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good job

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good job the detail looks like you actually took time to do it.

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good job

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He did good with his continuous contour but he need to work more on his details.

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a strength is the 3D form used. a weakness is the composition and I suggest using a contour line

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Everything was good besides the contour lines but aside from that everything was good.

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very nice

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Lovely drawing

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Her drawing is very good and need to take space.

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I think you did absolutely horrible. You need to throw that drawing in the trash right now. I really think you need to try next time. You also need to use your time wisely. I just don't ;ike your drawing.

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I like your drawing but you need to work on making your object look like the actual object and fill up you r paper with the object. Add 3D forms.

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Really neat, smooth, drawings. 3D planes are represented well. Make sure that one single continuous line is used to draw each scissors. Avoid coloring in the side planes. Also, the composition could be more balanced if you had scissors around the edges and maybe going off the edge of the paper.

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Great 3D representation and very detailed. I like that you included the "Art 2" writing on the scissors. Your final contour is smooth, bold, and continuous. Good job.

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Make sure you really look at the scissors when you are drawing - look for size relationships like the width of the handles, the length of blade. Also, make sure you repeat your drawings enough to fill the space.

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Really good details and proportions. 3D planes are represented very accurately. My only advice would be that you could build a more interesting composition by layering/overlapping more wire cutter drawings into the background.

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These are outstanding drawings, with 3D and continuous lines. My only suggestion is next time to make a few smaller drawings to fill up the paper more, but besides that Perfect.

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Everything is really good.

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I think you did great in terms of your 3-D perspective and you did will in terms of your depth. The continuous contour was decent but overall I really like your drawing

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Great representation of 3D forms; really smooth, bold line. My only advice is that you could improve your composition by adding a few more scissors - you could even just trace in/repeat some of the drawings you already have to make it easier on yourself.

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your 3d plane is really great, and your shapes are very proportional. the only thing you need to work on is the filling of space.

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I like your 3D and attention to detail but you could have done better and filling the page.

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There's a lot of negative space on the edges of the paper. The scissors might need to be proportioned better but overall the drawing was good.

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You did a great job on the proportions, and the 3-D. I love how you made the tools cross. You should work on doing the details but that's the only thing. Keep up the good work

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Make sure you take your time and really look at the scissors. From drawing to drawing, your proportions and shapes are very inconsistent. Your contour line should also be smooth and continuous with many details. I would consider reworking the drawings you have in order to get as many points as possible on the final rubric.

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It was good all she need more details.

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you work was actully really terrble nothing was right your form needs to be correct you to make ur 3d lines vible

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loved it

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This art work is actually bad. There are only 3 scissors, they have no 3-D and they are either uneven or straight up bad. You should really either start over or just add something to get yourself a grade higher than a 40.

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Your drawings have been recorded very accurately. The proportions and details are consistent and your continuous contour line is smooth and detailed. My one advice is that maybe your composition could benefit from more overlapping. You have two cases of overlapping so that brings my eye straight to the middle to the two scissors that are the same direction and are overlapping. To counteract that, you could add more scissors to the background.

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Love the art work. Incredible 3D form

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You have many tools on your paper and they cover up a good amount of space, but those tools have no detail.

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You need to make sure you include details and draw them accurately.  You are currently missing many inside details. Take a look at the pliers and then rework the shapes and proportions of the ones you have already drawn.  Think about the width and length, the handle shape, the head shape, and so on.  Also, make sure you include the 3D form.  You need to represent both the top and the side planes of each pair of scissors.  Make sure you are LOOKING at the pliers when you draw.  Do NOT draw from memory.

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Your drawing is really nice I like the 3D form

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The drawings are very nice, you filled most of the paper and there's not many blank pages. The only suggestion I have is to keep up the great work.

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Your drawing is great , god job on the 3D affect you may need to work on your continuous contour but overall your drawing is good.

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The drawing and details of the object are very well drawn. The right side of the paper has barely any negative space, the left side does need to be finished though.

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You need to make sure you include details and draw them accurately. Take a look at the scissors and then rework the shapes and proportions of the ones you have already drawn. Think about the blade length, the handle shape, and so on. Also, make sure you include the 3D form. You need to represent both the top and the side planes of each pair of scissors. Make sure you are LOOKING at the scissors when you draw. Do NOT draw from memory.

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your drawing is very detailed, and your continuous lines are really well drawn. i like how you used different tools, but you should try overlapping to make the pattern more interesting.

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I like how your lines were continuous and how you filled up the space

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Like how your drawing is very detailed and proportion but you could work on filling.

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Your drawing is very well done. The depth of the scissors is well done and the continuous contour is well done too. The only problem is I can only see 2 views of the scissors, add 1 more and you will be completely fine

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I like how your drawing is very detailed. The only thing that you should work on is filling your whole paper with the object.

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well it was actually ok but next time clean your paper cause it really smelled bad when i went up there but good job

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lack of 3D work

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very bad and horrible

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strength: 3D details
continuous lines

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She did need more details and good forms

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Great job on filling up the whole page.

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The scissors are almost always at a different angle and the detail is great. There needs to be more scissors to cover the negative space.

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You did a great job you just need to erase everything and start over

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3d drawing is good

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theres only one 3d
barely visble bladed bent

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Your drawing is good has details but you need a little details, and has the right proportion . But you need to use more space. You should use your time more wisely.

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I like the interesting and challenging angles on the tools. The continuous line works well. I would check the proportions of the handle and the length of the handle to make sure they are consistent from drawing to drawing. Also, you can copy the ones you already have and repeat them to fill your space better.

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His 3D effects are nice but his details are not the strongest

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Strength: The use of 3D form in each tool
Weakness: Composition, not enough of the tool to fill the space properly
Suggestion: Add more detail to each tool and fill more of the space

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I like the angles of the tools in the work.  Not all the tools looked smooth.  However, you used a lot of details.  You could also improve on the composition.

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I like how you drew your wrench. The things you need to work on is the placement of your items and work on putting objects in your empty space. Your objects need 3D features added to them.

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Excellent

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The hammers are drawn well, but maybe you could space them out a bit better.

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The drawing needs more improvement , there is no details continuous contour or any 3D effect.

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You did really well in pretty much everything, your drawing included well executed 3-D, Overlapping, and Continuous Contour. This drawing was in my opinion the best one up there, Good Job.

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A strength would be how they covered the page
A weakness would be proportions and details
A suggestion would be a grid

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This drawing is very good. But doesn't have that much detail. It looks like scissors and a tool at the same time.

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your drawing is really detailed, and has a nice 3d plane. however, you need to take up more space.

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I like that you are trying a tool that is different from everyone else (wrench).  A weakness is the lack of detail and 3D planes in each wrench.