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These days K education has critical problem.

Students spend about 8 hours a day in school and academies combined, starting from their early middle school years, and increase this to around 13 hours upon entering high school. However, after graduating from college and finding employment, many students stop studying altogether due to the lingering effects of their intense study habits from their school days.

As a teacher, I aim to address this issue by incorporating a variety of engaging activities into my lessons, rather than simply focusing on academic content. By doing so, I hope to help students develop a genuine interest in the subjects they are learning, which will ultimately lead to a more meaningful and effective learning experience

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South Korea's education system faces several challenges, including immense academic pressure that leads to mental health issues among students. The heavy reliance on exams, especially the CSAT, limits creativity and critical thinking. Educational inequality is exacerbated by the widespread use of private tutoring, creating a gap between students who can afford extra resources and those who cannot. Teachers also face burnout due to long working hours and high expectations. Additionally, the focus on academic excellence often overshadows the development of practical life skills. These issues highlight the need for reform to create a more balanced, equitable, and creative learning environment.Therefore, the government should implement a policy where schools set specific dates for career education and skills training to help students prepare for entering society.

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75초만에 보는 한국 학생의 불행한 삶 I 입시덕후

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K-pop dance refers to a dance style that encompasses various choreography, and accurate K-pop dance plays an important role in the entire performance.

Why did K-pop become famous?

K-pop dance began as foreigners were enthusiastic about imitating the choreography of K-pop. Thanks to K-pop, people who are new to K-pop danced faster and more interestingly, K-pop has become very popular, and Korean idol groups are gaining popularity internationally because they combine original styles and creative choreography with various genres of music to present attractive performances. K-pop dance, or Korean dance culture, is gaining huge popularity all over the world, but there are also several problems

The main problems of K-pop dance are as follows

The popularity of K-pop dances can also result in plagiarism of other artists' works. This can lead to plagiarism problems, which can also harm the originality of the creations.

In the K-Farm dance industry, there are times when there are differences in opportunities and treatment between male and female artists. The way to solve this problem is that dance should be copyrighted, and everyone, regardless of gender ratio, should be given equal opportunities. Also, the solution is to avoid factors that may misunderstand or damage Korean culture as much as possible

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I like Lee hye ran teacher 😁

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I'm hoping to be a nurse. I dreamed of becoming a nurse when I saw nurses volunteering for patients during COVID-19. There's a culture that needs to disappear for those nurses. It's the 'burning' culture.

What comes to your mind when you think of burning? Most of you will think of the burning embers. That's right. Burning means burning the soul until it is ashes, and it refers to the mental and physical harassment of a senior nurse in the process of educating a new nurse.

Strict education is necessary for nurses because they do not tolerate even the slightest mistakes due to the nature of their jobs dealing with life. But personal feelings should not go into this process. But you can't get rid of the burning overnight. Everyone has a first. You have to think from the other person's point of view, abandoning the wrong burden of work by increasing the auber of burnes. because I was burned. Reducing the and

dedicated deploying nurses to education to reduce the increase communication

between stress of nurses will nurses and reduce impersonal education. When I become a nurse, I hope that it will change to a ‘filling' culture that makes up for the shortcomings of new nurses, not burning.

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I'm good at sports and I like it, so I researched the sports that Koreans usually watch. The ranking appears to be preferred in the order of football (49%), baseball (26%) and golf (5.3%) and basketball. The reason why Koreans prefer these sports is because it makes athletes' mental, hard work, and people who are tired of life once again. Football, in particular, seems to be the most preferred because these elements are large compared to other sports. In addition, it seems that the people are energized through exercise and stimulated by the appearance of athletes affects Koreans' preference for watching exercise. So I will become a physical education teacher and become a teacher who teaches such mental power, so that students can gain vitality in life through exercise.

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I'd like to introduce the korean drawing skill among them,' ink painting'. Ink painting is a painting done in varying shades of black, using the ink from a black ink stone.

I want to introduce this topic. Because I want to introduce about K-art's beauty.

I've developed my drawing skills of Oriental painting to carry ink painting's tradition by using those skills for introducing about k-art's beauty. I'll try to develop my drawing ability more. I should have take part in art competition. And, I need to enter the prize in that competition. I'll go to art exhibition, too. I'll make a lot of effort for my drawing skills for my future.

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What I would like to introduce is the problem of oriental medicine. Currently, the problem of medicine in Korea is the lack of medical staff in certain unpopular departments. Unpopular departments introduce pediatrics, obstetrics and gynecology, surgery, and internal medicine, which are the reasons why the competition is fierce due to the narrow choice of unpopular departments, low salaries compared to the intensity of the work, and narrow choices. As a supporting data for this problem, the application rate by major in 2019 from the Ministry of Health and Welfare showed that the application rate was about 50% higher than the number of applicants from popular departments such as orthopedics, plastic surgery, and dermatology. Also, there are cases where specialists treat differently from their majors.Many of these phenomena can be seen in doctors who choose unpopular departments.As a basis for this, there is data on the current status of discrepancies between specialist majors and medical marked subjects surveyed by the Health Insurance Review and Assessment Service.As a result, I would like to become a surgeon with insufficient medical staff and work at a regional trauma center to publish books or promote unpopular departments by increasing the reputation.

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My dream is to be an architect. Because we want to provide people with comfortable, safe, practical and stable buildings.

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I'd like introduce Korean traditional paintingsWhy I chose this topicThis is because most of my friends are more familiar with foreign masterpieces than with Korean masterpieces, and they are less well known than international masterpieces.

The best I can do is draw attention to Korean famous paintings and draw pictures based on famous paintings through noteworthy competitions or SNS.Also, suggest that teachers learn traditional Korean painting in art class or hold a traditional Korean painting competition at school.

In order to further promote Korean traditional masterpieces in the future, I will visit museums with Korean masterpieces or pay more attention to Korean traditional masterpieces that are currently preservedIn addition, to familiarize yourself with traditional Korean masterpieces, you can create traditional Korean masterpieces, cell phone cases, and Korean masterpieces wallets to provide people with opportunities to experience masterpieces in their daily lives, and to preserve and learn more about paintings.

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OECD 꼴찌?! 우리나라 공부 가성비가 똥망인 이유 | 입시덕후

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What I will introduce is water pollution.

When I went on a marine sports experience in the past, I saw the water of the Hyeongsan River, which is not clean, and I became interested.

Water pollution refers to household sewage used and discarded at home, industrial wastewater from industrial activities, and agricultural wastewater from rural areas entering rivers or lakes and polluting water, resulting in poor water quality.

Water pollution can have harmful effects on humans and animals.

For example, a waterborne epidemic can cause many people to suffer.

In addition, the ecosystem can be destroyed, causing harmful effects for both humans and animals.

Therefore, we should strive to preserve water quality.

Water pollution can be prevented by reducing the use of plastic, using eco-friendly detergents, and reducing shower time.

I will use shampoo bar instead of shampoo in an effort to preserve water quality.

We will also practice eating all of them without leaving any food behind.

https://www.guro.go.kr/www/contents.do?key=2829&

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[드림스 캄 트루] 기초환경교육 2. 수질오염ㅣEnvrionment Educationㅣ드림스 캄 트루

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대한민국 정책 브리핑2024.4.25 K-문학이 세계로 뻗어나가려면

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I would like to introduce 'How k-literary workes are expected to foreign countries'. I would like to talk about literature among k-culture.

The reason, I want to introduce is that webtoons and mainly exported to foreign countries. If so, I started looking for webnovels because I thought they might be possible.

As a result, I am constanly studying English and looking for translation. This is because foreign exports naturaly require translaton.

In the future, I will granduate from university, get a job at a publishing company, translate and export novel.

In the mean time, I will contribate to.promoting k-culture to foreign countries.

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위 표는 2024년 한국 국민들의 스포츠 시청 선호도 입니다.

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I'd like to introduce the Korean education system to the world.

I've developed my teaching method and materials using various computer-based programs as an English teacher.

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My dream is to be a life scientist

I like science the most out of all subjects.

Among the subjects, I like life science the most. Because life is a lot of fun to learn the science necessary for our lives, to solve problems, to experiment, and to dissect.

So, my first dream was to be a nurse, but as time went by, I wanted to be a life scientist.

I wanted to become a life scientist and study and experiment with more things about life.

So I want to go to the biotechnology department and graduate with good grades.

And I want to be a national health research institute.

The National Health Research Institute establishes a health care plan and studies how to use health care personnel. In addition, according to specialized fields, health statistics, health information science, disease control, and insurance system development are carried out, environmental pollution and damage are investigated and analyzed, and actual conditions are investigated and studied for industrial health. Information related to domestic and international health is collected, organized and analyzed. It educates health-related knowledge to the general public and supports health-related public relations. In addition, it performs general tasks performed by researchers (general).

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K-dermatology problem that I thought about

One of the main issues in modern dermatology is the increasing complexity and variety of skin problems. Patients often have several different conditions at once, which makes it important to diagnose and treat them accurately. Access to specialized dermatological care is also a big concern, especially in areas where it's hard to find these services.

Young people are becoming more interested in skincare, but there's so much information that it can be hard to know the best treatments. Cost is another big problem in dermatology because some people can't afford the treatments they need.

As a dermatologist, I would focus on carefully diagnosing each patient to create personalized treatment plans. I would also use advanced technology, like AI systems, to help diagnose skin conditions accurately.

I would work with local communities to improve access to dermatology services, including using telemedicine to help people in remote areas get the care they need. I'd also look for ways to improve dermatology services in public healthcare facilities.

Educational programs would teach people more about taking care of their skin and how to manage skin problems effectively. Creating systems where patients can get expert advice quickly without having to go to the hospital would also be a priority.

Lastly, I'd collaborate with other dermatologists to build networks where we can share knowledge and help each other with complex cases. This would help us stay updated with the latest research and better handle the many different skin problems people face.

Summary

1. 환자맞춤형치료

2. 지역사회협력 피부과 서비스 접근성 강화

3. 교육 프로그램 강화

4. 의사 간 협력 증진

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30년 연구하고 알아냈습니다. 뇌과학자가 직접 실천하는 최적의 운동법 (박문호 박사 1부)

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I don't English 영어 너무 어려워요 진짜 세특을 어떻게 써야 할까요?

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I would like to introduce biodiversity in the field of science.

The reason I want to introduce about biodiversity is that with the recent progress of globalization, I became interested in the decline of biodiversity for various reasons, such as the increase in foreign species.

Biodiversity means the variability between all the life on Earth and the various ecosystems they make up.

Biodiversity can be divided into four main levels.

There is ecological diversity, species diversity, genetic diversity, and molecular diversity.

So why is this biodiversity declining?

This is because the climate has changed, and as previously stated, foreign species have been introduced. Human habitat destruction can also be an example of the cause.

Biodiversity must be preserved for the planet and for us as humans. It can stabilize the ecosystem and secure more sources of food. It also has economic value.

Efforts I personally can make to develop biodiversity include having more interest and interest in nature than usual, or having a sustainable consumption habit.

I will visit various biological museums to experience many living things indirectly in the future. I will also participate in environmental preservation events. And I will make efforts for the future, such as studying biological terms in advance.

https://news.lghellovision.net/news/articleView.html?idxno=473379

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AI가 바꿔놓은 과학 패러다임...연구 현장 가보니 / YTN

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I listen to the teacher very well and try hard in English class

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뇌과학 - BCI 기술

I want to be a biology researcher.

I'm usually interested in biology, so I tried a new approach to the brain field.

I will now introduce BCI technology that connects the brain and a computer.

First, a brain-computer interface (BCI) is a technology that allows the nervous system centered around the brain to directly control a computer without the help of muscles, allowing the device to move by reflecting human intentions. It is a principle that implants a chip in the head and when we think about something, the computer analyzes our brain waves and sends commands to the assistive device.

The chip measures brain waves and stores them in a database, and when we think, it compares our brain waves with the brain waves already stored in the database and transmits our thoughts to the assistive device.

In simple terms, it is a technology that allows a computer to read and express our thoughts just by thinking.

BCI technology is helping in various fields, such as helping people with lower body paralysis walk again. I thought that I should create a driving force for further development of brain science by taking an interest in the brain.

출처 - 도서 <뇌를 바꾼 공학, 공학을 바꾼 뇌>

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I am always a sincere student and very exemplary. Therefore, I think I am a scholarship student

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Understanding the basics of electronic engineering

[Understanding the basics of electronic engineering]

Electronic engineering is the core and foundation of modern technology. Electronic engineering is used in various fields such as electricity, electronics, and computers, and it has a lot of influence on our lives. In this article, we will learn about the basic concepts of electronic engineering.

[Definition and History of Electronic Engineering]

Electronic engineering is the field of designing, developing, and operating electronic technology and electronic devices. It separated from electrical engineering at the beginning of the 20th century, and electronic engineering developed into a separate field. Electronic engineering has played a major role in the development of technologies such as radio, television, computers, and mobile phones.

[the main concepts of electronic engineering]

The main concepts of electronic engineering include electrical circuits, electronic devices, and digital logic circuits. An electrical circuit is a circuit that allows electrical energy to flow, and is responsible for transmitting and processing signals using electricity. Electronic devices are various devices used in electrical circuits, such as semiconductor devices, resistors, and capacitors. A digital logic circuit is a circuit that processes digital signals represented by zeros and ones.

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Degenerative arthritis is a condition in which the cartilage of the joints gradually deteriorates and is damaged, primarily related to aging. This disease can cause joint pain, stiffness, swelling, and can significantly impact daily activities. The main causes of degenerative arthritis are as follows:

Aging: As we age, the cartilage in the joints naturally wears down and gets damaged.

Genetic factors: If there is a family history, the likelihood of developing degenerative arthritis increases.

Obesity: Being overweight can put additional pressure on the joints, accelerating the wear of cartilage.

Injury: Previous joint injuries or surgeries can contribute to the onset of degenerative arthritis.

Overuse: Excessive use of joints due to certain occupations or sports can lead to degenerative changes.

Symptoms of degenerative arthritis include:

Pain: Pain occurs during joint use and may decrease after rest.

Stiffness: Joints may feel stiff, especially upon waking in the morning or after sitting for a long time.

Swelling: Swelling may occur around the joints.

Sound: A 'cracking' sound may be heard when moving the joints.

Limited range of motion: Movement of the joints may be restricted.

Degenerative arthritis is primarily diagnosed through the patient's medical history and physical examination. If necessary, imaging tests such as X-rays or MRIs can be used to assess the condition of the joints.

The treatment for degenerative arthritis focuses on alleviating symptoms and improving function. Treatment methods include:

Medication: Non-steroidal anti-inflammatory drugs (NSAIDs) or analgesics are used to manage pain.

Physical therapy: Exercise and stretching help improve the flexibility and strength of the joints.

Weight management: Reducing weight, if obese, can help lessen the burden on the joints.

Injection therapy: Steroid injections or hyaluronic acid injections can reduce inflammation and relieve pain.

Surgery: In severe cases, joint replacement surgery or arthroscopic surgery may be necessary.

Degenerative arthritis is a chronic condition, but with proper management and treatment, symptoms can be alleviated, and quality of life can be improved. Regular exercise and maintaining a healthy diet are important.

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젊다고 안 생기는 게 아닙니다, 퇴행성관절염

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Degenerative arthritis is a condition in which the cartilage of the joints gradually deteriorates and is damaged, primarily related to aging. This disease can cause joint pain, stiffness, swelling, and can significantly impact daily activities. The main causes of degenerative arthritis are as follows:

Aging: As we age, the cartilage in the joints naturally wears down and gets damaged.

Genetic factors: If there is a family history, the likelihood of developing degenerative arthritis increases.

Obesity: Being overweight can put additional pressure on the joints, accelerating the wear of cartilage.

Injury: Previous joint injuries or surgeries can contribute to the onset of degenerative arthritis.

Overuse: Excessive use of joints due to certain occupations or sports can lead to degenerative changes.

Symptoms of degenerative arthritis include:

Pain: Pain occurs during joint use and may decrease after rest.

Stiffness: Joints may feel stiff, especially upon waking in the morning or after sitting for a long time.

Swelling: Swelling may occur around the joints.

Sound: A 'cracking' sound may be heard when moving the joints.

Limited range of motion: Movement of the joints may be restricted.

Degenerative arthritis is primarily diagnosed through the patient's medical history and physical examination. If necessary, imaging tests such as X-rays or MRIs can be used to assess the condition of the joints.

The treatment for degenerative arthritis focuses on alleviating symptoms and improving function. Treatment methods include:

Medication: Non-steroidal anti-inflammatory drugs (NSAIDs) or analgesics are used to manage pain.

Physical therapy: Exercise and stretching help improve the flexibility and strength of the joints.

Weight management: Reducing weight, if obese, can help lessen the burden on the joints.

Injection therapy: Steroid injections or hyaluronic acid injections can reduce inflammation and relieve pain.

Surgery: In severe cases, joint replacement surgery or arthroscopic surgery may be necessary.

Degenerative arthritis is a chronic condition, but with proper management and treatment, symptoms can be alleviated, and quality of life can be improved. Regular exercise and maintaining a healthy diet are important.

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젊다고 안 생기는 게 아닙니다, 퇴행성관절염