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I think you summarized your interview really well, and thestory  was very interesting.

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Your project seemed very well planned and put together. You also seemed to hit all the main points of you project very effectively.

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Very well planned essay. I liked your grandma's biography it was interesting. Good Job!

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Well delivered answers. Like how she talked about her grandma and her different life style, as it differs with ours. It was a well planned presentation.

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Your summarization seemed like you practiced alot and you hit the good major points.

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The biography interview is very different detailed and specific. Something you could work on is looking up more at the audience. Also giving out specific points on her food choices ! Very well organized

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Your project is very descriptive, and organized. I liked your presentation, and how you gave us a background. Good job!!

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Your project was very orderly, and it was interesting how life in Mexico is different than in America.

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I liked that you first gave us the background as to why you chose this and you gave us a little bit more information that wasn't on the paper. The way that you structured what you had to say was pretty good planned, it didn't look like you bounced from idea to idea.

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Your presentation seemed to be very well put together. It does not seem like you did it last minute, it was very thoroughly written and unique. I like how you wrote about your grandma staying with a family from Hong Kong, it gave an understanding to how her food consumption was affected.

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I really like how you provided alot  of background, very good start. I liked how you did your project.

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I like the chronological order of your grandmother’s story. It gives the background of why her diet is the way it is.

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By putting the background first and then the main interview it made it easier to understand and follow along. Good job

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Your project was very well organized and planned. You definitely took time to do this project and put everything together. Your assignment is very detailed and interesting. It's pretty cool to know how food was like back then.

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I like how you put the essay together. The essay was very detailed and polished.

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Your essay is well developed and very put together

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Your story was well polished and gave all the right details

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Your interview was thought out in advance as evident in how your interview is structured and the answeres you gave.
Well laid out with lots of information.

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It was well planned and well thought out and detailed

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I liked your personal connection to the project, it shows where you come from and the different style of food that your grandma describes the huge difference in dietary trends between the US and Mexico.

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The presentation was well thought out. The person you interviewed was interesting and had an interesting story to tell.

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It is nicely and properly typed out. I like how you displayed the interview in the screen but summed it up for us in a nice fashionable way to make it more interesting and not boring.

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It is very well done and nicely typed out. Try to project your voice more tho because it is hard to hear.

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Your format on giving the background of your grandmothers past was interesting, I would add a little more context to show more of the interview part.

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I like how you presented the information in a biography form. It makes the interview more appealing and interesting to listen to/ read. I also like how detailed you were in your grandmother’s past to show the influences on her food choice.

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I like how you told the back story of your relative and showed her life thru food. Good job!

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I think you took a lot of time to polish out the details of her story and made it coherent and made sure it made sense. You also knew what you were talking about and didn’t read right off the screen. You could have tied it back better to the original topic.