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Here is a vector version of the Sultan Athletic Logo

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Here is a quick layout I made. The grey rectangles are placeholders for different school mascots

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Should show examples of work already done and feedback provided from the customers.

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Should show examples of work already done and feedback provided from the customers.

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make it similar to the format of an email advertisement

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make it similar to the format of an email advertisement

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-delete the right side
too much info that is not needed
-organization of sub title

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include the 20 years in business thing, seems professional

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include the 20 years in business thing, seems professional

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keep it short and sweet  to keep consumer's attention

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keep it short and sweet  to keep consumer's attention

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"want to learn more, contact us today at!" sounds more like a cheesy commercial

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"want to learn more, contact us today at!" sounds more like a cheesy commercial

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contact info should be smaller and should go under the paragraph in the middle panel 

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contact info should be smaller and should go under the paragraph in the middle panel 

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Advertise what they're actually trying to sell

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Advertise what they're actually trying to sell

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get a new logo first then talk about the ad

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get a new logo first then talk about the ad

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the logo should not be on there twice on the same panel 

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the logo should not be on there twice on the same panel 

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Font should be same size for most of the ad

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Font should be same size for most of the ad

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Lets make it a double sided pamphlet instead of this ugly thing that no one wants to read - three sides look horrible 

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Lets make it a double sided pamphlet instead of this ugly thing that no one wants to read - three sides look horrible 

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Put website instead of phone number, because it is easier to remember

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Logo needs to stand out more, and it doesn't need to be there twice

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Logo needs to stand out more, and it doesn't need to be there twice

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"look like a champion, play like a champion"

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There needs to be a flow...idk what to read first 

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There needs to be a flow...idk what to read first 

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put the small words on the back if its a brochure

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put the small words on the back if its a brochure

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keep the background one colour and the question mark one colour (so it stands out)

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keep the background one colour and the question mark one colour (so it stands out)

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Remove the paragraph in the middle: no one will read it, more people will be turned off

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No reviews, past experience, etc.

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I like the writing at the bottom of the middle page 

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I like the writing at the bottom of the middle page 

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For example "Official School and Apparel Design"

This states a position of the company and I think we should keep that

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Use only 1-2 fonts throughout the entire ad

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change the main brand logo style to a smaller and more simplistic symbol logo instead of words everywhere

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change the main brand logo style to a smaller and more simplistic symbol logo instead of words everywhere

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If there is a website then it should be on there, nobody has time to call some long number

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Colours cannot be changed due to the Sultan brand image, although lighter shades can be used

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looks like a trifold, should be more of a poster or different style, something more attractive with less wording

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looks like a trifold, should be more of a poster or different style, something more attractive with less wording

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It is consistent with the website but many of the things are redundant (brand image identity)

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It is consistent with the website but many of the things are redundant (brand image identity)

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To much text and could use better font

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Remove everything on the right and the left

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Remove everything on the right and the left

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Colour scheme doesn't stand out

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Better colour scheme, colours are too dark and neutral

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Better colour scheme, colours are too dark and neutral

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the question mark should be in the middle

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the question mark should be in the middle

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it should be like a 1 page flyer because thats all that is needed for useful information