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Praise: Nice looking background, plenty of pictures, censored all spoilers.
Questions: None.
Polish: Could be louder tbh, I could hear it pretty well but it's always better when I can hear clearly.
Overall grade: 4.35/5 (87%, B+, could improve but bad.)
--RR

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P- A good theme, good pictures
Q- why did katniss want to fight?
P- you could of made it a little more spaced out
-Britney

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P- Examples
Q- format of story
P- Speak more clear
Anonymous (Ben Y)

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Praise: picks meaningful quotes and has evidence on the approach
Question: how come Harry's aunt and uncle didn't tell him that he was a wizard?
Polish: was loud enough that I could hear him well and had a lot of evidence.
-GB

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P the quotes are really good and give evidence on the critical approach
Q how do the boys have a bigger role in the book then the girls and how do girls still play a role in the book
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P-  A good theme, good organization.
Q-  When was the date of your book?
P-  Talking more clearer and slower.
M. Cromwell

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Praise- well spoken
questions- was hunger games a good read?
polish- well put together no need for polish imo
overall grade-a
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Praise: Good looking slideshow.

Question: why does motherly instinct involve gender criticism.

Polish: Needs to speak louder, i had trouble hearing her present.

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p - very well spoken

q - where did it take place

p - speak louder

jonathan whitehead

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Praise- good at explaining the theme/message
Questions- should i read this book?
Polish- no need for polish
Mackenzie Evans
overall grade A

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p- good summary about the book and theme
Q- why was he trapped on the island?
p- speak clearly and move less
by: Owen Cogan

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p: Good quotes that have a meaning
Q: Why does harrys uncle hate wizards
P: he was good, but could improve on speaking

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P- Nice explanation of the quote

Q- How did Thomas' friends follow him?

P- Speak out a little more

Dusty Krotee

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P- good quotes
Q-did you like the book
P-A for grade, quotes related to your thesis
By Ethan Currey

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p- spoken well and confidently
q-what big event changed your character
p- lots of information how each quote supports the thesis
by isabel

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P -- Explained everything very nicely
Q -- Why were the characters needing to be so connected
P -- A little louder
By Dylan Merchant

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P- Spoke confident
Q-Did you like the book
P-A  for grade, quotes supported the thesis
By Ethan Currey

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p-good qoutes
q- did u actually read
p- little louder
g- b+
-ty

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p- spoke very well and had lots of information
q- what about the story made it the theme it was?
p-the presentation flowed very well together and connected back to the thesis a lot.
Isabel watt

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Praise: has great quotes and evidence about the historical approach
Question: Why did Katniss and Peeta fake there love story?
Polish: had great quotes and evidence about the love story.
-GB

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P- good explanation
Q- why did his dad kicks him out
P- speak more clear
Connor Dunay

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p- theme and summary on the book
Q- Why did he think his life wasn't fighting for?
P- speak a little louder
By: Owen Cogan

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Great presentation i will be reading this book soon!!!!!!!! -Tyrez

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p - did very well explanation

q - should i read

p - speak more smooth

jonathan whitehead

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p: good quotes that are meaningful

q: how are the quotes related to history

p: try to look up from the computer an interact with the audience

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P the explanation of the book was really well and the quotes that related to survival were also good
Q how does this relate back to historical

P relate the book back to historical
- Kacey Patterson

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P-- Nice organization, and a Good theme.
Q--  How many robots are there?
P-- Talk louder.
M. Cromwell

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P -- Explains the background of the story very well
Q -- Why the main character is so touchy about everything with his dad
P -- A little less stammering
By Dylan Merchant

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Speak a little louder Kenzieee!!!!!!!!-Tyrez

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P- Good Presentation

Q- What did he rebel against

P- Work on working the presentation.

Dusty Krotee

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P- Made Predictions about society based on the book, which was very intresting.
Q- Why were the books banned in the first place?
P- There were no Secondary sources included in the Analyses

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Praise: good explanation of book.

Question: why were the books outlawed if they were irrelevant.

Polish: Need to make more eye contact

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Praise- good at explaining the quotes and relating to life
Question- did she ever die
Polish- speak louder
mackenzie evans
overall grade B

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P-  grabbing our attention to the book
Q-  why is the background have nothing do with your book has a native american feel to it.
P-  make your presentation short and sweet there is to many words
Gino Pisano

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P- Quotes
Q- can you add more tone and not sound like a robot
P- Speaking
Anonymous (Ben Y)

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P-- catches are attention very well

Q-- Was this book more sad or uplifting by telling a story
P-- have each quote with your critque all on the same slide

M. Cromwell

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p - creative pictures in the presentation

q - is it a good read

p - more steady at reading

jonathan whitehead

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P- catches are attention very well
Q-  Was this book more sad or uplifting by telling a story
P- have each quote with your critque all on the same slide
-gino Pisano

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Praise: Moderate volume with voice, definitely loud enough to hear, plenty eye contact (but not too much to make it weird lol).
Questions: Do they *have* to die for each other? How did he get the orcs to work for him? How many of the characters seem like heroes but are not really?
Polish: Could have been louder but I could still hear well.
Overall Grade: 4.44/5 (88.8%, B+, not bad).
--RR

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p-very enunciated
q-no questions here
p-more emootion
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p: good evidence of gender criticism
q: why is the dad mad and mean
p: use bigger words and try talking with different tones

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P: good quote
Q: Why did the dad being mean to park about makeup
P: good tone

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P- good creative presentation spoke well and starts off giving us a good backround about the story
q- how does the story theme connect with the main characters and the approach?
p-well spoken and said and the presentation was very cool and interesting
isabel watt

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P- Good Speaking
Q- why exactly is it called the " Chocolate war"?
P- Good explanations

Kara Johnson

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Praise: has a lot of evidence of gender criticism
Question:Why did the father have to be mean about Park being different?
Polish: spoke clearly and was able to understand the concept
-GB

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Speak louder.
Good information.
Like the theme statement.

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P- good speaking loud
Q- where is trinity high
P- make some eye conatct
Connor Dunay

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P- Good quotes
Q-Did you like the book
P- A for grade, your quotes relate to your thesis
By Ethan Currey

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Praise- explaining thesis and quotes and how they relate to the book and the sites that he researched
Question- what is the main character trying to over come?
Praise- talk louder
mackenzie evans
overall grade B

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P- Very good analyses of the book, Made me want to read Lord of the Rings!!
Q- Was the book you read the first in the series?
Q- Could talk about the Secondary sources when presenting, listed them in Powerpoint but didn't talk about it.
- Megs

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Praise: Had some volume in his voice.
Questions: Why do they pit 24 kids (who are barely, if even at all, going through puberty) to the death?
Polish: Could have been louder, since there's other people doing the same right nearby.
Overall grade: 3.75/5 (75%, C, could improve on.)
--RR

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Why did she volunteer?
Nice theme

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P- good at explaining the theme and the book
Q- what is she trying to overcome?
P- nothing
mackenzie evans
overall grade A

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P The theme is really good how you can overcome anything
Q what do the characters have to do to overcome challenges in the book
P nothing really
- Kacey Patterson
overall grade A

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Praise: has good evidence of sociological approach
Question: Is there really a point of reading this book?
Polish: could've spoke loud but had good evidence
-GB

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P:  Good quote
Q: Should i read this book
P: Could talk a bit louder

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P- Good introduction
Q-Did she die when he was raped?
P-  Good speaking
Kara

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P- Good presentation

Q- How did he meet the girl

P-  Speak up more
Dusty Krotee

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P- Good speaking
Q-Did u like the book
P- A for grade, quotes supported your thesis
By Ethan Currey

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p - amazing

q - should i read

p - none

jonathan whitehead

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Praise: good volume.

Question: When Susy was raped was she killed afterward and that why she was in heaven.

Polish: must explain differently, caused confusion.

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p: good evidence and connection to sociological
q: what else is good about this book
p: it was good, no criticism

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P: good quotes
Q: how come he went through what he did
P: Could speak a bit louder \

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P- Had a good summary of the book, Had an interesting approach to it!
Q- How did the book get its title?
P- Could include secondary sources for the book
Megs

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P--  amazing
Q--  How weird is your PowerPoint
P--   none
M. Cromwell

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P really good quotes
Q how can the people learn from the doctor
P nothing
- Kacey Patterson
Overall question A

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p-she spoke every well and had a good set up for the project
Q-what were some of the exaples of the part where he is touched by god that seems very important to thhe theme
p- all the t

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P -- Provides adequate information
Q -- Is each chapter a new story?
P -- A little less stuttering
Dylan Merchant

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P- transition is very well
Q-   why didnt you show us the women side
P-  catch our attention better
-Gino Pisano

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P-good speaking
Q-why does voldamore fear dumbaldore
P-make soem eye conatct

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q- b

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P- good Evidence
Q-why does he burn down houses
P- Speak more Clearly
Connor Dunay

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P- grabbing our attention
Q- why are there different versions
P- organization
-Gino Pisano

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p:good themes
Q:how does in connect to psychological
P:give more quotes and evidence on psychological and less random stuff
matt

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Nice theme
Was judge?
Good speaking

-TYRE

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P- good job taking your time
Q- Why did the book connect to the thesis
P- you could of made it a little more organized
-Britney

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P- good at explaining the theme
Q- what is park and Eleanor going through?
P- talking louder
mackenzie evans
overall grade A

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p- very well spoken and has a good intro to the story and how the whole book connects to the theme
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P-- Kind of a good book
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Q-louder maybe
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