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We all did good on the conventions section, we had a good amount of paragraphs, we need to work on our evidence.

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We all did good on the conventions section, we had a good amount of paragraphs, we need to work on our evidence.

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BreAnna
Trinity
Makayla
Annika

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I did quite well on my conventions. I also had a more intriguing hook than usual.

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I did quite well on my conventions. I also had a more intriguing hook than usual.

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-Makayla

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I have been getting better with my grammar and my claim/hook 

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I have been getting better with my grammar and my claim/hook 

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-Annika

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My body paragraphs had the correct way of citing quotes. It also had a lot of evidence.

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My body paragraphs had the correct way of citing quotes. It also had a lot of evidence.

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Trinity

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My strengths were having a lot of facts, and the number of paragraphs I had.

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My strengths were having a lot of facts, and the number of paragraphs I had.

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BreAnna

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I need to work on using evidence as well as reasoning(lately my evidence has been turning into reasoning). I also need to work on making my claim better (and not just stating the obvious).

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I need to work on using evidence as well as reasoning(lately my evidence has been turning into reasoning). I also need to work on making my claim better (and not just stating the obvious).

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-Makayla

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something I need to practice would be focusing on my claim more and not getting carried away in other nonsense. As well as not resaying evidence that was already told in previous paragraphs.

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something I need to practice would be focusing on my claim more and not getting carried away in other nonsense. As well as not resaying evidence that was already told in previous paragraphs.

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Trinity

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-Annika

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I need to work more on stating the evidence from the article other than just facts, and I need to work more on my hook, trying to catch the readers attention

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I need to work more on stating the evidence from the article other than just facts, and I need to work more on my hook, trying to catch the readers attention

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BreAnna

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I need to get stronger and more evidence when I am on article don't always know what to use and what not to use all the time  

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I need to get stronger and more evidence when I am on article don't always know what to use and what not to use all the time  

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-Annika

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Even if my grammar is getting better I still need to work on that along with my spelling I have always been bad with these but I still need to work on it

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Even if my grammar is getting better I still need to work on that along with my spelling I have always been bad with these but I still need to work on it

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-Annika

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something I would like to work on would like to have help on is staying on track with my claim and using more and new evidence

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something I would like to work on would like to have help on is staying on track with my claim and using more and new evidence

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Trinity

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I need more help on my hook and organizing my paragraphs more so it's not just random facts put into multiple paragraphs, and I need more help on making my conclusion longer.

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I need more help on my hook and organizing my paragraphs more so it's not just random facts put into multiple paragraphs, and I need more help on making my conclusion longer.

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BreAnna

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I want help with descriptive ways to write claims, drawing the reader in ever more. I also want help with introducing evidence.

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I want help with descriptive ways to write claims, drawing the reader in ever more. I also want help with introducing evidence.

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-Makayla

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I still need to work on all my evidence spelling and grammar 

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I still need to work on all my evidence spelling and grammar 

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-Annika

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We all had smooth or generally integrated evidence. Most of us got threes on our purpose, focus, and organization.

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We all had smooth or generally integrated evidence. Most of us got threes on our purpose, focus, and organization.

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Giselle
Gwen
Khia
Charlotte

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My strengths were having minor errors and correct punctuation. My other strength was that I had relevant evidence  and had precise references.

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My strengths were having minor errors and correct punctuation. My other strength was that I had relevant evidence  and had precise references.

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Giselle

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I maintained my claim consistently through my essay and I had good conventions.

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I maintained my claim consistently through my essay and I had good conventions.

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-Khia

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My paper stayed on topic throughout and I had a fairly good hook that described a scene relevant to the paper.

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My paper stayed on topic throughout and I had a fairly good hook that described a scene relevant to the paper.

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Charlotte

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I am staying more organized and I am going with the flow more and transitioning from topic to topic smoother.

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I am staying more organized and I am going with the flow more and transitioning from topic to topic smoother.

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-Gwen

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I need to work on making conclusions that don't just repeat all the points presented in the paper.

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I need to work on making conclusions that don't just repeat all the points presented in the paper.

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I need to use more evidence.
Charlotte

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I need to practice using more techniques and having more variation in my sentence structure.

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I need to practice using more techniques and having more variation in my sentence structure.

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Giselle

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I need to work on remembering not to use I, me, or we so much and I need to work on my sentence structure so I don't have so may run-on sentences.

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I need to work on remembering not to use I, me, or we so much and I need to work on my sentence structure so I don't have so may run-on sentences.

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-Gwen

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I need to work on having more evidence to use and explaining my points better.

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I need to work on having more evidence to use and explaining my points better.

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-Khia

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I still need help with making my claim smooth and one sentence and using more techniques in my paper

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I still need help with making my claim smooth and one sentence and using more techniques in my paper

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Giselle

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I need to work on writing for topics I don't like and have evidence for and having a consistent sentence structure.

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I need to work on writing for topics I don't like and have evidence for and having a consistent sentence structure.

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-Khia

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I need more practice on my hook and making it stronger and more attention grabbing and I need to practice managing my time better so I have longer, neater paragraphs

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I need more practice on my hook and making it stronger and more attention grabbing and I need to practice managing my time better so I have longer, neater paragraphs

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-Gwen

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My strengths are having a very long detailed essay and making sure to stay on topic of my claim. 

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My strengths are having a very long detailed essay and making sure to stay on topic of my claim. 

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-Hailey

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I found solid evidence that supported my topic better than I have since last semester. 

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I found solid evidence that supported my topic better than I have since last semester. 

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-Josie

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Something that I need to work on is that I need to pay attention to my sources and not to use pronouns.

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Something that I need to work on is that I need to pay attention to my sources and not to use pronouns.

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-Josie

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Something i need to focus on is making sure i am citing my quotes properly in my essay.

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Something i need to focus on is making sure i am citing my quotes properly in my essay.

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-Hailey

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i need to work on using better vocabulary and better word choices

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i need to work on using better vocabulary and better word choices

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All of had either similar or closely the same issues with sources, either not citing them or putting them where they weren't needed.

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All of had either similar or closely the same issues with sources, either not citing them or putting them where they weren't needed.

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Noah
Hailey
Matt
Josie

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my strength is finding good evidence - Noah

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my strength is finding good evidence - Noah

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I think my hooks into my essay could be a lot stronger.

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I think my hooks into my essay could be a lot stronger.

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-Hailey

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Our whole group used pronouns, some need to find stronger evidence, accurate punctuation, a sturdy claim, and different sentence starters.

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Our whole group used pronouns, some need to find stronger evidence, accurate punctuation, a sturdy claim, and different sentence starters.

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Monica
Ashley
Elizabeth
Melissa

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Most of my grammar is good and my hook was good. -Ashley

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Most of my grammar is good and my hook was good. -Ashley

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-monica

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-monica

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I'm really good with hooks and using different things then just a questions to pull readers in and im also usually good at finding good evidence based on my claim.

-Melissa

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-monica

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bringing in the reader and throwing shade a little

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bringing in the reader and throwing shade a little

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-monica

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My strength was my diverse vocabulary, strong evidence, and sticking to my claim. 

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My strength was my diverse vocabulary, strong evidence, and sticking to my claim. 

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Elizabeth

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I need to practice replacing numbers with word from and finding better articles.

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I need to practice replacing numbers with word from and finding better articles.

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-monica

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-monica

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Something I need to work on are my sentence starters, I want to look at different ways to open up an idea.

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Something I need to work on are my sentence starters, I want to look at different ways to open up an idea.

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Elizabeth

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My intros need to be better and my claim needs to be better.

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My intros need to be better and my claim needs to be better.

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I need to elaborate more and not repeat myself so much, and I want to do better transitions from idea to idea.
-Melissa

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I want to practice my sentence starters since I can get repetitive with the same words. 

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I want to practice my sentence starters since I can get repetitive with the same words. 

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Elizabeth

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I want help with elaboration and transitions
-Melissa

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I need to add more to my essay, it could be longer paragraphs or even better transitions to sentences.

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I need to add more to my essay, it could be longer paragraphs or even better transitions to sentences.

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Jace

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Jace

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Our group needs to work on word choice, progression of ideas, conventions, better hooks, and the length of our papers.

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Our group needs to work on word choice, progression of ideas, conventions, better hooks, and the length of our papers.

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Vance
Jace
Gilbert
Abigail
Sandra

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I need to work on showing the significance of my evidence.

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I need to work on showing the significance of my evidence.

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Jace

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Two of my strengths are my claims are good and my conventions are great.

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Two of my strengths are my claims are good and my conventions are great.

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Vance

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I need to work on my progression of ideas and word choice.

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I need to work on my progression of ideas and word choice.

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Vance

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I want help with awesome hooks and better word choice.

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I want help with awesome hooks and better word choice.

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Vance

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My strengths were composition and organization

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My strengths were composition and organization

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Abigail

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gilbert

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All of us had a very strong use of evidence and technique of elaboration. 

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All of us had a very strong use of evidence and technique of elaboration. 

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Alyssa W
Selene
Eden

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Our group thinks that we need to work on word choice 

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Our group thinks that we need to work on word choice 

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-Austin
-cooper
-caleb
-jenna

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-AUSTINO

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-coop

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I need to work on using punctuation better

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I need to work on using punctuation better

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-Austino

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-Austino

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I did the best in including evidence from the source 

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I did the best in including evidence from the source 

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Alyssa W

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I need to work on using more words and expanding my vocabulary.

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I need to work on using more words and expanding my vocabulary.

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cooper

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I did good with supporting my claim with facts. I cited them correctly 

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I did good with supporting my claim with facts. I cited them correctly 

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-jenna

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I did great in the purpose, focus, and organization section. I had a strong claim and didn't off topic. I also had an appropriate style and tone.
-Eden

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Alyssa W

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I want to elaborate on my use of evidence.

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I want to elaborate on my use of evidence.

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-cooper

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something I need to work on more is introductions and hooks and conclusions. 

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something I need to work on more is introductions and hooks and conclusions. 

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-jenna

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-caleb

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Alyssa W

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I need to have better structure in some of my sentences. Lastly I need to be general through my references

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I need to have better structure in some of my sentences. Lastly I need to be general through my references

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-Eden

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I used a variety of transitions and I had very minor errors in my essay.
-Selene

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I would like help with on how to successfully write a good intro sentence and how to end my paper efficiently. 

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I would like help with on how to successfully write a good intro sentence and how to end my paper efficiently. 

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-jenna

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Need to work on making all of my wording compatible with the information I use

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Need to work on making all of my wording compatible with the information I use

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-caleb

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-caleb

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What I need more training with is supporting and citing evidence correctly and making sure it fits in.

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What I need more training with is supporting and citing evidence correctly and making sure it fits in.

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-Eden

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I need better word choices and to keep my claim more clear.
-Selene

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I need help with making my claim less confusing and to have better ideas from beginning to end.
-Selene