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1. more info
2. i should add more

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i need to add more stuff

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1honestally i just need to dive in
2put quote
3words

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The evidence for all four characteristics are good red yellow blue and green

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1.) I need to explain more
2.)evidence more green
3.)add more blue to my quote

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1) I could add better transitional words
2) I should add more detail into it
3) reword my conclusion sentence

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1) explain things better
2) do more to the green quotes
3) better transition

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1) put a  better quote
2) make a good conclusion
3)make a better quote for blue

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1.) I need to get more information
2.) I need better transitions
3.) I need to add more to my conclusion sentence

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1. I need to get a little more info for my quote
2. I need to change somethings for my concluding sentence
3. I need a better transition

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1.) Put better transition words
2.)Put more thought and definition into my blue, explain it more
3.) Rewrite my conclusion sentence

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1.)  I should add more to my green quote
2.) Make it more smooth
3.) Figure out how to end it in a smoother way

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1.) I could've added more to my green quote
2.) Maybe re-do my blue quote and re-word it better
3.) I can re-word my red quote, to make it a bit shorter and easier to read

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1.) More info
2.) Better quote choices
3.)Stronger wording

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1.) Reword more on my red quote
2.) Add another sentence or two to my conclusion sentence
3.) Add another sentence to my blue quote

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1.) Select a better suited quote for green

2.) Reword my conclusion sentence.

3.) Add an additional explanation sentence for my quote in Blue.

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1.) I will add more sentences to my red explanation.
2.) I will change my concluding sentence
3.) I will get a better transition on   my concluding sentence.