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Should AI replace humans in automated jobs? 

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Should AI replace humans in automated jobs? 

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Thesis Statement: Artificial intelligence should replace jobs that can be automated because automation increases productivity, reduces business costs, and allows human workers to focus on more creative and higher skilled occupations.

Pre-writing method chosen: Listing.

Increases Productivity:

1. Tasks are completed quicker.

2. Greater accuracy.

3. Higher quality results.

Reduces Business Costs:

1. Lower input costs.

2. Reduced labour costs.

3. Lower price given in the market.

Human workers can focus on more creative and higher skilled occupations.

1. Creativity and innovation can’t be produced by artificial intelligence.

2. Higher pay given to workers.

3. Critical thinking is needed for problem solving skills.

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Pastel Blue Pink and Green Illustrated Mind Map Brainstorm

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Why rehabilitation should be prioritized over punishment in prisons

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Why rehabilitation should be prioritized over punishment in prisons

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Have you ever been punished as a child? Did you look back on your mistakes or did you simply learn not to repeat it when no one was watching? In general, pure punishment fails as a deterrent against future bad actors. If so, should we not look towards rehabilitation as well? While punishment holds offenders accountable for their actions, rehabilitation focuses on addressing the behaviours and circumstances that contribute to criminal activity. This is why rehabilitation should be prioritised over punishment in prisons because rehabilitation can :  Lower crime rates, reduce institutional costs and support social reintegration

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W1 THURSDAY: PREWRITING AND THESIS STATEMENT

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W1 THURSDAY: PREWRITING AND THESIS STATEMENT

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1. IN-CLASS ACTIVITY

2. GROUP WORK

3. YOU HAVE CHOSEN YOUR TOPIC, NOW:

A. CHOOSE ONE PRE-WRITING METHOD (MAKING A LIST, MAKING A MIND MAP)

B. COME UP WITH THE 3 REASONS/ 3 MAIN IDEAS

C. GENERATE THE THESIS STATEMENT

4. TO DO THIS, YOU MAY START RESEARCHING ONLINE FOR THE POSSIBLE SUPPORTS.

PREFERABLY:

1 MAIN IDEA = 1 ARTICLE TO SUPPORT

5. THE ENTRY FOR THIS TASK WILL LATER BE NEEDED AS PART OF THE ESSAY'S FINAL SUBMISSION.

6. THERE WILL BE TWO (2) END PRODUCT. 1. ONE THESIS STATEMENT, AND 2. PREWRITING/ BRAINSTORM METHOD TO GENERATE MAIN IDEAS.

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Agree.

Placed elderly in old folk's home has many advantages such as health, ensure personal safety and reduce social isolation.

Placed Placing elderly in old folk's home has many advantages such as health (<-- this is not parallel), ensure personal safety (<-- this is ok) and reduce social isolation ( (<-- this is ok).

if you take it out, you can see it clearly - how unparallel they are

improve personal health (verb + noun phrase)

ensure personal safety (verb + noun phrase)

reduce social isolation (verb + noun phrase)

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Some of the advantages of placing elderly into folk’s homes may include their mental health, physical health and family relationships.

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The elderly should not be placed in an old folks home because they would feel more comfortable in their own homes, it can affect their mental health and can destroy family relationships.

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Sending the elderly to old folk's homes provides many benefits such as: mental stimulation, specialized care and social environment.

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The elderly should not be placed in an old folks home because they might feel lonely being away from their family, quality treatment may be costly, and negative emotions may affect them.

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The elderly should be placed in old folk's home in account for their safety, social and comfort.

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Agreed

Elderly folks should be placed in old folks’ homes because they can receive professional care, enjoy better social interaction, and have their daily needs properly attended to.

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Elderly people should not always be placed in old folk’s homes because they may feel lonely, lose their independence, and have less time with their families.

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Agree,

The elderly should be sent to old folk's home as it ensures better treatment, social life and personal safety.

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Disagree

The elderly should not be placed in old folks' homes because staying in their own homes preserves their sense of independence, strengthens family relationships, and avoids high facility expenses.

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1. CHOOSE YOUR GROUP.

2. CLICK "+" AND WRITE YOUR ANSWER.

3. WRITE THE THESIS STATEMENT FOR THIS TOPIC: SHOULD THE ELDERLY BE PLACED IN OLD FOLK'S HOME?

4. THESIS STATEMENT FORMULA = TOPIC + MAIN IDEA 1 + MAIN IDEA 2 + MAIN IDEA 3

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OLD FOLKS HOME VS OWN HOME. PUT TWO IMAGE SIDE BY SIDE.