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I liked your book "The Art of Keeping cool". The book was very exciting , but the plot was kind of slow . The conflict is magnificent , however . I would give this book four stars .

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I love your book.  It is so well done.  When I first started reading it, I thought that it was just a book, but now I know that it is amazing.  The creativity is amazing.  I would rate this book a 9/10 because it was a really good book, but not my style.  I'm not really into the war type of books, but I really enjoyed it.

My favorite part in the book is when Able Hoffman escaped from the guards and the people followed him. He then walks into the flames and he passes.  I like this part because nobody would have though that he would do such a thing.  It kind of hit me in the face.

I would change the pace in the beginning because it started out slow and then about half way through the book it started to pick up the pace. I thought that it could've been better in the beginning because I think that it wasn't really exciting.

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I liked your book "The Art Of Keeping Cool." It had suspense that made you want to read ahead and find out what happens next.I would rate your book an eight.I liked how you added Able Hoffman.It's to bad he died.I still wonder if he was a spy or not.He seemed like a good man ,and I don't think he was a spy.When I first started reading the book I didn't think it would be one you read for pleasure.But after a while I wanted to keep reading it.We read it in a book group and when we would get assigned to read certain pages I would want to read more.I love how you had Robert's dad in the war.One thing I would change is the beginning.It's a little slow and I got bored easily.Like I said,the middle was really good because I kept wanting to read ahead.I want to be able to have that feeling of suspense in the beginning too.Other than that your book was great!

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To be honest, at first, I wasn't too fond of The Art Of Keeping Cool. Then, it got interesting. I wanted to read it on and on. That is how some books are, I think. I liked how you are so descriptive. When Abel stepped into the fire, it surprised me. I would probably rate this book an eight out of ten.

As you saw in the last paragraph, I really liked when Abel stepped into the fire. I was kind of amazed he did that, but now that I think about it, I understand it. I mean, he was bullied all the time!! He probably thought that it wasn't worth living anymore!

I wouldn't really change much in your book. I know that I didn't really like your book at the beginning. Although I didn't, I'm not quite sure how to change the beginning. Of course, I wouldn't change the middle or the end; they were so interesting!

I think the next chapter or sequel would be about the next summer when Robert comes back to see Elliot.

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One thing I like about the book is the mystery of not knowing why the Saunders don't talk about Roberts dad. I would rate it a 8/10 because in the beginning of the book I was not that interested, but then in the middle of the book it started to get really interesting.

My favorite part of the book was when Robert found out what actually happened involving his dad and grandpa Saunders. I liked it because when you learn that everything comes together.

I would have changed that Grandpa Saunders never told Robert's dad sorry. If Grandpa Saunder would have apologize, I don't think Robert's Dad would forgive him. The day Grandpa Saunder's shot his leg, he had a limp for the rest of his life. Another thing I would change is the beginning of the book. In the beginning it wasn't as interesting. I wouldn't say to get rid of all the details, but

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Dear Ms. LisleI liked your book quite a bit. I like how and when all the characters come into place. I liked how they learned everything the way they did by uncovering secrets. I didn't not like how slow of a read this was because i prefer fast paced reads. I rate this book 7 out of 10.                                    My favorite part was when Elliot found out everything about his dad. This was my favorite part because Robert leans about his dad limp, he learned his grandpa and dad didn't  get along. He also learned how and why his dad has a limp.

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Dear Ms. LisleI liked your book quite a bit. I like how and when all the characters come into place. I liked how they learned everything the way they did by uncovering secrets. I didn't not like how slow of a read this was because i prefer fast paced reads. I rate this book 7 out of 10.                                    My favorite part was when Elliot found out everything about his dad. This was my favorite part because Robert leans about his dad limp, he learned his grandpa and dad didn't  get along. He also learned how and why his dad has a limp.

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I would've changed Roberts dad being shot down to where he flew back to Sachems head and was actually stationed at the military base in town. I think it would have made the book a lot better just because He was so close but Robert never knew.

If this book was in a sequel i think that you should consider writing whether Roberts dad goes back into flying a fighter plane or what he does. I think it would just be good because it would be a new and improved journey.

A lesson that a reader could convey is there are always secrets until you uncover them. Some of the secrets in the book that are uncovered is Roberts dads limp and Elliot was hanging out with Abel.

Sincerely,
Chance Troup

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I liked your book quite a bit. I like how and when all the characters come into place. I liked how they learned everything the way they did by uncovering secrets. I didn't not like how slow of a read this was because i prefer fast paced reads. I rate this book 7 out of 10.
My favorite part was when Elliot found out everything about his dad. This was my favorite part because Robert leans about his dad limp, he learned his grandpa and dad didn't get along. He also learned how and why his dad has a limp.

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I liked your book , it has a lot of good context and is very descriptive . I would definitely rate the book four stars . I didn't feel , however , that it had enough detail.

My favorite part of the book was when Abel was seen at the big guns . I feel this is important because

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I liked your book "The Art Of Keeping Cool" It had suspense that made you want to read ahead and find out what happens next.I would rate your book an eight.I liked how you added Able Hoffman.It's too bad he died.I still wonder if he was a spy or not.He seemed like a good man,and I don't think he was a spy.When I first started reading the book I didn't think it would be one you read for pleasure.

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I love your book.  It is so well done.  When I first started reading it, I thought that it was just a book, but now I know that it is amazing.  The creativity is amazing.  I would rate this book a 9/10 because it was a really good book, but not my style.  I'm not really into the war type of books, but i really enjoyed it.

My favorite part in the book is when Able Hoffman escaped from the guards and the people followed him. He then walks into the flames and he passes.

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One thing I like about the book is the mystery of not knowing why the Saunders don't talk about Roberts dad. I would rate it a 8/10 because in the beginning of the book I was not that interested, but then in the middle of the book it started to get really interesting.

My favorite part of the book was when Robert found out what actually happened involving his dad and grandpa Saunders. I liked it because when you learn that everything comes together.

I would have changed

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To be honest, at first, I wasn't too fond of The Art Of Keeping Cool. Then, it got interesting. I wanted to read it on and on. That is how some books are, I think. I liked how you are so descriptive. When Abel stepped into the fire, it surprised me. I would probably rate this book an eight out of ten.

As you saw in the last paragraph, I really liked when Abel stepped into the fire. I was kind of amazed he did that, but now that I think about it, I understand it. I mean, he was bullied all this time!!