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I want to become better at structuring my paragrpahs and ideas in an prganized way throughout my essay.

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I want to become better at structuring my paragrpahs and ideas in an prganized way throughout my essay.

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Goal to be able to write a conclusion that clearly wraps up the main points of the essay and leaves food for thought

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Goal to be able to write a conclusion that clearly wraps up the main points of the essay and leaves food for thought

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To be able to use grammar and spell better

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I want to leave this class with my writing more fluid and engaging

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I want be able to implement statistics and information from texts that accurately represent my argument.

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To be able to explain my thoughts clearly and efficiently. 

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To be able to explain my thoughts clearly and efficiently. 

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Is to pass the class; as well as be able to write using more high- level vocabulary

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To be able to clearly explain an argument in simple terms, so that it is shorter and to the point.

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My goal is to be able to articulate my thoughts clearly and be able to use proper grammar

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To learn and get better at engaging the reader and making them want to read on

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Have evidence which strengthens the arguments

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Be able to write and organize my essays in a way that is effective and understandable.

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Utilize strategies to make my transitions in between my paragraphs more effective.

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Learn how to write an essay that has an impact beyond this classes assignment. (Impact on society rather than a certain grade)

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Learn how to write an essay that has an impact beyond this classes assignment. (Impact on society rather than a certain grade)

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Practice writing with better grammar and work on my punctuation.

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Convey my point (plan) while still incorporating my personal writing voice/style

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To become more organized and get to the point without talking about something irrelevant.

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Write with better Grammar

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is to be able to develop as a writer, and create stronger more effective writing

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Utilize more specific evidence and points from Gladwell and Waiting for superman to explain and prove my policy

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learn how to use an outline for my essays bc that seems helpful and essays dont rock but maybe they will if i use an outline

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To learn how to structure my essays better, specifically, intro and conclusion.

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To better organize my essay by summarizing more and being more concise/simple so I can include more facts/statistics/support vs. explanation (concise)

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Is to read over my essay and make it as grammatically correct as possible. Also, to make sure that al my ideas are organized and supported and connect to Gladwell's argument and my policy of change.

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To more fluently write my essay with necessary details without making it sound like I'm rambling, or missing important details trying not to

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To find a better way to conclude. After finishing my essay, I want to be able to create a conclusion that is strong, and impacts the reader.

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Reference plentiful and specific evidence

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Is to be able to write an essay with a clear purpose and support. I want to be able to easily weave in support and make the essay flow

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improve my ability to use more diverse language and vocabulary

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To find quotes that better explain my thoughts and be able to describe them with more clarity. Also to be able to form a intriguing introduction to bring the reader into my writing.

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My goal is to be better prepared for each writing prompt. Set up an outline and figure out my ideas before hand.

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To be able to connect all my arguments and points and create more of a flow in my writing.

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To find a way to effectively make and use an outline to better my writing. I would like to do this to be able to touch upon all key points. I also struggle by overanalyzing everything

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To be able to correct my own grammatical errors

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To be able to analyze what I have to demonstrate other views as well as my own.

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To write without grammatical errors and have my essay flow, and make sense!

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is to make my writing more relevant to the text. To avoid getting off-topic.

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To strengthen the structure of my essays to highlight the argument or main idea. Also, to structure a thesis that is concise and organized.

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Make my writing more fluent and use better word choice.

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To be able to write with less effort and for my writing to be more fluid.

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To be able to write with less effort and for my writing to be more fluid.

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Writing a conclusion that connects back to the rest of my arguement

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Be able to incorporate a better introduction into my essay that includes similes and metaphors to hook the reader.

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Be able to write fluently

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I want to work on my introductions.

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To be able to explain quotes in a persuasive manner, which will help strengthen my argument

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I want to ensure that my writing is clear and has my own sense of style. I can add my own voice in my writing by adding analogies, opinion, consistent arguments, etc

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To write better introductions by using an analogy to strengthen my writing

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to write a clear and concise essay that flows

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Incorporate my own unique style into these typically boring essays

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Write better introductions by using more technique and interesting information to grab the reader

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To be able to write in a mature manner, and get an understanding for what it is I am supposed to be writing about.  I want to develop into a better writer and Improve my grades on essays.

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Sticking to my main topic and not drifting to other unimportant ideas.

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Be able to incorporate similies and

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Strengthen my conclusion and relate it back to the rest of my essay.

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Improve on topic sentences and thesis statments

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Improve on topic sentences and thesis statments

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I want to pull more information not only from my given class sources (ex: books) but from alternate sources like the internet.

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Use additional resources

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To be more fluent and clear with all aspects of my writing,and to include more evidence 

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To be more fluent and clear with all aspects of my writing,and to include more evidence 

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expand on my policy for change

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implement how the reforms will be enforced in the school  

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implement how the reforms will be enforced in the school  

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Adding more direct evidence

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Learn how to write more efficiently in less time

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Learn how to write more efficiently in less time

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using more evidence to help support an agrument

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using more evidence to help support an agrument

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Learn to write smoother and more fluent and how to improve transitions

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Learn to write smoother and more fluent and how to improve transitions

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Expand more on my ideas, use more sources

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interpret the prompt better and work on understanding what the teacher specifically wants

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Strengthen Policy for Change

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Consistent and coherent arguments

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Use a more unique essay in my evidence as well as my paragraph set up

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I want to work on providing facts from sources outside of a book or documentary watched in class.

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Use better quotes in more appropriate places

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I want to work on using better and more persuasive language

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learning how
to properly structure an argumentative essay