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Improve the aesthetics

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The colour of the canva is not so nice

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They are specific and show the quantities

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As a consequence of the steps being some more developed than the others, it creates a confusing comprehension over what to do and differenciation on different stages. In aspects of aesthetic, we would recommend to use simmilar letter size, and make it look simpler.

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Throughout the plan there are some spelling and gramatical mistakes

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In order to improve the way in which is it understandable, we would create more steps for guiding the viewer to do things clarely. As well, we would sintetize each step by using simpler words and reducing expressions for it to be more friendly for sight. In the case of the fifth step, we would improve it by dividing each small part as well as the ingredients and tools used.

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Feedback for Slovakia (Tomas and Stefano)

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Feedback for Slovakia (Tomas and Stefano)

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The ingredients and meausrments are not mentioned and there are few steps compared to all the things they gotta do

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Try to improve the spelling and gramatical errors made throughout the plan in words such as combine.

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Feed back from spain to croatia (Hernandez)

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Feed back from spain to croatia (Hernandez)

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I think it si very good so I do not make any improvements except from being careful with the capital letters.

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The grammar is not very well done, it lacks punctuation and organization in the words and the order in which they are composed

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i would make no improvements but maybe being a little more careful with the spelling of certain words

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Feedback for Eslovakia, from Maite Moldes and Lucia Tarucco.

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Feedback for Eslovakia, from Maite Moldes and Lucia Tarucco.

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In step 1, you should mention which are the other vegetables you are going to wash and the measurements. All throughout the poster there are some capital letters in the first word of the sentence and in the names that you should correct.

In step 3, when you say "mix one clove of garlic", you should add cutting and peeling the garlic in a step before or include it in step 2. In step 3, you should also include in the ingriedient and tools part the tool you are going to use to mix everything. Apart from that, the ingridients for each step are also missing in most cases. In step 4 and 5, in tools, the cooking pot is also missing.

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Creates very good detailed stepsm that contain quantities as well as tools. It is complete, as each step is connected with each other.

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The information was very clear and very well explained, it is also very well distributed and fair for everyone in my opinion.

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The plan is greatly organized and it contains all of the needed ingridients and steps making it very clear to understand.

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Some words are difficult to understand

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It does not say if you will be seasoning the tomatoes and onions or just leaving them as they are

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Feedback from spain to croatia (Hernandez)

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Feedback from spain to croatia (Hernandez)

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in some step the tools are repeated in the step and what they need

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It would be good to try and reduce the words so it to be clear. Also try and correct the spelling.

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It is super clear and specific, you added the exact amounts of ingredients and everything is easy to understand

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that although the ingredients appear, they are not where they should be

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Feedback from France to Eslovakia, Lucia Tarucco and Maite Moldes

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Feedback from France to Eslovakia, Lucia Tarucco and Maite Moldes

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It is attractive, clear in some cases, the information is well organized and easy to understand.

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Feedback from spain to Croatia(Hernandez)

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Feedback from spain to Croatia(Hernandez)

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It is very well organized and the information is brief and clear

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Nice colours and well organized

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Include quantities, that's all. You would need to know the number in order to cook efficiently.

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POLAND- Martin Rogers, Valentín Rodriguez, Dolores Dominguez and Guillermina Grosso

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POLAND- Martin Rogers, Valentín Rodriguez, Dolores Dominguez and Guillermina Grosso

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Feedback for Eslovakia, from Maite Moldes and Lucia Tarucco.

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Feedback for Eslovakia, from Maite Moldes and Lucia Tarucco.

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There missing capital letters, there are some ingredients and mesurements which aren't mentioned, some words arent spelled correctly and there are missing steps.

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The color is not attratctive to the audience

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There are no quantitives of ingredients. How am I supposed to know how many ingredients you would use to cook?

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you shoud improve a litle the aesthetic

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Julieta Goslino, Delfina Dangelo, Tomas Zurmendi, and Guillermo Baldovino

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Julieta Goslino, Delfina Dangelo, Tomas Zurmendi, and Guillermo Baldovino

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Colorful Professional Timeline Step By Step Graph

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Is very well organized and detailed, information is clear.

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List the infredients together with the tools in the lower block

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Ingredients aren't listed, although they are named together with the step it can cause confusion

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It is very clear and organized, and the information is understood very well.

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Is very well organised and complete

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Slovakia- Agus L, Pia M, Chris G and Gaston L

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Slovakia- Agus L, Pia M, Chris G and Gaston L

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FRANCIA- Maite Moldes, Lucia Tarucco, Tomas Astiazaran y Stefano Cerillo.

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FRANCIA- Maite Moldes, Lucia Tarucco, Tomas Astiazaran y Stefano Cerillo.

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Digital design Food Project - Lucia Tarucco, Maite Moldes, Stefano Cerillo and Tomas Astiazaran

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Romania - Mateo C, Mateo R, Agustina A and Almudena V

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Romania - Mateo C, Mateo R, Agustina A and Almudena V

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Copia de Colorful Professional Timeline Step By Step Graph