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FINAL /Third draft resume. With reference to my previous post (find the post below), this is the last draft. Please proceed posting your last submission in your Google Site/eportfolio

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FINAL /Third draft resume. With reference to my previous post (find the post below), this is the last draft. Please proceed posting your last submission in your Google Site/eportfolio

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Feel free to comment. Thank you Ms Ja

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Do check for grammar & language, especially the use of tenses. For the skills, only FOUR (4) skills are graded and if you want to be awarded marks, do check for parallelism & write only four skills.
Once you have completed updating your corrections, please proceed with final submission on your Google Site. All the best!

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Good work. Do check for the last time to update the 4 skills as per my previous comment. Grading/marks awarded for this section will be following what we have learned in class and from textbook. 

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Good work. Do check for the last time to update the 4 skills as per my previous comment. Grading/marks awarded for this section will be following what we have learned in class and from textbook. 

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You can proceed posting your final submission in your Google Site/eportfolio. All the best!

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Good job! Just few more corrections to be updated and you can post your final submission (not draft anymore) on your Google Site/eportfolio.

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Good job! Just few more corrections to be updated and you can post your final submission (not draft anymore) on your Google Site/eportfolio.

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You haven't read the notes and refer to the textbook and it is evident from your final draft. You may post your final submission on Google SIte/eportfolio. No more draft submission ya. And again, if you wish to update your resume, please refer the (1)video class meetings, (2)notes and also from the (3)textbook (shared link of screenshots https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1hJWuPyM_RO12cZn5bc17ANJB75rXXluU?usp=sharing).

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You haven't read the notes and refer to the textbook and it is evident from your final draft. You may post your final submission on Google SIte/eportfolio. No more draft submission ya. And again, if you wish to update your resume, please refer the (1)video class meetings, (2)notes and also from the (3)textbook (shared link of screenshots https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1hJWuPyM_RO12cZn5bc17ANJB75rXXluU?usp=sharing).

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Lastly, refer to epembelajaran site on the Assignment 1 marking rubric (I have shown you how and where to find it in the previous class meeting videos). Do check how I will mark you based on the criteria of markings. All the best!

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Please update your draft based on my reviews and you may post the final submission on your Google Site/eportfolio. No more drafts. Please refer the (1)video class meetings, (2)notes and also from the (3)textbook (shared link of screenshots https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1hJWuPyM_RO12cZn5bc17ANJB75rXXluU?usp=sharing). And don't forget to refer to epembelajaran site for marking rubrics to know what possible marks that I will award you based on your resume.

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Please update your draft based on my reviews and you may post the final submission on your Google Site/eportfolio. No more drafts. Please refer the (1)video class meetings, (2)notes and also from the (3)textbook (shared link of screenshots https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1hJWuPyM_RO12cZn5bc17ANJB75rXXluU?usp=sharing). And don't forget to refer to epembelajaran site for marking rubrics to know what possible marks that I will award you based on your resume.

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Please update your final draft of resume and do refer to the EOP textbook (shared folder or your textbook). You may post your FINAL submission on your Google Site/eportfolio for final grading.

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Please update your final draft of resume and do refer to the EOP textbook (shared folder or your textbook). You may post your FINAL submission on your Google Site/eportfolio for final grading.

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Great job! Just update few more based on my reviews. Do check for grammar & spellings. You may upload your final submission on your Google Site/eportfolio

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Great job! Just update few more based on my reviews. Do check for grammar & spellings. You may upload your final submission on your Google Site/eportfolio

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Good, Sahira! You can now post your final submission on your student eportfolio site.

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Good, Sahira! You can now post your final submission on your student eportfolio site.

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Do check for grammar especially the use of tenses, punctuation & spelling (I can't check that or else I might as well grade you now).
Please use personal & professional email.
Please provide more info than just names of your referees.
All the best! Insya Allah

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Well done, Rosmini! Alhamdulillah. You may post your final submission in your Google Site. 

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Well done, Rosmini! Alhamdulillah. You may post your final submission in your Google Site. 

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Please describe your task description (related to the job ad) from your curricular activities to replace your work experience.
All the best, Insya Allah

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Do refer the marking rubrics on epembelajaran site so that you will know how I will grade your resume

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check for grammar and spelling errors ( I can't check that in draft reviews, might as well grade you). Lastly, please arrange your resume in ONE page only. All the best, TYH!

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you are using the template from the internet instead of what I taught you. Make sure you reread the notes and especially sample of resume.

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Superb job, ZeWei. You matched the job ad very well

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Superb job, ZeWei. You matched the job ad very well

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Please rearrange the 4 skills and the rest are all ok. You can post your final submission on your eportfolio/Google Site for final grading.

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Rewrite your career objective statement, since EOP grading is based on what I taught you and not in the ready-made resume template.

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Please rephrase your Career Objective Statement and don't forget to include the name of the company.

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Please read my comments and update your resume

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Please read my comments and update your resume

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Please add any interpersonal skill as part of your four skills.
For personal qualities, there is a repetitive use of same quality, 'thorough' and sense of perfection. Please find another different quality but relevant to the job ad (ex. patience, etc.)

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you are using the template from the internet instead of what I taught you. Make sure you reread the notes and especially sample of resume.

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Please read my feedbacks and update your resume

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Please read my feedbacks and update your resume

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Please read the comments and update your resume

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Please update your resume with necessary amendments

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Please update your resume with necessary amendments

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Please read my comments and update your resume

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Please read my comments and update your resume

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Find your name (following your Student ID order)

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Please upload your chosen Job Ad here

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(Watch the video posted on epembelajaran@UMT)
I will check them here and based on my feedbacks, please update them until the final draft.

These drafts will soon be uploaded in your Google Site respectively, but not now.

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Thank you for your attention Ms. Ja.

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for Job Application

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Please have a look, thanks in advance Ms Ja

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Please have a look,thanks in advance Ms Ja😊

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