence explaining your ideas.

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I need to make more paragraphs

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My weakness when writing is not explaining very clear and its not usually long enough.

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taking away making long sentences

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The thing I took away is that explaining your evidence is key and important.

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A weakness that i have is not doing my stuff until last minute or the night before-carnyyyy

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A weakness that i have is not doing my stuff until last minute or the night before-carnyyyy

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One thing I took away from the examples is that explaining your points thoroughly is very important to your essay.

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A weakness I have with my writing is that I am not very organized or clear with my writing.

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I tend to over explain things and as a result my writing seems disorganized.

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I learned what bad writing looks like and what not to do. I also learned some useful things i could use in my writing from the good example.

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I need to work on citing evidence and the flow of my sentences.

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I need to work on repeating myself, because when I read back what I wrote, I notice I repeat myself a lot. I need to learn on how to move to one paragraph to another.

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I feel like I need to work on the words I use when I write. I also need to work on my introductions.

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I need to work on writing because I am very bad at flowing from paragraph to the next.

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I learned writing is like a game and to write good, you have to figure out what and who you are writing for.

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I need to work on providing examples for ideas that I write about.

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I learned that you have to know who you're writing to.

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I learned that writing is a game and it is important to know what and who you are writing to.

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A weakness in my writing is my ability to transition between ideas.

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I learned i can get more signal checks if the teacher helps me and we talk about what i did wrong.

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I learned i can get more signal checks if the teacher helps me and we talk about what i did wrong.

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-carnahannnnnnn

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I learned that the most important thing is to know what audience you are writing to.

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I learned that you need to write to where your audience understands it and you need to stay on that topic

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I'm not good at writing paragraphs or spelling. I'm also not good at transitioning into a new paragraphs.

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I learned that writing is a game. I learned that you might have to do extra stuff to succeed such as using a thesaurus for writing.

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I learned that writing is a game and you need to write what your teacher is looking for

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I hope class is going well!!!