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Your analysis is great but it's very wordy. Try to make some parts more succinct. 25 on criterion A.

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Lots of good analysis, thorough. full marks in all four areas

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20-25 on criterion A; good analysis but could use more quotation

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20-25 on criterion A; good analysis but could use more quotation

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This was a great analysis of the poem. It was thorough and I feel like you guys had a good focus on the themes and striking features.

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Very thorough and clear to understand.

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I agree with some of the other comments. There could have been more quotations which you all could have referenced so that we could see the features you identified in action

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This well written and described and it was presented clearly.

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Bottom Text

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Very effective presentation of ideas

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I love the visualization of the highlights, showing y'all know what y'all are talking about

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I love the visualization of the highlights, showing y'all know what y'all are talking about

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I LOVE this poem! Good analysis of the bookshelf in the poem and the stories.

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I LOVE this poem! Good analysis of the bookshelf in the poem and the stories.

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Small jump b/tw theme and literary features. Could use a bit more explanation for Criterion B

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Small jump b/tw theme and literary features. Could use a bit more explanation for Criterion B

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This analysis was concise well organized and very informative. You did a great job analyzing the main idea and theme.

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While analysis was thorough and in-depth, the presentation could have been more fluid. I would suggest relying less on the presentation and more eon your own thoughts.

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I like the poem that you chose! the analysis was very insightful and the textual connections that you made helped further the literary aspects that you chose to discuss

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very clearly understand the poem and able to analyze/explain meanings, techniques, etc. good presentational skills abcd 25

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The poem is very well analyzed and I like the choice of poem as well as the theme you identified. 25 for criterion C.

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I like the poem that you chose! the analysis was very insightful and the examples that you used to further these connections and global issues were clear and reflected in the poem

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The analysis was extremely insightful and the themes and connections were very clear to and coherent to the ideas that the author was trying to convey. Also adding the real world example really helped!

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Clear connection between features and meaning. Good on CritB

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It was very organized and well thought out.

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The presentation is well thought out.

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Awww yes my favorite peom

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very insightful analysis going line by line and including details about the poem. 25 on criterion C.

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Your observation of the sound involved in the poetry is insightful and definitely not something which would stand out to most people

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This was an awesome presentation! there were good connections and observations throughout, and your analysis made sense
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Great poem and interpretation and very organized presentation with great detail.

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Intertextuality was very interesting and helped me understand Murakami and Alvarez better

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Very interesting analysis and nice incorporation of reading the poem into the presentation. It helps with the audience's understanding. 25 on criterion C.

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Eye opening connections to other myths like father christmas and the north wind. I really liked the relationship between sand, time, and dreams.

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You have solid and thoroughly fleshed out literary features. 🍞/🍞

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Interesting Poem and great interpretation.

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insightful analysis and interesting hook to engage the audience. 25 on criteria C and D.

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really good presentation as usual, 25 on C and D definitely, also well done on A and B

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Like always, you guys did a great job of having an engaging presentation. I would focus on the elements of the poem more, and spend less time on the connections.

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Good organized and very detailed. You chose a very interesting poem that contains a lot of interpretation.

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Nice job of creating an engaging presentation. I thought your analysis was great. Could have spent more time on the elements of the poem rather than its connections and themes.

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Dead captain described as dead

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Deep analysis of the father figure symbolism

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Interesting connection to american history. 25 on criterion B.

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I like the consideration of the poet's choices and his decision to take creative liberties, You'd score high on criterion B

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very thorough analysis of theme and implications were well explained. You guys mad good connections as well.

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interesting analysis and good inclusion of poem quotes throughout the striking features section. 25 on criterion B.

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Solid bread

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You did an awesome job discussing the meaning and interpretation of the poem with reference to the context. The presentation was well done.

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Great analysis of striking features and how they play into the poem's interpretation. 25 on criterion C.

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is this the krusty krab