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you list very clearly what you are doing. now you need to take a step back, and look at what are the notions which your work is raising, approaching, revisiting.
You are talking about traditional handwork and embroidery and modern e textiles. 2 strong differences : traditional crafts and contemporary technologies
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Marcia Moodboard

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That's a good start.
Would this be a series of photos or a film? it would be good to look at the stages in between, to get a bit more of an understanding of your project (what are you depicting in your studio? what making process)

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Next version, yes>> try to rework this out as an ecosystem rather than separated notions. and add more words and details about what each square is about, means to you

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Bringing ancestral sacred weaving to the present.
(Film of the project)

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you are laying out concepts quite well but you need to make more visible where your design/craft approach takes place in this web of notions.

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MAP
your map is clear but you need to add some more details. Get rid of the generic titles such as materials. Rather, name/describe them. What are the rituals about?

what is your project bringing to the present? Are you proposing new rituals, a new relation with the natural environment...? Be more precise :)

STORYBOARD:
-Will you be able to film these Andean territories yourself?
-Be more specific with every step
-What is yous 'Editorial' section?

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you are listing kewords in one list, the idea of mapping is to map these keywords, how they connect with the principles of your design, and the different disciplines and/or issues you are approaching here

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the way you lay out the three 'concept' 'technique' 'material' does not really show the connection between the different elements you are mapping, you are closer to a list then a map. You need to highlight the core concepts/elements and make more visible the connections/contrasts between different elements you are gathering here

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Marcia Storyboard

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it's really clear, but we are missing the links between different concepts you are tackling and exploring

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JUSTINE STORY BOARD

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<<<<<<< This was the look of the previous Padlet we did with the other students. We were able to comment >>>>>>>

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<<<<<<< This was the look of the previous Padlet we did with the other students. We were able to comment >>>>>>>

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Marcia mapping

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Justine Lee