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Well done effective discussion about how your role involves working with others to meet the needs of learners.

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Well done effective discussion about how your role involves working with others to meet the needs of learners.

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You discuss imparting knowledge is important, but also consider the iomportance of student centred facilitation too.
Try to use specific headings for topics. E,g 1.1 Explain teaching roles...etc
Identify needs (topic 1) etc.  Also please outline a range of boundaries/limits to your role and when and why you (teachers and trainers) would work with people to meet individual/organisation learners needs.A positive start to the course though

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Some interesting and useful content provided that demonstrates knowledge ad experience.  

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Some interesting and useful content provided that demonstrates knowledge ad experience.  

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In future ensure ensure you use the criteria as headings for all criteria so its clear where you are aiming to meet each criteria. Ideally with topic you discuss labelled too. E,g 1.1 Explain teaching roles...etc
Identify needs (topic 1) etc.

Remember points of refferal  are who you would refer learners to e.g counsellors, safeguarding and study support.
Tray use examples when explaining how role involves working with others. Great use of QR code to demonstrate homework.

Also remember if you refer externally this can be done in some cases eg by our safeguarding team if this safeguards the learner and protects them from harm.

Positive effort though thankyou

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Clear sections provided that information about how teachers identify, plan, facilitate learning good knowledge and experience shown. 

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Clear sections provided that information about how teachers identify, plan, facilitate learning good knowledge and experience shown. 

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However you have described please explain, to help you use the command verbs. This is available on your induction flyer and the initial flyer you got in the initial assessment section. You also need to include wider reading and references a variety. (very minimum 3-4) per task or unit.  You also need to include a reference list at the end.
However a positive start to the course and some good basic understanding shown.

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Welldone positive effort you discuss the importance of key teaching roles e.g initial assessment, planning learning  etc 

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Welldone positive effort you discuss the importance of key teaching roles e.g initial assessment, planning learning  etc 

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In future however try to use command verbs to help you get the detail needed in your assessments. For example when explaining please give reasoning, detail examples to support. E.g when you discuss boundaries give examples of boundaries, discuss the importance of boundaries. Effective knowledge demonstrated of points of referral though.

A positive start to the course thankyou

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Clear introduction provided thank you.Good use us video resources to show how the teaching role involves working with other professional effective research

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Clear introduction provided thank you.Good use us video resources to show how the teaching role involves working with other professional effective research

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In future assessments remember to include the date when you reference authors. Also try to give example of teaching boundaries /limits to teachers role e.g safeguarding, financial, knowledge and discuss the importance of keeping these boundaries.
A positive effort though thankyou.

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Good clear introduction with alot of interesting content provided about the roles of teachers e.g planning learning facilitating learning

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Good clear introduction with alot of interesting content provided about the roles of teachers e.g planning learning facilitating learning

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When discussing external points of referral for 3.2 please ensure you use full sentences for an explanation and include examples and reasoning to support your content.

However  a positive start to the course thanks for your input

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Thankyou for your effort in submitting this some useful conceptual understanding and experience shown about initial assessment and right student right course.

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Thankyou for your effort in submitting this some useful conceptual understanding and experience shown about initial assessment and right student right course.

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Please avoid bullet points in future work. An explanation should use full sentences, should use reasoning and detail.

The command verb sheet you were given in the induction should help you understand command verbs in your criteria like explain, identify etc.
Also think about spacing.

When discussing the key roles, try to explain each of the 5 roles we discussed in class, how and why are they important, what do they involve? responsibilities? etc

However positive start to the programme welldone.

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Good clear signposting of the purpose of this essay. 

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Good clear signposting of the purpose of this essay. 

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Consider using a larger font size ideally use Arial front size 12.

Please ensure you use the crteria as headings for all criteria so its clear where you are aiming to meet each criteria. Ideally with topic you discuss labelled too. E,g 1.1 Explain teaching roles...etc
Identify needs (topic 1) etc.

Also try to signpost (introduce) what each criteria is about e.g paraphrasing it or including a quote to set the scene. Impressive extensive references though superb effort you have went above and beyond here. You may want to consider less if this level of work is not sustainable for future assessments.

A positive start to the course thankyou

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Well done positive effort thank you. Good detail provided about how the teachers role involves,,planning, delivering, assessing and evaluating.

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Well done positive effort thank you. Good detail provided about how the teachers role involves,,planning, delivering, assessing and evaluating.

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In future use a range of examples when explaining boundaries ideally 2-3 to demonstrate your knowledge of boundaries.

Very good description of points of referral though and very good use of activity sheet resources to support your applied knowledge and understanding in this piece of work great effort.

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Welldone positive effort thankyou. Clear sections provided when discussing key roles and responsibilities

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Welldone positive effort thankyou. Clear sections provided when discussing key roles and responsibilities

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Remember to to explain by adding reasoning and detail (why is it important to plan,deliver, assess etc)

You can use the command  verb sheet to help you.

Also please include relevant references to support

A positive start to the course though well done.