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Your Thick Question...  Good.  Your Thesis Statement... I like but it needs just a bit of work. I can challenge you and say, "why should women have to alter their looks to get ahead in the world." Think about it.

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Your Thick Question...  Good.  Your Thesis Statement... I like but it needs just a bit of work. I can challenge you and say, "why should women have to alter their looks to get ahead in the world." Think about it.

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Thesis

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If young people were able to express themselves through their cosmetology they be able to have a greater confidence by being allowed to alter their looks and stand for who they want to be. True, it isn't necessary to  alter your looks to be beautiful but people wear makeup to be  more confident not to hide behind their face. It can be compared to how a man feels wearing cologne. It helps the mental not physical state of a woman.

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How could cosmetology impact the self confidence of young people.