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I will improve by doing my body 2 and 3 then i will fix my punctuation and italicize my titles.

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I will improve my essay daft before the final submission is look if there is any grammar errors and any punctuation mistakes. Also is make sure that I got everything that was required.

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I will improve my essay draft before the final submission by looking to see if there is any grammar mistakes, spelling, and any punctuation mistakes.

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I will improve my draft by checking it over and making sure i got everything that was required.

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I will improve my essay by going through it and checking for correct grammar and spelling. Reading it to someone will also help to make sure my essay is good. I also need to make sure that I follow the format of my essay.

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I will improve my essay draft before the final submission by going back to my work and check it if i did everything right and find if i have mistake.

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i'll improve my essay draft by double cheking if i have any miss spelling words.

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I will improve my essay draft by checking if I have all the parts of the essay like the RAGE part, the conclusions, and the introductions.

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I will improve my draft essay before the final essay by going back and checking if I need to add or delete something check spelling and punctuation. Make sure I got what I need to complete my final essay.

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I will improve my essay draft before the final submission is to go back and check if I did everything correctly and try find any mistakes made.

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To improve my essay draft before the final submission is to go back and check if I did everything right.And check if there is any grammar mistakes.

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I will improve my essay draft before the final submission by doing spelling check and grammar checks. I will ask for a teacher or teachers to check it before tomorrow's period 1. Read over my sentences to see if it makes sense and make sure you can understand it and didn't make any mistakes. I can also go on another device and check it with grammarly to make sure I have the best punctuation and everything.

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I'll improve my essay draft before the final submission by checking my mistakes. Like for example, my spelling, my grammar, and if my work is matching with the topic, etc. I will have to check in with my teacher after I made those fixes to check if it's okay.

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I will improve my essay draft before the final submission by finishing up what I need to do and double checking if I did everything correct. Grammar, punctuation, spelling, making sure that's everything is organized, and that I answered the question correctly.

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I will improve my essay draft before the final submissions by double checking my grammar if whether I should keep it or change it. I would also ask a teacher to check my assignment before submitting.

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I will improve my essay draft before the final submission by looking back to see if my essay have proper grammar, if it has right punctuation marks, if I answer the prompt directly and on point;If there was any misleading sentences that could have confused the readers. Lastly, to double check my essays and asked a teacher if i stuck by the prompt and if it was clear.

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How i will improve my essay draft before the final submission by fixing any spelling mistakes. Also making sure i have the right punctuation marks i will also make sure i answered all the questions right.