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Ouch said Khushi. Her arms and her legs were  hurting and her head was dizzy. Then she open her eyes and saw a robot. she stood up and asked the robot his or her name ?The robot replied I am a boy my name is Jehan what is your name? My name is Khushi ."Where am I"? You are in 3019 no I am in 2018 you are wrong so it is 3019 yes you are right.

So she went to her and the school was so cooler and there  was a big and tall slide on the play ground and was a swimming pool.Then she went to the park.IT was amazing there was ten swings, five slides, and six monkey bars.She trued a round and saw flying car she could not believe her eyes .She rubbed her eyes and wanted to go back to school she put her red flare up put it did not work she asked jehan if he could  scan the red flare/ jehan said o-k he scanned the red flare and said it is brook-in you need red chock. You can only find red chock at red chock lake. Do you know where it is? Yes! I know how to go there you need to pass scull island.

So let"s go there. OK said jehan  ( one hour later) are we there yet. One more hour okay welcome to  scull island.It is dark, crepe and has traps and dangerous animals like bears ,crocodile ,sharks, and jellyfish . It is okay we can do it we said Jehan yes we are going together but I don't wan't to go then but then i will not know where I have to go okay said Jehan thank you You are very welcome now let's go. first we have to go to the big lake. there is crocodile sharks and jellyfish then go Let's first shop get a pach of fish  to feed the fish and  get some insects   to feed the crocodile and make fake corrals  for the jellyfish to play with Will get some fish while you get some paint and some rocks said Khushi ok said Jehan.

So Khushi started getting some fish from the pond she was struggling at first  by then she got the hang of it and then she was done catching some fish. Then Jehan got the rocks and the paint what color did you get I got blue ,pink purple ,yellow ,and green said Jehan good said Khushi I am done catching the  fish let's start  painting the rocks will paint the Rock's blue,purple,and pink and you will colour the rocks yellow,green,and red said Khushi okay said Jehan. After 20 minutes i am done are you done said Jehan yes i am done. Now let's catch some insects. I will go on the west side and you will go on the east side. When you are done,come here where the fishes are, said Khushii. After 30 minutes, they both came back with some insects. Good said Khushi. Now, let's go into the jungle. On the right , there was three sharks and there were crocodiles on the left. I will do the right side and the fish and they went away too.

Then they went more farther into the  woods and then they saw two jellyfish in the lake. So Khushi said I will take the one on the right and you will take the one on the left, Okay?  Okay said Jehan. Jehan threw a corral into the lake, and the jellyfish went
further into the lake with the corral. Then Khushi did the same thing and the jellyfish went away. After wards they were out of the forest and saw the red chalk lake. Yes said Khushi, she put some chalk inside of the red flare. She remembered she had to bring something to school, so she asked Jehan do you have some jet packs with you.  Yes, I have two said Jehan. Can I have one, asked Khushi. Yes you can have one. She gave a hug to to Jehan and said Goodbye. Then she put the red flare in the air and the principal saw it and picked her up. She lived happily ever after.  The End.

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As Jade walked into the portal she felt a lot of pain. It felt like she was on fire! When she realized where she was she figured out why she felt that way. Jade  was a smart young girl that had straght dark hair and wore glasses. When she finally reached her destination she soon realized she was not alone. Aanya had just landed in this crazy place with her! Aanya and Jade despised each other! Aanya had a very fun personality. Jade always wanted to be alone and was very angry all the time, but even worse than that, the place that Jade had landed in was Dragon Island! Dragon Island was full of dragons and everything was burnt down. Everything was dull and in ruins.

"Well, this is just great!" Jade said without thinking. "Of all the people I had to land here with you!"

Aanya (with her kind personality) decided it would be nice to be kind to Jade. Instead of saying something rude back, Aanya didn't say anything and walked away. Suddenly, a big dragon came up and swooped Aanya off the ground! Jade, with the amazing skills she had learned from her reading over the years, climbed up onto a rock and brought Aanya safely back to the ground. While on the rock, Jade had smashed her side and broke the red flare that Mr. Heraldo had given them if they needed to get home.

Jade asked Aanya, "Do you have your flare?". Aanya checked her pockets, then slowly she shook her head. Jade sighed. Aanya probably lost it on the dragon.

Aanya went up to Jade and told her she was sorry. Jade didn't reply. Aanya decided to say sorry again. Jade had had enough of Aanya so she said "Stop! It would be better if you just let me do this myself!"

So Aanya did as she was told and they went their separate ways. Jade was happy (for once) that Aanya left. She thought she worked better alone, but of course she was wrong. Later on, as she was thinking of a plan, a dragon came up to her and blew fire at her! She dodged the fire, but tripped over a rock and the pain she felt when she came threw the portal came back. The dragon with it's matte-black wings, flew over to her. She looked into it's horrifying deep blue eyes. It looked scared!

She was confused, but with as much fear she saw in the dragon's eyes as she felt herself, she ran over to the place where she was sitting before and picked up a sharp piece of her broken flare. She knew from her reading that dragons could be trained using flares, so she took the flare and started approaching the dragon. She put the flare out and touched the flare to the dragons scaly skin. The dragon immediately swooped her up and flew her a couple miles to a beautiful waterfall where she found someone lying on the floor motionless. She looked straight at the persons face. Jade was hesitant for a moment. It was Aanya! Jade took a step away from Aanya, then she looked back and realized how thoughtful Aanya had been. She was a great person even though she was very different from Jade. Jade went to the waterfall and got a bit of water. She dropped it onto Aanya's face. Aanya woke up almost as suddenly as the dragon who lost her flare swooped her up from the ground. Aanya quickly got to her feet and as soon as she saw Jade she rushed up to her and gave her a big hug. Jade wanted to push her away, but she didn't. Jade had never liked hugs, but she felt this time it would be nice.

After the hug, Jade said, "Why don't we work to,"  she hesitated for a moment, "work together to find the flare?" Aanya agreed and they both made a plan to find the flare. "How about I go over there to find it and you go over that way so we can cover more ground?" Jade suggested. Aanya simply just nodded and off they went.

They searched until Jade got super mad because they could not find the flare. She got so mad that she kicked a giant rock, and it rolled away. She saw something red where the rock had been. It was the flare! She yelled as loud as she possibly could, "I found it!"

Aanya got excited and rushed over to Jade. Aanya  picked up her flare and laughed. Jade pet her amazing dragon. It had helped her find Aanya. She gave the dragon a hug and both Aanya and Jade used the flare together to open the portal and the principal brought them safely back to the classroom.

The next day, for the assignment they talked about how people should work together... on something other than a portal to get around. They showed everyone a picture of a strange looking piece of orange metal on wheels.

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Once Robert stepped into the portal he could not find any of his friends, but then he noticed he wasn't even where his teacher said he was supposed to be! He thought of an idea to look for something educational and well, he had found himself in space. Thankfully he had brought some sort of mask because he likes to be cautious. He was also very calm and intelligent. He had the nerve to go around and look for something educational, but as you know there is no gravity in space! Robert had the really good sense in how to kick hard so he started kicking in thin air and started moving.

It probably took at least three hours and Robert was really tired, but then Robert found something strange! He didn't clue into it initially, so he kept kicking and kicking and he finally got there. Then he scanned around and felt he was getting really hot and finally clued in before it was too late. He started kicking faster then he ever had in his whole life and you couldn't believe it! He found himself in our Solar System. He saw all the planets with his own eyes and tried not to look at the Sun. He saw Mercury, Venus, Saturn, Uranus, Earth, Jupiter,Mars and Neptune.

He kicked to Saturn and looked at its ring. He thought of his idea to look for

something educational and he found himself an asteroid piece for himself and smashed a little part off because he had a pickax.  Mr. Heraldo had said that they were gonna go mining. He took the asteroid piece and put it in his bag. After he started to explore the other planets but he didn't get too close! After a while he got tired and bored (and also especially hot) so he went to planet Earth. When he entered Earth he could not find the country he lives on so now he got really worried! He didn't know what to do, but then he remembered  Mr. Heraldo telling him "If you ever get lost just hold up your red flare!"

That's what Robert did! After a few hours the principal came speeding in a rocket ship to him. When he got to school he saw at least the three of his friends Lala, Sahana and Aanya. The next day he saw Mr. Heraldo and was so glad he was back and said he never wants him to leave again.The next day he went up for show and tell and showed everybody his asteroid piece and everybody was amazed and he had lots of fun for the rest of the day.

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Once Water got pushed into the portal he realized that he wasn't in the place he was meant to be! He got teleported to Pluto (the dwarf planet) and he had a spacesuit. He remembered that he needs to get something educational! Twelve hours went by, then finally a sandstorm happened. He was able some sand, but it was actually gold! He went back to where he got teleported from, but when he got there, there was no portal. Then he saw some torches and saw some green people. He pretended that he was one of them, and he also realized that they were aliens! He noticed that they had some sort of controller, and he wanted to see it. He snuck over and took it!

But then as soon as he got it an alien saw him take it! The alien went back to his tent, and then when he came back out he had a sharpened sword and a bow and arrow. Water was able to run away though! Then he pressed a button on the controller and he went through a portal! He ended up on Mars!

When he got to Mars Water was happier because he was closer to earth. By the way Water looked like a referee for soccer. When he pressed the  button he got teleported to Venus, and one second later he teleported again, but this time...

...this time he was just in black void. Then he found a red flare gun. When he shot it he saw the teacher come through the portal. He was happy, and he got back to school finally. Then Water showed him sand from Pluto and presented it to the class. He got a A+!

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Vincy's Story (connected to Romaisa's story)

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When she stepped into the portal, Aanya fell into Dragon Island! Aanya was a bubbly, social and kind person who loved strawberries. Dragon Island was filled with many dangerous dragons. The island has many broken and burnt structures. Everything was dull and in ruins. Soon she saw one of her classmates and realized that it was Jade. Aanya and Jade couldn't stand each other because they were very different. Jade always wanted to be alone and didn't work with people while Aanya was kind and bubbly. Although they didn't like each other, Aanya still was kind to Jade.

"Well this is great!" said Jade. Aanya didn't say anything back, but then a dragon came and swooped her up! Jade, with her skills from all the books she had read, climbed up a rock, grabbed Aanya and brought her safely to the ground. When Jade climbed up the rock to save Aanya, she had smashed her side and lost the flare that Mr. Heraldo had given her to return home!

"Do you have your flare?" asked Jade. Aanya checked her pockets and then shook her head. Jade sighed. Aanya, thinking to herself, thought she had lost her flare while on the dragon.

Aanya went to Jade and said she was sorry. Jade ignored her. Aanya said sorry to her again.  Jade (who had had enough of Aanya) said "Stop! It would be better if you just let me do this myself!"

After that,  Aanya starting walking sadly by herself and suddenly found a piece of her flare! Aanya started getting super happy! After that, Aanya kept going and got a tiny bit scared. There were many dragons around her and she felt very suspicious. She realized that the dragons were looking at the flare. Aanya kept going because she needed to find the other half of the flare to get back to school. She only had half of the flare and needed to find the other half. She kept walking, but did not see Jade one single bit for some reason. Aanya, questioning herself, wondered why she hasn't seen Jade, but Aanya kept searching. She got super tired, so she sat down. Then she saw a glowing red light, she had found the other half of the flare! She put the pieces back together.

Aanya was about to use the flare, when suddenly she started thinking about Jade. Aanya felt bad for Jade, but then all of a sudden one of the dragons came up to her, looked at the flare, then swooped up Aanya! The dragon was taking her somewhere! Suddenly Aanya slipped off the dragon and fell to the ground. She felt extreme pain and passed out. Finally, when she woke up she saw Jade. She had fell near a beautiful waterfall. Aanya had lost her flare again! Aanya told Jade that she had found her flare, but it was nowhere to be found. Aanya had lost her flare again! Jade decided to help Aanya find the flare. Aanya was surprised! They both worked together to find the flare. They had a plan to separate and meet back at the spot Aanya fell at. They went there separate ways and soon Jade yelled "Aanya! I found the flare!"

Aanya got super excited and they both met back in the spot Aanya fell. When Jade used the flare, Jade and Aanya both returned back to school with the help of the principal. For their presentation they both learned about teamwork... and that people had to think of a better way to get around that portals. Why did they use portals anyway?

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When Mr. Heraldo messed up the field trip, Pill was transported to some sort of video game world! Then, huge words appeared and said Ultimate Smashers Adventure.

Pill then saw a wizard when he arrived. Pill said hi to the wizard and the wizard said nice to meet you. Pill said how do I get out of here, and the wizard replied you have to beat the game. How do I play the game said Pill? Easy, said the wizard. First, you need to get some people to help you fight. Pill said where can I find people to help me fight?

We can go to a castle where there are knights that have super powers to help you. But I will give you super strength said the wizard. Then Pill asked how do we get there? Then, the wizard pulled out a magic broom stick. then they suddenly appeared at the castle. They saw the knights that the wizard was talking about and Pill saw them using there powers.

Then a huge rock was going to hit the knights but Pill used his super strength and stopped the rock from hitting them. Then the knights said you are very helpful and strong person. When Pill saw the knights he realized they were all different colors and he thought they each had different powers. The wizard told the knights if Pill can use their training area. So the knights let him. The wizard said this is a test to see how powerful you are.

Pill said okay, but he was a little bit nervous because it looked very hard. The wizard gave him an A+ and Pill was so happy. The wizard said that is a very cool thing to get an A+ on the first time. Then the knights became friends with Pill. Then they all piled on top of Pill and started to tickle him and he laughed so much. Then they all got off him and looked at him and said, why are you wearing a skull cap and a bow tie. Pill said because I am from somewhere else.

Pill was also dark skin and a boy. Then the wizard said we are going to a smash arena for the ultimate battle. Then the wizard used his broomstick to fly all the way to the smash arena. They finally arrived to the smash arena, and they saw the ultimate boss.

He was called the Dark knight and he was one of the best fighter's in the game. The wizard gave him laser powers and freezing powers. They all worked together to attack the Dark knight but he was still to powerful.

Then, Pill had an idea and said we all should attack at once. Then the dark knight was getting weaker and weaker. Then they all used up their powers and they finally beat the Dark knight. But there was another problem, Pill still couldn't get back home.

So one of the knights gave him an emergency flare. Then Pill used it and then somebody in the arcade saw the emergency  flare and then they put their hand and reached in the portal. Then Pill was back in the arcade. Then Pill went to his school and told I learned about team work. The end.

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When Ronald fell through the messed up portal he was teleported to a mysterious island where he saw a rain forest with people living in it. Then suddenly I was scared because he didn't like meeting new people and he wanted to try to hide behind a bush. But then the people herd a noise and were wondering what it was, they new zero animals live here and suddenly they saw the a bush moving and went to look and behind it. Then they saw me and were like who are you and quietly I said "I was from a school but then how did you get here I fell through a portal and my teacher tripped over his feet messing up the controls and every student was teleport to a different place and I got here."                                                                                                                                                            The people then asked why don't you spend some time with us for now so we can show you what it's like here. Then I went with them and showed me what they do all day first they showed me how they would use food and it was pretty cool. Then they showed how they would build homes and sleep and I was impressed how they would do all this stuff. Then it was afternoon and they told me how to play some games they made up and all of the games and were fun. I had played 4 games with them. Then it was the evening
and they made a loud noise with a bell saying diner time then suddenly every one came and sat down same with me and the food tasted weird and I didn't really like it. Then it was bed time for every one and they had even built somewhere for me to sleep. Then after 12 hours it was morning and It was breakfast time and the breakfast taste so bad I almost got sick and I realized I wanted to go back to school so I brought out my emergency flare and a person came to me saying what are you doing.                                                                             Then I smiled saying nothing then the person went away and I used the flare and went back to the school. Then I was happy and I had brought back that It's hard to do things in life but if you work together you can build stuff and you can also make friends.
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Characters personality
- smart
- cool
- lazy
- clumsy
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- wears a hat
- wears blue pants
- has thin hair
- wears a t-shirt
Characters actions
- always smiles
- likes talking
- doesn't like meeting new people
- want's to always get a good grade

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Mr. Heraldo had taken every student to the portal, then they landed on what they thought was a beautiful island. The island was full of fruits and cute and safe animals. All these animals had food to eat so they could survive on the island for so many years.

Talula herself had beautiful hair and she always had the same hair style. She always wore blue in winter and she loves the snow. She loves to eat a lot too!

Talula was shocked and started to ask, "Mr. Heraldo how did we get here? Did we use that magical portal to get to this beautiful island full of tasty and fresh food?"

Then Mr.Heraldo said, "Yes, we all came on this island because of the portal. We will just explore this island for couple of hours and then we will go back to the school!"

Talula felt a little cold because the place around was full of snow and ice! The fruit island had just vanished because they did not realize that they actually had landed on a boat and the boat had now arrived to a place full of snow and ice. Then every one started to shout at  Mr. Heraldo because it all happened because of Mr. Heraldo! Talula reminded  Mr. Hearldo that if there is no fruit island our portal is not going to go back and then we can't return back to our class, school and our favorite house and our own room. Well, she had to share it with her brother, but it was still her house.

"No problem if Mr. Heraldo is here! No trouble will happen!" he said.

"But can't you see that we are lost in the place and I have no idea!"  a student said. "I think we are in the north pole."

Then Talula shouted "The north pole! If we are in the north pole how are we going to return back home?"

Mr. Hearldo said, "I have an idea! Until we have a way to go back home we will explore the North Pole! Then they made a straight line and just then Mr. Heraldo tripped over his feet (again) and all the students said, "No Mr. Hearldo, not again!"

Mr. Heraldo  said, "Start walking! I will just be behind you!"

They saw a polar bear! They were so scared that they started to run! They hid behind an igloo  and then Talula said, "If we do not go back to the boat we will be lost!"

Mr. Heraldo said, "I think that I forgot to mention that I have an extra portal button! I have an emergency red flare to call for help!"

Everyone said loudly, "Mr. Heraldo!"

Then he used the emergency flare and they were in a big ship full of people. Everyone got mad at Mr. Heraldo and then he had to go into the portal again, and then finally after they were back in school! They all were finally relaxed and Talula said, "I am never going to go with Mr. Hearldo ever again on a field trip!"

The end!

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When Mr.Heraldo messed up the field trip, a guy named Josh went to a game called Ultra Horror Adventure. He had a flare to get teachers to rescue him.

If the students break them in half, the teachers will know they are in trouble.
Since the school is magical, they used magic portals to travel to different places. He stepped in the portal and all of a sudden was in a game called Ultra Horror Adventure.

Then, big words appeared and said the adventure begins now! But there was a problem, he didn't know how to play the game! Then, a magical person appeared out of no where! After that happened, the person told Josh how to play the game.

Not in a while, Josh started to play the game. On the way, he saw bats, spiders and skeletons. This was getting very scary now.

He all of a sudden fell in a deep, dark cave. It was so dark that you could not see a thing. Then a light showed up from the front of the cave.

He had seen a Cyclops! The one-eyed-monster wanted to battle him! Since Josh wants to be a military guy, he knew how to escape the monster without hurting it, so he ran as fast as he could and went on forward.

After, he saw a tiny thing in front of him, and he went on forward and realized it was just a bug that has blue colored skin.

After that, he walked towards the light and it was a room with something in it, but what?

He slowly and carefully opened the door and saw a golden laptop! The laptop had lasers to protect it and Josh has to unlock a code for the laser to go down.

Then he saw a code that said 98712 and entered the code on the laser.

All of a sudden, surprisingly, the laser went down and Josh got the laptop in his hands! Since he got what he wanted, he ran out the cave happily waving the laptop around.

He then broke the red flare and then a teacher came to open the portal again so Josh could go back to school. For the next day of school, they had show and tell and he showed his golden laptop and explained how he got it and the exciting adventure story that he happened to have.

From this story, it tells that no matter what, don't give up and face all the problems you meet in your life.

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Once upon a time there was a small women named Lala. Who one day stepped into a big portal that took her to someone else's freezer. Lala is not a very smart person so that's why she is still in school. Lala is also a very nice girl that has brown hair that is kind of messy.She always squints her eyes, has a pink robe and she has pink skin everywhere. She is funny, kind, plays with lots of children, and is scared of small bugs. She is very quite, she gets sick a lot, she can carry heavy loads, she is big fan of traveling to other places like China, India, Canada and many more. Everyone went in the same portal but landed in different places around the world.

Once she went to the person's freezer she got so cold and very hungry. She was very small compared to the freezer. She is not used to the cold weather because it is very hot in her home country which is far far away. She doesn't know any way to get out of the place. She saw a very weird looking thing that was labeled " Popsicle ". She never saw something like that in her life and it say it has sugar and she never had that before. She kept it in her bag and stared to walk and look around. There was nothing there except a little piece of paper that said "straight ahead". She went that direction and saw a big fish that was 10 times bigger than her and it was Dead! She walked over to the next sign that said hi I am looking at you and I am invisible. She got so freaked out that she was going to faint. She fainted and when she woke up she saw a big monster that was a fish. The fish was the fish was big and mighty. He wanted to help Lala get out of the freezer because she is stuck and lost too. They they kept walking and came across  a Popsicle that talks and the Popsicle  in her bag can talk too. They were brothers and they are lost too. Everyone started crying because they think they will never go back to there homes. Lala would usually be crying too, but she was strong and is going to to put her foot down. She said " I will never give up and you wont too". There legs are very tired but Lala held all of them and started walking and she was so tired, but kept walking and walking and walking until she saw a sign that said "your almost there". They kept walking and found a plant that says you are suppose to put on your face. She wanted to bring it to school when she comes back to show and share and to talk about plants.

Suddenly she saw another sign that says " push here". So they pushed and pushed but they cant open it. As they were pushing, Lala thought her adventure was over so she her so she brag back her plant that was in the freezer because it needs to be fresh. She used her emergency flare and got to school and everyone went to there house too! Finally she came back to school and showed her plant to teach everyone about plants.
The End

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Rayaan ended up getting teleported to a rough land of diamond. When he realized what had happend, he was about to send out a red flare when he remembered that he needed to return with something educational. Luckily since he was in a glittery diamond land so he could just get a shiny diamond and go. But at the exact moment, he was about to get the diamond with his tool but then bright sunlight came into his eyes (and he hates when that happens) and the tool he was using to get the diamond with, went out of his hand and next thing he knew it was lost. He really was not liking this not quite normal field trip. With no other option he set of to find his tool. So many things were made out of diamonds. Diamond grass , diamond rocks , diamond trees and loads more. With so many places to go he just went where ever he felt was right.

Although that probably wasn't the best idea because he ended up getting lost near a diamond forest. After a few more hours it was night time. The sky in diamond land wasn't anything special, although he couldn't help but notice that the stars were made out of diamonds too. The time probably goes faster in the diamond world because he wasn't feeling the least bit sleepy. Although this made it much harder to look for a tool that was smaller than a ruler. He realized it would be almost impossible to find the tool at this rate so he decided to take a nap. He slept for 2 hours before he awoke to what sounded like diamond clanking. He panicked when he saw a diamond bear. Then when the bear saw him the next thing he knew he was fighting a bear made out of one of the hardest materials known to mankind with a mere diamond stick. He was lost in thought if he was ever going to make it out of here alive. His only focus was to make it out of here alive, not to destroy the bear. When the bear lunged forward he lunged back. He was starting to get worried. He got pushed onto the hard diamond floor a few times then he began running for his life. After that he kept on running until he realized he was in the same spot as where he started, when he got here. And there was his tool lying right in front of him. He let out a sigh then got a small diamond, used his red flare and went back to school with the principal.

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This was really going to be a crazy, wonky ‘field trip’ for Bros Naeem. Bros Naeem Gets teleported to the Xbox x . in the field trip he was wearing all black and the place was a very dim forest.

He was wondering what has been happening ,suddenly Bros Naeem tripped on a small rock but he didn't hit the ground. Later on he wondered why he did not fall.Then it was like he could not control his body and suddenly he started jumping and jumping then jumped again and started soaring throw the sky. Then he went to his room and it was so dirty  so he would want to clean it but his body...Suddenly it turns dark and he could control his body yes he said in a happy fashion. after that he herd growling in the distance he wondered what it was of coarse he didn't know what was going on.Even though he
didn't know what was going on but still shut all the windows closed all doors and hid. Later on he herd nothing suddenly he heard the window break and a wolf growling he new he could not fight a wolf. Then the wolf came and he ran like never before he new that he cant out run a wolf so he ran and was cornered suddenly he shot lasers and the wolf got scared and ran away. He wondered what happen then he fell and fainted because he did know what was going on.When he woke up he could not control his body and was getting controlled. After a while it turned dark again and he could control his body but this time nothing attacked and he triped hit the ground with his head  and didn't hurt he was so confused when he got back up 1st he tripped and did not hit the ground then shoots lasers and now he hit the ground and it did not hurt now as he said wow in a smile.next day came in the morning he could not control his body again he hated that he couldn't control his body day after day after day in the morning he could not control his body.But 1 day he went to wonder around his world if an animal ever came lasers would just shoot so no animal came to harm him he suddenly he herd a snake talking to him he did not know what it was then he noticed that he was talking to a snake he asked snake in a scared voice where he is the snake said you are in a digital world the snake told him where to go and where to find places.The n he asked how to get out this digital world he shouted!
The snake said you cant the only way is to go to a digital place where you can go to other digital worlds he said it was way north but also you specially you your the main character you cant control your body at day SAID THE SNAKE then im going to travel as much as i can he so in day i can control my body!

He went to places where the snake told him to go as he found a book about greek and told him how to go back and he grabbed a gun that shot a red flair and went home and showed his greek book and did history lessons to his school and a happy ending. The End

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Raymond's Story (Editing Draft) (Efited by Rayaan)

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Raymond's Story (Editing Draft) (Efited by Rayaan)

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This was really going to be a crazy, wonky ‘field trip’ for Raymond because he was teleported to Gaming land where all the games, equipment, lots of gamers and a fast food area! Raymond is a very clumsy, funny, calm boy, and he loves to play Super Smash bros and always wears vacation clothing. But then Raymond saw his favorite game. Super Smash Bros! Raymond needed to play the game and see what's inside it but Raymond was so clumsy, he fell over a big gaming PC. Raymond got very mad but he calmed himself down and moved on. Raymond was almost near the game, but then thought how he was gonna get into the game. He saw some wires connecting to the Super Smash Bros game but to get through, you must wear vacation clothing. Luckily Raymond always wears vacation clothing so he moved on. Raymond was so happy that when the guard told him that this game was dangerous,but Raymond never pays attention and he ran right threw.

When Raymond went through the wires to Super Smash Bros, he saw his favorite character Link fighting his best friends Ali and Naeem! Raymond didn't know this would happen and didn't know who to help, his favorite character Link or his best friends Ali and Naeem. Raymond decided to help his friends because link is just a character in the game so Raymond used his soccer skills to kick a ball into Links face and then link fell off the edge. Then Link lost all of his lives and lost. Raymond's friends were so thankful and happy that Raymond helped them and won. But then more links came out but Raymond and his friends had amazing soccer skills so they beat all the links and when they died.

They used a red flare to help them get out of here. Too bad they only got 99% but Raymond doesn't care about scores or marks so they just went on. Raymond and his friends used the flare to go back to school. Raymond and his friends made out of Gaming world and learned how to work together.

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Zoey, the cool and very smart tomboy girl, got teleported to a dark, misty cave! She looked around and didn't see anyone. She brought out her skateboard and started to explore. She found two potions but decided not to drink them. Then, she saw a keyhole. She looked from the keyhole to the potions, which had labels that read, Drink me! Then Zoey saw a note. It read: One potion must be drank. If the wrong potion is drunk, let's just say that you will never be the same again. Zoey knew that she had to drink one potion to get past the door because there was no key, but she didn't know which one was safe to drink or which one was not. One HAS to be poisonous, she thought. But luckily she had brought a special gadget that could sense poison. If the light turned green, it means there was no poison detected and it was safe to drink. Red means it was poisonous.

Zoey took out the gadget and scanned the left one. Then she scanned the right one. But the scanner told Zoey that BOTH potions were poisonous... so there had to be a KEY! "That note, it tried to trick me!" Zoey cried, angrily stamping her foot. Then she noticed something. The signature seemed very familiar.... the Shadow! She was famous for being such a terrible criminal. "I'll let her go for now," Zoey mumbled. She continued on her way, this time looking for the key to open the door.

As she skateboarded on her way to try and find the key to open the door, a few big rocks fell from the top of the ceiling. Zoey dodged them all like a pro. I'm SO glad that I'm in good shape! Zoey thought. Then she spotted something. Something golden, something shining on the cold floor. It was the KEY!! Zoey grabbed the key and skateboarded as fast as she could back to the door and inserted the key into the keyhole. Zoey watched, satisfied as the door slowly opened to reveal a safe. Then the safe slowly opened to reveal a weathered rock inside it! "Woah," said Zoey. "This really is cool." There was also ANOTHER note that read, Congratulations! You have made it to the end. Now you shall return back to school with the weathered rocks for show and tell. Then, somehow she teleported to a tropical island instead of school. Then a bumbling waiter with dark, poofy hair came by and he asked Zoey, "Were you the one who ordered the tropical smoothie drink? I forgot who did." "SERIOUSLY?" Zoey yelled. Then the waiter tripped over his feet and his bowtie went a little slanted. "Lower your voice, please," the waiter muttered, wiping smoothie off his shirt. But Zoey scowled at him instead. "I have had just about ENOUGH," she declared. She rummaged through her backpack and took out the red flares. Zoey sent them up into the air. About five seconds later the super nice principle, Mrs. Hatterson popped out of the portal. "Zoey, come with me please," said Mrs. Hatterson, gesturing Zoey to come over to her. Zoey stood beside Mrs. Hatterson and Zoey returned to school safely with the principle. She told her class about her adventure and let the weathered rock be passed around the class. Everybody told her that she had the best day ever and that she should be happy about it. Then, as she examined the rocks, she said, "It truly was the best day ever."

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When she stepped through the portal, Rose got teleported to a Minecraft world. She spawned in the middle of a field with lots of sheep and tall grass. When she got there she thought, "Hmm what could I learn that's educational I know in Minecraft there are lots of rocks and minerals, maybe I could learn something about rocks and minerals to show the class". So she went looking around for a cave. One hour later she said out loud to herself, " When will I ever find a cave". Suddenly she spotted a mountain up ahead. "Finally". She said. "There's a bigger chance that i'm going to find a cave here than in the middle of a field". Of course she was right cause a few minutes later she found a cave in the side of the mountain. It was really dark so she crafted a torch she would be able to see with it.

She started to walk into the cave, when she got in, the torch lit up the whole thing and she saw that she could get lost easily. She started to think that a cave would be to dangerous, then she remembered that she had a red flare and she changed her mind. She wondered whether she would go left straight or right she chose right ". Right is always right " she said. She started walking right she walked for an hour then she said: " when will I find any rocks or minerals" she walked for an hour, then she found some crystals stuck in the wall she used her pickax and got the crystals out of the wall. She started to examine them and soon found out that they were really shiny. She said. " I want to find some diamonds in here but I can only see crystals the rest of the way along this pathway"

So she went back to the opening and went straight into the left passage way. One hour into the passage way she found some diamonds in the wall she used her pickax and three diamonds popped out into her hand. "I'm getting tired". She said. So she took her red flare and broke it in half in a few seconds the principal came and took her back to the school. The next day when she went to school she told the class about crystals and diamonds and got an A+ for finding education in a Minecraft world.

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When Captain Invisible stepped through the portal he got teleported inside of a computer. Captain Invisible wears jeans sunglasses and a suit jacket he likes school you also cant see his head. It was very bright and he could not walk far because he is in a rectangle. Captain Invisible walked very quickly to Google chrome and touched it and suddenly something opened inside of the computer. The app chrome opened he went to the search area and touched it. He could type something, He typed 'How to get out of a computer if you get stuck in one'. he thought that the principal would not be able to bring him home if he was in the computer. Then he pressed enter and it said you have to make a Google slides presentation about what you have learned.

Captain Invisible then searched 'play lab coding' and made a game it was called play lab creation. Next he went to search Google slides and started making his presentation he typed about his code and added the link. Then Captain Invisible decided to learn about animals, he wanted to do jaguars. So he searched jaguars and it said that they are cats and they live in South America. They also eat meat, then Captain Invisible went back to Google slides and typed on a different slide about what he had learned. He typed that jaguars live in South America, their cats and they eat meat. Then he put his presentation on a U.S.B  and a portal appeared he stepped through it and he was outside. Captain Invisible used the red emergency flare and the principle came. He went back and showed his class his presentation.

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When Mad Ali stepped through the portal, he knew something was very wrong. He landed in Gaming Land! Gaming Land had controllers all over the ground! Consoles also were littered all over the place. It was really dark, and there was no one there except for two of his classmates (Vacation Raymond and Bros Naeem). All three of them were incredibly scared! Raymond and Naeem were very far away though, and Ali could barely see them off in the distance.

Mad Ali was usually a really mad guy, but this place made him feel even more angry! He was hoping for an ordinary field trip, and now he had no idea what he was supposed to be doing here! His dark jacket and his thin glasses had stayed normal looking at least, unlike all of the craziness around him.

It looked like all the Super Mario games had started to come to life! Super Mario, Luigi, Bowser and all of their friends and minions started to appear. Mad Ali began freaking out. This was horrible! He didn’t want to get stuck in a massive fight between video game good guys and bad guys! He noticed that Naeem and Raymond had already used their red emergency flares. They were going home right away, but Mad Ali knew he was supposed to bring something back with him to show off to his class.

Just then, something heavy fell on his head. The video game characters started to vanish! Mad Ali looked down, and saw a heavy piece of rock. He was lucky that he was okay! When he looked closer, he realized that it was a big lump of tungsten, tin and gold, all mixed up together! He knew that there were the minerals needed to make consoles. That would be something great to show off to his class!

At the end of this crazy, wonky, awesome ‘field trip’, Mad Ali opened his backpack and cracked open a flare. He was so excited to show his classmates the rock he was bringing back, and to explain all about how it was important to making video games (and video game worlds) real!

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... For Sahana .

As soon as Sahana fell into the portal, she fell down not knowing where she was. It looks like it was winter, but that made no sense. It was just summer and Sahana was really confused. Then Sahana saw a very big figure running towards her and it was a horse! It was very beautiful because it was black and had the most beautiful eyes ever. The place Sahana was in, she had no idea where she was, but there was a lot of horses and people dressed up to ride pretty horses, but there were no cars or buildings.

Next Sahana saw a van coming towards her. Then someone said "Hi! My name is Amber and my name is Scott!"

"This horse belongs to a girl in the stables where the other horses are," they said. So they asked her a question. "You seem to know how to calm the horse down so we need to ask you a favor! Would you walk the horse to the stables and we will follow you down to the stables?"

Sahana thought about it for a moment. Well, she  had nothing to do in this place except to get out, so she agreed. Then Sahana walked the horse to the stables. Two girls named Tori and Cat walked by and then started to talk to Sahana. They said, "You are so cool! You bought the most wildest and crazy horse in the stables that is so cool. Don 't worry Tori, some day you will be cool too! But wait until Emily hears about this. She is going to be so mean to her!"

Emily is the bully of this area. If someone saves something of hers she gets so jealous because she did not save it and mostly because it's hers. She hates that! Oh by the way what is your name? My name is Sahana! Well I have to find a way to get out of here. Oh, that is easy right? All you have to do is find the flare and then you find the button and tell it where you want to go and BAM you're there!  Where would I find this flare?  Well people say that the flare is hidden in a different stable and it is right around the corner. Oh well that is easy!

So Sahana and her friends went across the stable, but they could not find the flare anywhere. Then Cat and Tori said, "Maybe there is a secret cave and the flare is in there? We could try!"

They searched for the secret cave and then the stable manager said, "What are you guys doing here? You should be at your stable!"

They said we are trying to find the flare and get her back to her world. "This place is called Horse island. Hey you why do you think the flare is here?" said the stable manager.

"People tell us that the flare is here."

"Well it is not," said the manager in a suspicious way. Then they secretly came back into the stable because they did not believe him, and Cat saw a shimmer in an opening!

She said quietly, "Maybe the flare is in here!" So they looked inside and then they saw a bright green light! It was a stone, and the stone was a beautiful green colour. It looked like a emerald. So Sahana said her good byes and said that she wanted to go back to her world. She used the flare she found and then BAM! She was in her world. Normal cars, normal buildings, houses and much more, and on the bright side she also had learned how to ride a horse!

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When Mr. Heraldo tripped over his feet and landed on the portal's controls at that same exact moment, Chloe stepped into the portal, and then was sent into a different world and the next thing she saw was a pioneer village, somehow she had traveled back in time! (Chloe was a rich and

she had brown hair,brown eyes, and always wore sunglasses and went nowhere without her guitar).

Chloe could not believe her eyes, the town was small and not a lot of people lived there. Chloe thought to herself that she had to find somewhere to stay while she was there, then she found a little girl who seemed to be crying.

Chloe walked over to her and asked her what was wrong, and then the little girl said ¨A man named Mr. Heraldo sent me here by accident a long time ago.¨ then Chloe said ¨Mr. Heraldo just sent me here, hey can I stay with you for a while?"

Then the little girl nodded yes and Chloe and the little girl went in her house. Chloe asked the little girl how she got this house and the little girl explained that an old couple took her in and they were very poor, so just as Chloe was about to offer them some money because Chloe was rich she realized she was not wearing her own clothing, she had pioneer clothing on!

Chloe was freaking out, just then the old couple told Chloe that the only way to get money was to work in a job. So Chloe had to find a job but it was not easy. She could not find a job so she made a farm and it was hard.

Every single day Chloe had to go to her farm and feed the animals and water the plants and harvest them then when she would go home and cook for the family. Then read the bible, she had learned in grade 3 that being a pioneer child was harsh and then the next day she had to get water from a well that the couple had built a long time ago.

At the end of this crazy, wonky, awesome ‘field trip’, Chloe opened  her backpack and cracked open a flare. She was so excited to show her classmates the pioneer clothing she was bringing back, and to explain all about how people wore it back in the day and that they would wear it when they worked.

THE END                                                                                                                    (OF THIS STORY)

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Aydan's Awesome Story (Self Editing Daft)

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Aydan's Awesome Story (Self Editing Daft)

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Peer edited by Rayyan!

As Lennox stepped into the portal he got teleported to a long dark and gloomy hall of portals. As Lennox walked down the hall he realized that he got teleported to a place that existed in Minecraft Story Mode. Lennox was curious to which portals go where. As Lennox bravely stepped into a blue portal with a grin on his face he got teleported into a submarine.

The submarine was heading to the bottom of the Mariana Trench. As he would slowly descending to the bottom of the Mariana trench he realized that there were strange creatures at this part of the Mariana trench. When Lennox looked out the window he realized that was a giant octopus about to attack. Lennox steered the ship into a small underwater cave where the octopus couldn't get through. Lennox decided to steal his ship back to the top of the ocean. He stepped
back into the portal hoping to find a new realm to go into.

When Lennox got teleported Lennox decided to
enter a light green portal. Lennis got teleported into the world of lego. Lennox did not know what he can bring back to his class from the Lego world what he started to explore. As Lennox explored he found a Lego call junkyard. Eating used his knowledge. To build his own car. It took him lots of attempts to finally it did it. Lennox took a gear shift from an old car to show his class. Lennox got teleported back into the hall of portals with the gear shift .Lenox decided to go through a dark gray portal. It took him less than a second to realize that he was teleported into the Transformer world. As he snooped around that he was in ancient Egypt. Lenox saw 2 robots in a giant fight. It was Optimus Prime and Megatron. Optimus had a giant jetpack on his back. There was a giant machine in the middle of a pyramid. Lennox used his knowledge from the second Transformer movie to predict what the machine in the pyramid was. It was a machine that harvests energy from stars. Lennox snooped around hoping to find something to bring back to his class. After a little snooping around, he found the Autobots and Decepticons energy source. The energy source was called energon. He stayed to watch Optimus Prime when the fight. He new Optimus Prime would win the battle because he saw the movie. After he entered the portal that took him back into the hall of portals. Lennox loved this adventure.Lennox walked through the hall hoping to find a new portal to go on a new adventure.

Soon after, Lennox found a yellow portal. This Lennox was very energetic so we wanted to use some of his energy to run into his portal. Lenox saw a Pekka from the game Clash of Clans. Lennox took a minute to realize that he was a wizard on a mountain of stone. Two barbarians were attacking his mountain of stone. Lennox used his magic to destroy the Barbarian. They exploded into elixer. Two giants were attacking Lennox's mountain of stone so Lennox used is magic to destroy the giants. Soon after the opponent failed to get over 50% on Lennox's players base. Lennox didn't find anything to bring back to his class. Lennox stepped into the portal. Lennox used a red flair or the principle to come pick him up.

For Lennox's presentation he told the class about the energy source called energon .

THE END!