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Thank you for submitting your work. Your work is full of very sensible ideas and the structure is good. There are definitely good sentences. Well done!

There are, of course, still a lot of mistakes. PLEASE READ MY COMMENT EXTREMELY CAREFULLY. If you don't understand something, don't hesitate to ask me.

Then please re-write it to memorize all of these language points. It's crucial to improve your writing skill.

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Thanks Hannah
I'm going to say something about the advantages of monorail. The most important *** safety and hear monorails score very highly. I like train but designs of monorails means derails is *** impossible and answer no many *** most traffic. There is many dangerous of calibration.
Nowadays with formal concern about the environment use to be and monorails has a advantages of many other form of transport. There electricly operated so they don't cause pollution like cars, buses. Admittedly, some pollution produce by the electricity generation station.
The vehicles move much more quitely than trains because the no more use rapid types. This *** station to be sit in *** busy areas like shopping center without creating disturbance.
From economic point of view monorail have a lot going for them, for one thing, construction involve envelopment takes place on site. So installation can be very fast and coal very little disruption. One separate morning. I very cost effect to operate and *** held that by traffic jam or accident. The formal alike *** a jam and especially buses. On the other hand monorails has the same disadvantages as a railway. They operate over fix root. The vehicles can transfer to the road so root can be change without construct *** monorail and people have to get to inform the station so they may not be convenient as buses or in particular private car. So those of disadvantages ...

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First, Hannah is going to in short introduction monorail then *** talk about the advantages, ***
Well monorails are a bit like railway but there is just one rail which is wider than nature the rail for the railway. Actually, "mono" means one which is how they got the name. Some monorails are round level or subway tunnels. There is most cases attack elevated the vehicles of road way wider than the track.
In sometimes off monorail, the vehicles on the track like normal train and the other types there expensive forms. Some monorail is used to transport freight but *** passenger a lot of contacts visiter around the *** part. There planches of these around the world. And some form part *** urban transport system most suspended Japan. Monorail profess constructed in 19 century, those pf one *** operation for longest dates 1901 it's the time Wuppertal in Germany. Vehicle electric operated different kind of technologies use by one *** monorail.
*** 2004 between *** Shanghai in China and ***. Here's two the energy sources in electricity but it's used to create a mad *** few with ***
And while I'm traveling. The *** which means there suspended about 1 centimeter both a track. This technology is called maglev short for magnetic levitation. Those of train are capable of going over 500 km/h ...

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You have a lot of good ideas in this talk.
There are some words wrongly pronounced, please check them carefully in dictionary: written, lyrics, sharing, addition.
"The song is written about the love ... "=> The song tells the story of the love....
"I have strong effect on lyrics" => I am strongly affected by the lyrics/ The lyrics has strong effect on me.
An amazingly TALENT => talented singer
I cant understand what you said between 00:46 - 00:52, 00:58. I think the reason might be your pronunciation
You have to work a lot on your pronunciation, which is too hard to understand.

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Traditional music is more important than international music. International music is only for entertainment which (G => . It is) famous among youths for its dynamic rhymes (V => rhythms)  and the words (E: lyrics) attract youth's (their) mind(s). But (G => Different from these popular types of music,) traditional music roots (E: is rooted) in the culture and represents the history and traditions (of a country or a community). Culture must be alive for new generations, (how to link these two clauses) people must be get connected to traditional music for getting culture alive. (=> Therefore, if new generations are about to get their culture alive, it is necessary that they get connected to traditional music).

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Your writing is easier to read now. You developed a very clear structure. It was such a big progress. Well done. There're still mistakes, but don't worry, you are learning and cannot be perfect at the very first times. Just keep noticing and moving forward.

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Good things: learn something new made me improve my writing skills
Bad things: I forgot doing my homework

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Thank you for submitting your work. You definitely had some clear ideas of roles of music and expressed them concisely in paragraph 2. Please pay attention to grammatical errors and other mistakes below. I'll explain them more in class.

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Nile, what's that junior humming there.
What 's my humming? I just wake up this morning with in my head. It's that song ... you know ... hm hm hm...
No, no idea. No idea with talking about ... but it's annoy, so could you stop it, please.
That's my problem, i can't stop humming it out loud, it's just keep repeating in my head hm hm hm...
Do you know the name for that,  the song keep repeating in your head.
This's name I don't know what is it, you shouldn't told me that.
you're right. It's an earworm and earworm 's not sound nasty.
Is that cure for that.
No, I don't think so hm hm hm and this program with talking about music and how it influences us.
But first Nile, can you answer this question "Is purpose how musical anhedonia doesn't mean they:
A. hate music
B. can enjoy music
C. can't hear music
Well, errr... anhedonia sound like an illness so I'm going to go for C can't hear music hm hm hm...
Ok Ok, you know suddenly. Should I could hear music... fine down. You're wrong. All right. Later wrong.
Now listening to profess the change spent telling it how music effect would we use to eat and drink.
About *** order a glass of wine. The French music *** Germany behind the counter you likelihood a *** wait up and the play classical music you have to escape the *** little bit more.
What's the likelihood a view spending more a rope.
Quite likely active Nile and likelihood means a chance something happening, have a good glass of wine uhm uhm me too
The why do we spend more with classical music plant?
Good question. Well, it makes feel a bit classy that stylishing and sophisticatied
Uhm I'm guessing hip hop doesn't have the same effect than I, right?
No, you're right Nile, so affection is same the bar restaurant music to manipulate their customer and that means to controls or influences.
Earworm ... the messing in my mind ...  I know. It doesn't stop that restaurants also use the tempo or piece of the music to change people behavior affect tempo customers in and out quickly busy time. On the other hand, there are many customers the restaurant may want to keep people in took place for longer so they put on music with slow tempo to create too more relax atmosphere and atmosphere is contact means mood or tone in the place or situation. Now music is also use to create atmosphere in film *** that is why's talking about music in the movies. The director my company says look "can you have bring the romance to sense with the music so am I write something beautifully romance and lyrical worth it with I got. Suddenly, the sense would be much more romantic, much more tender, much more sexy every need to feel and the music has a power to do that achieve that effect.
Sexy, tender, lyrical, romantic that's all emotion of stuff. And lyrical actually means is pressing strong emotion.
So what's your favorite romantic moment in the film?
There was so many *** sucker for romance one a violent to stop playing, stop blubbing *** had a good cry ...  So sweet.
*** sucker for something for example romance means you can't resist it.
I'm more sucker for horror myself.
Well, music is crucial or extremely important in creating atmosphere in horror film.
That's very true. Music is often use to great tension and suspense or feeling anxiety excitement.
Yes, Can you remand his cycle without the violent music.
Now remember the beginning of *** the *** what musical anhedonia means is it someone who
A. hate music
B. can enjoy music
C. can't hear music
And I said can't hear music and that 's a wrong answer. Exactly, B someone who can enjoy music.
Not ***. Anywhere Rob, before we go any further how about the words again.
Ok well, the words we have today was earworm, musical anhedonia, likelihood, classy, manipulate, tempo, blubbing, sucker for something, crucial, tension, suspense.

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Good things: the mini game is good to connect with everyone
Bad things: my listening skills is still bad urrr I will try my best!!!

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Good things: I realize my listening skills are bad.😅😅😅
Bad things: my writing skills are bad too 😂😂😂