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My score is 43.8%. Though it was not that bad, but the challenge of ranking the implementation of protecting the planet from the most effective to the least effective is still much more difficult than I expected. The challenge involved aspects like food, transportation, electricity use and waste management, etc. For some topics like food, I got all the sequence correct, but for topics like the electricity use, it turned out that I ranked all the four solutions in exactly the opposite way as the correct answer which was quite astonishing. This meant I still got a lot to learn about how to effectively curb the climate change.

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Tone is appropriate - there may be some instances where it becomes subjective- you wouldn't really use rhetorical questions as then it becomes quite subjective.
You fulfilled the task and answers all parts of the prompt with some development. Informative and supported.
Where is your headline though? and the ending should just be informative- this is a little summative . What useful informative could you end with?
L- 10/12
m- 11/12
CU - 5/6

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In terms of the negative effects, I realized the obsession on physical appearance made students now had no heart for study and always focused on following the latest trend. As an teacher in Moordale high school, I am very concerned about the possible consequences if we let the current situation go even worse. The fixation for students on physical appearance apparently has caused an increasing number of conflicts and arguments between them. Students have been fighting around the corridor, arguing about who wore the better clothes. More severely, the obsession made people lacking confidence on physical appearance feel anxious and suffered from mental problems. Students humiliated other students solely because they wore austere or plain clothing which brought unprecedentedly detrimental impacts to every student in Moordale high school.

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Most impressed photograph about Shark Finning industry

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Most impressed photograph about Shark Finning industry

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The image has the most effect on me presumably has is the picture depicting the scene of hundreds of dead sharks without fins lying on the floor of a huge sea market or a port. The picture reveals the cruel nature of human slaughtering towards the sharks which inevitably cause their population decimates by 90 percent. The appalling trend is unlikely to change in the near future as the shark fin industry is still not banned in many countries around the world. I reckon pictures exposing the dark sides of the shark finning industry like this one would make people realize the vulnerability of sharks and gradually have the awareness to advocate animal conservation as well as the banning of the trade happened in the shark fin industry.

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1.  Environment- students of climate change
2. Engage- effective ways to curb examples
3. Be conscious- Personal examples of how to affect change
4. Awareness- school class average
5. Useful information- leads to webistes, booklet

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Titles for 5 environment-related incidents

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Titles for 5 environment-related incidents

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1. Feature Article: "Made America Safe Again"! Trump Wall stops 200 meter high tsunami waves.

2. News Report: Atmospheric Methane content explodes, wiping out humanity on Earth.

3. Blog Entry: Too hot! 12 reasons why we can no longer live on Earth.

4. Review: Nonsense! Quentin's Perpetuate Motion is a childish daydream.

5. Pamphlet: Buying your 1st Nuclear Car 101