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In Khaled Hosseini's novel The Kite Runner, the progression of Baba and Amir's relationship (as they age) reveals growth in their individual maturity levels, thus exposing stereotypical father-son relationships do not truly exist.

"as they age" is in parentheses because i am not sure if i want/need to include it ... what do you guys think?

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In Khaled Hosseini's The Kite Runner, the character development of Amir and his relationship with Hassan demonstrate that while his shame (that came from a place of selfishness and jealousy) brought out the worst in him, his guilt led him to think about how his actions affected others and gave him a chance at redemption.

(A person's guilt can cause them to take accountability for their actions. A person's shame only makes them feel sorry for themselves.)

I am trying to introduce the focus on the difference between shame and guilt in The Kite Runner, but I don't want my thesis to be too complicated or lengthy. What do you guys suggest?

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In Khaled Hosseini’s The Kite Runner, racial tensions are emphasized by way of parallelism between defenseless animals and the Hazara people, a strategy employed by the Pashtuns not to uphold tradition, rather to protect against a threat to their own power.

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In Khaled Hosseini's The Kite Runner, Sohrab's simultaneous manifestation as a symbol of redemption and guilt for Amir illustrates that redemptive actions don’t result in freedom from guilt.

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Throughout The Kite Runner, Khaled Hosseini's depiction of Amir's development from selfishness to selflessness demonstrates that the most effective way to grow and seek closure beyond hardship comes from one's ability to accept their problems.

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In Khaled Hosseini's novel, The Kite Runner, the juxtaposition of Assef's, Hassan's, and Amir's childhood with the challenges during and as a result of war presents the definition of individual morality. Ultimately, the characters' childhoods and growth illustrates that the definition of morals in childhood determines whether history will or will not repeat itself.

I'd really appreciate any advice you guys have on how I could condense this into 1 sentence. Ideally, I'd like different wording for "history will or will not repeat itself" but I'm stumped. Any ideas? Thank you both so much!

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In The Kite Runner by Khaled Hosseini the guilt that Amir, Baba and Rahim Khan deal with demonstrates that guilt leads to redemption.

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In Khaled Hosseini’s The Kite Runner, and adult Amir seeks redemption in the ruins of his and Hassan’s childhood relationship, demonstrating that the wisdom of time breeds remorse for past failures.

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Baba's actions seem straightforward at the beginning, but they gain hidden depth once baba's guilt and parallels with Amir are understood, illustrating how actions can be interpreted as - and are driven by - countless factors at the same time.

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In Khaled Hosseini's The Kite Runner, due to rigid underlying social rules, those who prioritized how they are perceived to others as opposed to prioritizing those around them ultimately ended up in the best position.

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Through his reliance on a higher power, Amir’s repentance through physical violence, and sacrificial lamb imagery in The Kite Runner, Hosseini puts emphasis on the willingness of humans to escape from guilt, who sacrifice their rationality for short-term relief from their problems.

How can I make my thesis flow better so that my thesis can be communicated more efficiently?

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In Khaled Hosseini's The Kite Runner, Amir's dependency on his privilage to survive during tumultuous times reveals his unrelenting childishness, thus exemplifying the idea how redemption is never truly achieved until (fundamental change occurs) (truly escapes their past)…. I am struggling on the last part because I want to add something about how because Amir was childish he wasn't able to redeem himself

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In Khaled Hosseini's The Kite Runner, Amir and Assef's mistreatment of Hassan reflects the prejudice against Hazaras, demonstrating that those with greater priveleges will use their power to exploit those below them.

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In Khaled Hosseini's The Kite Runner, the contrast of Amir's motives in his relationships with Baba and Hassan illustrates the innate desire to feel superior to others around us.

I feel like it's worded weirdly and I don't really like my greater thematic claim but I can't figure out a way to make it more explicit and coherent.

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In Khaled Hosseini's The Kite Runner, the parallelism between Amir and Baba's ways that they handle guilt indicates that a lack of discussion about mental health in a family can create overlying issues that stays with a person all their lives. (Definitely will try and reword this)

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In Khaled Hosseini's The Kite Runner, guilt manifests itself in a unique way for each character causing an instinctive fight or flight reaction which will either end their guilt or prolong it.