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The political side of the government affects the arts of today through music, like the recent song Let me out by Gorillas; the jokes within television shows, as seen in the show Last Man Standing; and movies, like White House Down.

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Politics influence both literature and art by inflicting different feelings in different individuals. These feelings become present through everything from musical performances, talk shows, visual artwork, and literary works from people feeling excited, angered, worried, hopeful, happy, or any other feeling.

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I agree with your statement. Politics do affect people's emotion. Some times negatively, like you stated. What is an examples of this infliction of these feelings in musical performances?

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I love that you provided so many examples and you were very specific with exact titles and show names. What do you think might be the motives of people bringing politics into music and TV shows? Also how might politics be affecting our literature?

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There is a directly correlated reflection between political agendas and the creative arts and literary works of the time they are present in. This reflection from the perspective of the arts reflecting the political environment is due to the expressive nature behind works of art which almost always reflect the current reality they are subjected to even if the writing or piece's subject is about the future or past it is still opinionated based among the time the author/artist is in while in contrast, the reflection taking place from the political agenda reflecting the art is mainly due to political nature which tends to target commonalities and trends to gain support as well as credibility and lastly, the political agenda and creative/literary arts are directly coordinated with eachother through the desire of expressing sentimentalism and meaning one being through the arts and the other being through the political status.

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As Weston said about the examples I similarly agree that they were a very beneficial touch to the thesis.

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I truly do like how you targeted the interpersonal aspect of this correlated reflection because that's truly what it is all about. We may disagree on this but I believe it truly is rooted to sentimentalism and meaning trying to be obtained and displayed. I believe you targeted that just in a different approach either way, good job.

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Current events such as natural disasters, politics, and holidays have a lot to do with influences on writing in the modern day. Also, recent developments in technology, new creations with music and the arts impact the topics of writing. As time goes on everything evolves and either improves or declines with quality. Writing depends on how all these things change.

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I agree with your comment. Writing is majorly impacted by the government as well as all aspects of technology and arts.

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Political events have a significant influence on literature and other artistic variations. Many people form a strong opinion on any political events, and therefore begin to intertwine these feelings into their work. This action becomes almost natural for people to create work that becomes influenced based on what is happening in the world around them in politics, or even in other everyday events.

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I really like that you included so many examples of shows and music that has let politics influence their work. Why do you think they do this though? Are they expressing their feelings about events? Or do you think they are more so making "fun" of the political events?

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I completely agree with your thesis. I think people really let their feelings about the specific events further influence their work in literature or other arts. Whether they are doing that to express their feelings with the world or maybe just trying to get it out there because it might be what is "popular" right now. Either way though, I agree with the feelings, and good job!

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I agree with your thesis, especially the last part. I think it has a lot to do with sentimentalism (great word to describe it by the way!) and them trying to incorporate their feelings about what is going on into their works. I like that you provided so much information, and your examples, but a thesis is supposed to be relatively short and to just kind of present the overall ideas of your argument. While you did a great job, I would possibly go thru and take out a few unneeded things just to get to the point in a more concise way. Otherwise, great job though!

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I do agree with you that writing does change based on how everything else evolves. I like that you included a few other examples that impact literature, such as technology. Which is very true, especially in our time, where technology is everything! I also liked the example of holidays included, but maybe provide a few specific examples, because I can't quite think of how that specifically effects literature and arts. But you did a great job overall!

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I agree with your thesis and I think that you did an excellent job at expressing this relationship between the arts and politics. I also like that you brought in the idea of connecting the arts, sentimentalism, and political agendas in order to gain support because I agree with that. Good job!

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I think your thesis is very interesting because it took a different approach and focused on how things like technology and current events affect literature. I also think that your wording was very neat and easy to understand. The only thing I would add are some specific examples of how technology, current events, and holidays affect literature. Good job!

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I agree with your thesis and I like how you incorporated that people get strongly opinionated about political events and thus they show this in their work. I think some specific examples of individuals demonstrating their political opinion in their work could be helpful but your thesis is really good. Good job!

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I agree that your thesis statement has excellent detail but I almost wonder if that is more detail than is needed just for the thesis statement. In your essay the intro paragraph could contain the supporting detail you included here which would later be reflected in supporting paragraphs. But you did an excellent job of conveying a lot of information with your thesis statement.

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Thank you for sharing your thesis and supporting details. I agree that politics can affect personal views of artistic creations that may not have been political at all in creation because it's the individual interpretation that is affect by politics.

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Your Thesis and supporting detail is excellent but I think you might want to look at your supporting details, because that is one REALLY long sentence. You might want to break that into 3 different parts which could then be 3 different paragraphs in your essay. But I do like how you make the correlation between feelings and politics.

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Your thesis and supporting detail is very clear and well laid out in preparation for writing the rest of your essay. I honestly don't think I would put more detail here with examples and such. You could use that in the body of your essay instead. I thought this provided a good overview.

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This was a good thesis with supporting detail. I agree that since politics affects many in amny different ways it can be relected in whatever artistic creations however obvious or obscure. I think this gives you a good start to fleshing out a full essay based on this topic

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Music is one type of artistic creation which has been inspired by both positive and negative political views. Our country has a national anthem which is our patriotic theme song and other pro-government songs that were used to promote patriotism through the years. Even in today's society with the drama around football players refusing to stand in observance and the president's response to it, our National Anthem has become the topic of a lot of political debate. However, some music is anti-government like the protest songs of the 1960's and 70's that spoke out against war.

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I agree with everything you said and I have to say, your thesis is really good! I love that you brought in several examples like the national anthem and football players refusing to stand as well as the 1960's and 1970's war protest songs. Good job!

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Political events have an influence on literature and art. For example, music and tv shows might be made that politics might comment on based on the topics these art forms are about. Also, people make music and art and tv shows based on their opinion of the government and politics which impacts the type of art produced and how they share their opinion.

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I like how you brought up the habitual nature that people have about reacting towards the things that happen around them and then producing something from it.

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Politics especially strong figures that stand in the spot light and who are looked at for advice and guidence have a major influence on the way literature is created and understood. Each president leaves a specific mark on society that will never be able to be changed. Our history is guided through them and in return our literature is molded by what happens while they are in the light. Whether it be good or bad it still turns to history that can never be forgotten.

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I definitely agree with your statement about how politics effect each person individually. Like I also said each individual historical figure effects the outcome as well.

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This is a great start to your essay. Your thesis is clear and to the point. You might put a specific example in your supporting arguments for example the way SNL often creates skits based on politcal topics. Great work!

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Excellent to follow your thoughts down this avenue. Thank you for sharing something that was so clearly thought out and delivered so well in correct format.

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I really like where this is going. In China, media is banned from a great deal of the potential to lay jabs or support government, as well as pornography, violence, and adultery. Do you think that with the influence the media industry has on the people, the US should have taken up these stances to prevent negative influence and all bias subliminal messages 50 years ago?

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I agree with all of these comments, the way that the media and their politics affect us only based on how we as individuals chose to deal with them. This including how we let the thoughts and ideas of our opposing views affect us