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The Problem With MLB Fan All Star Voting (1)

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1. I thought that this last week went   okay. Deciding what topic I wanted to write on was the most challenging part because I feel like I could've written on many things. I thought that you could've given a more in depth step by step example or explanation of your screenplay.
2. I learned how to write a screenplay and what the different parts of the screenplay are because now I have learned how to edit videos along with writing them.
3. I had fun doing the storytelling this week more than last week. I am proud of this project because I wrote about something that I am passionate about and something that I care about. The realness of the storytelling is what went well because I used my experiences along with the facts I know. The action descriptions were hard because I didn't know how many or how frequently I needed to put them in.
4. I enjoyed the class because of the creativity involved with it. I like how you first taught us how to edit videos then at the end you taught us also how to write them. I thought that we should learn pre-production earlier. Congrats on your wedding and thanks for all your help this Freshman year and over the summer.

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1. It is about the flaws in the MLB's All Star fan voting system.
2. Major League Baseball fans who take part in the voting.
3. There are crucial flaws in the voting process that the MLB needs to address.
4.  I want the audience to vote based on who deserves the nod compared to the popularity of the player.
5. Jeff(Age 58)- Jeff is a transportation lawyer who has been a Dbacks season ticket holder for 21 years. He is the father to an incredible son, age 15, who gives Jeff all his sports knowledge. Jeff is seen wearing polos and khakis in every non-work environment he is in. As a graduate of Georgetown he has lived in the DC area and growing up he lived near Chicago, so he has knowledge of living in cities with bigger market teams.
Obnoxious Atlanta Braves fan(Age 40)- Redneck from the Florida Georgia line who lives closer to the Rays than the Braves but decided to cheer for the bigger market team. He has never before left the Southeast or watched a west coast baseball game. But since the Braves are doing fine, he thinks that everyone of their players should be a starter without looking at the stats of other players.
6. This story matters to me because I invest a-lot of my time caring about this team to a point where I believe their effort son the field should be fairly recognized across the country among MLB and all sports fans. This is one of my favorite sports discussions and this time of the year is all star voting season.
7. The millions of people who watch the All Star Game want to see the best players of this season be fairly represented in the Mid-Summer classic.
8. I will grab their attention by using real statistics of the players along with providing a relatable sports fan's point of view.

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Brainstorm 1: The problem is... MLB All Star Fan Voting

a. Most deserving players don't always get picked
b. Turns into popularity contest
c. Big cities with big fanbases vote for less deserving but popular players locally

Brainstorm 2: The Problem is... Lack of opportunities for people with mental disabilities in workforce

a. Stereotypes associated with people who have mental disabilities
b. Not given equal opportunities in the workforce
c. Capable of working with people without disabilities but not given equal chance to prove their value in workforce

Brainstorm 3: The problem is... Changing schools

a. Disruption in life associated with changing schools
b. Effects of leaving friends and adjusting to new environment
c. How people learn to adjust to new environments and make new friends

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This would represent one of my arguments where even though Marte has the best numbers, he still isn't the favorite due to Atlanta's market size.

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This shows how Aaron Judge's stats compare to the guy he beat out in all star voting, and that proves how his popularity is valued more than his stats that don't qualify among league leaderboards.

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Shows where All Star Game will be held, but a baseball field in general would probably be used.

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1:22-2:22 Curb Your Enthusiasm where Larry David talks to Funkhouser at Dodger's Game

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Curb Your Enthusiasm Funkhouser Dodgers Game

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2:00-4:43 MLB table discussion where they have a discussion about PED Hall of Fame Voting.

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MLB Now debates if PED players should be in the HOF

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TD Ameritrade Commercial where Yankees Manager and Michael Koerbel have discussion in the dugout

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Michael Koerbel is a commercial director based out of LA.

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People having discussion in stands like possible situation in screenplay

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Studio environment where discussion can take place.