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What makes a good narrative is to Introduce a problem or complication that causes an issue which gives your story purpose.

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the events were crazy and they added dialog for each person and image they didn't go to the pool how would it be but it also had a hook-Alma

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What makes a good narrative is a good story line a title that summarizes the gist. A good explanation on whats happening. And a good wordplay.

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I feel like what makes a good narrative is that it puts a setting or feeling to the story that wasn't there before, like adding  extra  details to add and make more sense.

like the story says, he didn't go to the pool. it was a good thing, and just like flying tigers said the title and beginning hooked us in.

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what Made it a Good Narrative was All The Details that They Put In even The Little Parts Was Really Detailed. The Author also Used vary Discredited Details, and Also used Dialogs

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I felt like the author gave really good imagery because he/she described the tornado so well.

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I followed a turn of events turns out by the end the kids that the narrator was babysitting didn’t want to go to the pool that time and it led them to say that “the thing is we have each other”.- Avery

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What my group thinks makes a good personal narrative is to add lots of detail because when you add detail, it makes the reader want to read more because they want to know what keeps happening like in the story we were just reading. Detail basically hooks the reader to your story because it makes them want to read more.

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In the beginning the author is trying experience the hearing and the feeling, like your in that place  and part,
At the end it talks about how the storm is destroying and breaking the trailer.

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adding an interesting title.

Adding a hook to the beginning of the story.

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Lots of surprising parts

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Followed a sequence of events.

It ended up being a good thing that he didn't go to the pool which is connected to the title.

The title and beginning hooked us in as readers.