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Do you want to say why you have selected mateal wiring? you don`t need to use characters explaining about mount Olympus, but can refer specificially to it, if you want to ensure your reader understands this connection. Alternatively you can include a reference to Greek gods or mount olympus in your title.

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This piece is a visualization of this idea of the Bicameral Mind. The red string symbolizes a command as it comes down from ‘God’ on top of the mountain (The Greek gods resided on Mount Olympus, down to the right side of the brain, which communicates it to the left side (both parts of the brain are made of metal wiring). The thread then continues out into the rest of the exhibit- a meta-commentary on the inspiration for the rest of my pieces.

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This explains the concepts behind your idea well. I wonder if It might be better to to mention the square first, with it`s shaded dots, as this connects to the idea of individuality that you mention at the start, and end with the reason for the red line. you can also say symbolizing rather than to symbolize . It saves one character!

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In today's society, we expect everyone and everything to be normal and perfect at all times. My first piece “perfect square” was an attempt to throw a light on the beauty of imperfections in society. Portraying how the imperfect and unique has become something unfamiliar. The piece was created with acrylic paint. and the perfectly straight red line across the painting to symbolise that something is wrong. Differently shaded dots make up the background of the imperfect square, where the dots represents individuals.

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If you can remember the name of the artists or art work that inspired you, you should add that into the first sentence. Otherwise this is a good explanation of how materials and forms connect to your intentions.

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It was inspired by a collection of mirror statues placed in the woods, which represented the humans’ influence on our environment. My piece represents our surroundings’ influence on us. The mirrors reflect every color and shape around it and is therefore a great material symbolizing a theme of reflection. The shape of a head represents the human, while the pieces of glass are the things influencing her. Making a sculpture instead of a painting helps show what is physically around the artwork.

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Excellent description. The only suggestion I have is that you keep the whole text relatively formal. Drop the "as you can see" (informal language) and just state, throughout my exhibition..

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Here, wire and paint is used to construct birds. Organic shapes in both the birds and the branch soften the harsh texture of metal wire. The placement of the birds creates an illusion of movement. Air is important in this piece. The technique used forms an outline of the birds, which softens the impression. The piece was a result of experimentation with little intention behind it. Throughout my exhibition, there is a theme of 3-dimentional pieces. To me, it is easier to create art through touch rather than sight.

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I would start with the last part, from I used, but be specific, rather than say "Like" just say I used the rule of thirds, in deciding where to place my subject. It may also be possible to summarize the explanation by saying what your reaction was to learning about this, I was shocked/amazed etc to dicover that people bought work without seeing it, and this challenged my ideas about art. It is good that you connect this to the visit to the white cube.

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What about starting with the last sentence. The building is a symbol of capitalism? Then you can have the rest of the intormation. If this is to be the first piece the examiner will see, there should be a comment about the connection to other works. In your case this coudl be use of colour.

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This piece is inspired by a visit our class had to 'the white cube'. We were told that most paintings there were purchased by wealthy people who did not even look at them before buying them, but instead got 'experts' to buy paintings for them. I used techniques like the rule of thirds, guiding lines and colour on top of black and white to put a focus on the right parts of the painting. I also used the symbol of a blindfolded man to convey my ideas.

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Abstract piece of chrysler building, with a background of geometrical patterns.

Formal qualities:

The background is blue to depict the night sky.

Geometrical patterns in the background.

Chrysler building is red to stand out of the background, which create a depth in the 2D painting.

Calculated the angles so the painting would look as realistic as possible, this also made the painting stand out from the background.

The size of chrysler building but also the actual building is a sign of capitalism.

Oil on canvas.

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Re colour - instead of saying the last part after sadness you could say that for you it Symbolizes comfort. Then it becomes evident why you chose it and you can drop the last part of the sentence.
Scale can be linked to the first sentence, you could also mention the bridge itself as a link between these two worlds.

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Here I wanted to show the link between my home and school, two of the most central aspects of my life. To add texture and to balance all the horizontal aspects I added the vertical threads. They also symbolize the constant rain in the city and the slightly nicer weather at home. That is why the threads are more dominant on one half of my piece. While blue often represents sadness, it is for me a very positive and comforting colour and that is why I chose it. (Something about size)

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Criterion C: Conceptual

How does your technical qualities contribute for the conceptual qualities and ideas of a piece?

Conceptual work should mention imagery, symbols and signs. Symbols don't have already be popular and exist; things in your piece can be a symbol.

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Line
Shape/from
Space
Tone
Colour
Texture
Balance
Rythm, Movement
Proportion
Emphasis
Pattern
Unity and variety

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Criterion B: Technical Competence

- Techniques used.
- Medium used.

Formal Qualities:

Colour, shapes, composition, texture, lines, space (3D work, how does space influence how we look at something?).

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-Technical skill
-Appropriate use of material
-Consideration for the overall experience of the viewer

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Intention, what the piecewas supposed to mean/achieve.

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theme,
underlying idea(s),

description,

inspiration(s),

intent ie. what were you trying to express/demonstrate with the work

A) Connection(s) to the rest of the works

B) Explanation of choices of medium

Techniques used

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Criterion A  - Coherent body of Works
Criterion B - Technical competence
Criterion C - Conceptual qualities
Criterion D - Curatorial practice (see prompt questions on its learning)