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This is my first draft of my magazine double page spread, to get feedback for this I handed out a questionnaire to 20 members of my target audience. The feedback that I got form this queastionaire was that it wasnt eye catching, didn't look like ti would feature in a real maagzine and needed some more facts about the film.

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This is the final draft of my magazine double page spread that I have edited according to my audience feedback. I added a stand out quote in a large blue font. This has added colour to my pack and broken up the main text which makes it stand out more. I have also added a 'look closer' section on top of the image. This section is often featurwed in an Empire magazine article and adds 3 facts about the film that the audiance may not know. I have also added a caption to the image in the top left hadn corener, telling the reader how it realtes to the film, this is always used in Empire magazine articles.

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This is the final draft of my poster that I have editing due to my audience feedback to make it more appealing to my target audience. To do this, I have added in the names of the two main actors and also I have added information at the bottom poster about the producers and directors. The writing at the bottom poster has been changed to a white font to make it easier to read. I have also added in a QR code and a website to my poster, this make it more interactive and up to date with developing media technologies.

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This is the first draft of my film poster. My audience feedback told me that there was not musch information about the actors of production compnany on it and also that the wiritng at the bottom is hard to read becasuse of the black font agaisnt the dark background.

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This is what our shots looked like after our teacher feedback. The shots have been shortened to make the shorts tighter. For example, in this shot of Josh and Amy, Amy now enters the shot quickly rather than a long wait before.

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This is a screenshot shows what our shots in the montage looked at before we got our audience feedback, they are long and there is no music over the top of it

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After Feedback - Added music and sound effects

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After Feedback - Added music and sound effects

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This is another screenshot form our film after editing. As you can see, at the beginning we have added titles with the name of the film and we also added credits at the end. The green bar is where we have now added music over the top of scenes to make the audience connect more with the characters emotions. We have also added a sound effect of the news over the scene of Josh's mum watching TV, this is to make ti clear she is watching the news as we did not get a close up of the TV.