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In my opinion, parents should look or supervise the social networks of their children, but always with some control, that is, without going over the limit between the reasonable and the controlling, because teenagers should feel that their parents trust them, and if the parents pass the limit, they are going to lose her confidence. So I agree that parents should look at their children's social network, as long as it is necessary.

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Parents looking at their chidren's Facebook pages has become common in the day to day. They think that bullying and online abuse are real problems, so they want to protect their children. However, is it the right way to do it?

On the one hand, privacy is a basic human right. It's not pleasant to feel someone is spying on you, even if you have nothing to conceal. Furthermore, teenagers should feel that their parents trust them.

On the other hand, sometimes, spying on teenagers is the only way to protect them and also, teenagers need to learn from their own mistakes. Suffering online abuse is really hazardous for the teenagers ' safety and it could affect negatively for the rest of their lives.

To sump up, although parents suspect that their children are doing something risky, they shouldn't spy on them. It's a violation of privacy. In my opinion, privacy is one of the biggest problems in this new electronic age

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 this action isn't ethic at all cause it's their children's own privacy and he/she should select who can know about it and who can't know about it

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parents need to have control over their kids because you might not what happening in their lives or what their going through. all of this may seem to effect the child's future. most children are other being drug addicts or going to jail because they see you as the enemy and do not care about their lives. in my opinion i think parents should be more involved in their kids lives in order for them to have a better future.

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parents need to have control over their kids because you might not what happening in their lives or what their going through. all of this may seem to effect the child's future. most children are other being drug addicts or going to jail because they see you as the enemy and do not care about their lives. in my opinion i think parents should be more involved in their kids lives in order for them to have a better future.

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On the one hand, everything in a social network is public, although if you select it as a private thing, hackers could look at it. In addition, you can't remove your trace from a social network, so if you fail at uploading a photo, you fail for the whole life. Moreover, many kids and teenagers doesn't act as "rationally" as they could be, so they cou

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Facebook is a page where the people adults usually write as they feel, send
photos, videos and also they write messages.


On the other hand, the parents worry by security of the children. The
children are minor should look the Facebook page because there are a lot of
problems, for example, buyilling, social problems… Also the hackers can
steal the identity because the children have been able to give a personal
data to stranger and it is a problem. Facebook isn’t page for minor.


On the other hand, the parents shouldn’t look the Facebook pages from
adults, because, the adults are responsibility. They never give personals
dates, the parents look at their children’s Facebook may get angry for
invading their privacy and reporter them. Always respect the privacy of
teenagers. Furthermore teenagers have to give a good education for they
haven’t any problems of social pages.

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Facebook is a page where the people adults usually write as they feel, send

photos, videos and also they write messages.

On the other hand, the parents worry by security of the children. The

children are minor should look the Facebook page because there are a lot of

problems, for example, buyilling, social problems… Also the hackers can

steal the identity because the children have been able to give a personal

data to stranger and it is a problem. Facebook isn’t page for minor.

On the other hand, the parents shouldn’t look the Facebook pages from

adults, because, the adults are responsibility. They never give personals

dates, the parents look at their children’s Facebook may get angry for

invading their privacy and reporter them. Always respect the privacy of

teenagers. Furthermore teenagers have to give a good education for they

haven’t any problems of social pages.

In my opinion, minor haven’t a social page because they aren´t

responsibility on personal date, the people responsibility have a social

date because there are lees chance of being steal of privacy.

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For some parents, looking at their children's social mobiles and networks is normal, but should they?

Sometimes, children do things that parents are unaware of, children can be deceived through social networks ...

On the other hand, social networks if used well are a good way to talk with your friends, have photos, meet people ...

For this reason, I think you should give your children some privacy and trust, if they have not given you reason to distrust or think that they do something wrong, you should not worry.

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Should parents look at their children's Facebook page? This is the big question which teenagers' parents are facing off. Recent quizs says that a quarter of the people that was asked, will look at
their children's Facebook page.

On the one hand, social networks are very dangerous, if you have Facebook or another social network such as Twitter, you are exposed to many dangers, for example, hackers can steal your account and talk with your friends and your family posing as you. You are exposed to cyberbullying and in a certain way if your parents look at what are you doing in your Facebook, you have less probabilities of this.

In contrast, everybody has a right to privacy. In a legal way if you are a parent and you look at your chiildren's phone, you can have some problems. In a moral way, parents have to bring up their childrens properly to teach them what are the right way and what are the bad way in the life. And parents need to trust in their childrens.

To sum up, parents shouldn't look at their children's Facebook page without their permission. If parents want to know more about their childrens, they must ask them and trust in their children's answer. This is the best way to know more about your childrens, without violate their privacy.

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Look the phones of your childrens are a very common practice and more if they are teenagers. But look in the mobile phone and in their social networks is well?

on the one hand, the fear that children are in danger is one of the most common reasons for doing so.  And there is also the ignorance of parents about the internet, and as parents worry about the safety and welfare of their children.

On the other hand, is an invasion of privacy because they should trust them because if they have educated them well, they wouldn´t have to distrust them.

In my opinion, shouldn´t caught in the mobiles or social networks of children.

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Social networks are too complex, and people who doesn't know it are too innocent, that leads to some risky situations for some kids and teenagers, but... Are parents authorized to look what are their children doing on the social networks.?

On the one hand, everything in a social network is public, although if you select it as a private thing, hackers could look at it. In addition, you can't remove your trace from a social network, so if you fail at uploading a photo, you fail for the whole life. Moreover, many kids and teenagers doesn't act as "rationally" as they could be, so they could fail a lot of times.

In contrast, everyone has a right for a bit of privacy, so parents mustn't look their children everytime they log in. Also, despite there are a lot of "social network idiots", there are indeed many children which are very prudent and know what they are using.

To sum up, I think we need that pinch of privacy, even though is a social network. Nevertheless, there are serious cases which need watchfulness.

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In the last few years, a phenomenon called part time contracts became an important part of the economy. Because of the crisis many employers contract people who work only a coupleof hours a day.

On the one hand, it is much better to have a job, even one for a few hours a day, than not to have any at all. In this way the worker can receive money and accumulate experience for future. Furthermore you can contact with important people and obtain a better job in future.

On the other hand, the boss gets a lot of privileges with this kind of contracts. They sometimes receive money from the goverment to pay the workers but a great part of this money goes for the boss, not for the worker. Moreover the boss often exploits the worker, who has to stay more hours without receiving more money and the security cover is worse than that of people with full time contract.

To sum up, although a part time contract is helpful in times of crisis, i think that it is a bad habit when things are better.

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Facebook pages have become very common among all teenagers in the world.  Most of the young people who have facebook haven't asked their parents. But parents should or shouldn't look at their children's facebook pages?

On the one hand, facebook is a page where you can meet new people, even though you con tell your live and your parents can't violate their children's privacy.

On the other hand, childrens would be more secure surfing on internet if parents look at which childrens saw and in facebook shouldn't upload anything that the parents don't want. Word Order

To sum up,  although parents violate their children's privacy,  in my opinion, parents should look at their children's facebook page to give them more security.

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Should parents look at their children's  facebook pages? This topic is quite complicated since there are many different opinions.

On the one hand, on seeing it, they would protect their children from the dangers of the internet and would have them more controlled by anything that could happen.

On the other hand, if parents look at their facebook pages, they are completely ending their privacy and intimacy, since kids at these ages need privacy.

In my opinion, parents should not look at their children's Facebook pages

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Should parents look their children's social network?

Nowadays, people have questioned if the parents should look the social network of their children. There are differents answer about this topic. Then, parents should or shouldn't look the social network of their children?

On the one hand, I think that parents should not look the social network of their children, because they need to trust in them. Furthermore, with a good education, they can use it without danger. Also, parents should respect their children's privacy.

On the other hand, social networks are hazardous, because you don't know who is the person who can see you or speak. Moreover,  bullying and online abuse are more likely to occur with social networks, so if parents check their social networks, they could avoid these problems.

In my opinion, parents should look or supervise the social networks of their children, but always with some control, that is, without going over the limit between the reasonable and the controlling, because teenagers should feel that their parents trust them, and if the parents pass the limit, they are going to lose her confidence. So I agree that parents should look at their children's social network, as long as it is necessary.

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Can your parents look at your social networks?
This is a very infamous topic and the opinion normally depends on the person you ask. This is a very hazardous topic and we have to warn people.

On the one hand, every person should have privacy because nobody has to feel that someone is watching you. Moreover, some people  have secrets and don´t want that others to know or simply they don´t like to feel controlled.

On the other hand, all people have to be controlled when they are young because there are a lot of threats which can lead people to do illegal things and things that aren´t suited to his age and parents have to know with whom  your children relate and what they do.

To conclude, parents have to control their children, nevertheless  leaving them to have privacy and so the parents will be calm and the children will not feel controlled.

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For some years social networks have become an essential tool for us. In which we count and upload photos that at all times, tell us where we are, what we do and who we are. In short, we publish our daily on the internet. But should or would you let your parents observe your social networks?

I think it maybe violent that your parents see everything you say or do in your social area, because they control in some way your environment and question what you do or do not do. They somehow invade your privacy.

But on the other hand, it is a way to protect their children or to control for good everything they can do and if there is any problem with which parents can help them, they can also prevent possible harassment or cyberbullying. So they avoid thinking that something dangerous happens with some people, increase confidence in their children.

In conclusion, parents should review them from time to time, so that all the problems that exist in the network can be overcome because of lack of supervision by the parents.

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My opinion in this topic is divided, the Facebook pages are almost public in some cases but in other cases it's more private and selective, so I can't agree or disagree in this topic.

On the one hand the parents should have permission to look at their children's Facebook page because they are their tutors until they are adults and the fathers should know what's going on with their kids, but in the other hand this action isn't ethic at all cause it's their children's own privacy and he/she should select who can know about it and who can't know about it

This is such a controversial topic, cause if they look at it they are violating their children's privacy but if they don't do it they won't know if their son/daughter if involved in a problem that can get even worse with the time that can derivate into a psychological problem even.

In summary my opinion is completely divided, in one hand they should can look at it to solve some possible problems but in the other hand it isn't ethical and good and there are maybe other ways to know about their child's problems

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This is a controversial matter because many peoples think that parents shouldn’t look at their children’s Facebook pages but there are many people too think that parents must look their children’s Facebook pages.

On the one hand,childrens sometimes need help with something that the don’t want to reveal because they feel embarrased,but there are necesary to reveal if this things pains you and impeed you for do anything you want because any people tell you that you musn’t do something because they will go to hit you or things like this. (too long a sentence)

On the other hand,childrens needs privacy if they upload a picture with a friend or if they talk with a friend about something that parents shouldn’t have to know.

In mi opinión parents shouldn’t have to look in their children’s Facebook pages because if childrens want to tell something to their parents they do it but if their don’t want that their parents know things they must have privacy.

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Students around the world must study to pass an exam, that's obvious, but how many time do we must do?

On the one hand, if you study like 8 hours all days you should get great marks, but if you study 8 hours you have't time for other things like meet your friends and practise sports.

On the other hand, if you study 3 or 4 hours all days you might have good marks, but it's unrivalled with the marks of the 8 hours' student. A good thing about this timeof study is that you can do more things, not only study, you can meet friends, practise sports and more things, because you have more free time.

In my opinion we must study 3 or 4 hours all day and can do more things.

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can your parents consult your socials networks? this is a theme very complicated, because many people have  different opinion.

In my opinion, on one side, the parents will  looks our socials networks and they will can looked every in our facebook or instagram accounts.because in socials networks, there are peoples bad, paedophile and perverted. the parents can prevent that they children talk with type of persons.

Also, the parenst can`t look our social network,because we have right to have privacity in our conversation with other people and they will have trust in us.

in conclusion, the parenst would have trust in their children and only they would  look their a accounts if they think something strange.

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Can your parents look at your social network?
Privacy is a controversal topic theme because everybody have there  own opinion. However what worry many parents of this theme is the internet privacy.

Many children from early age have many smatphones, computer o access to internet, but we can blame them because is the fault of there parents. Internet is not secure for children, is hazardous for them but on the other hand the question  is frrom which age did parent supose to stop controlling them on internet. Many teenagers don´t like the control of they are parents but parents feel that internet is a suspiciuos site to use as pastimes.

Despite of what teenagers want i think that parents supose to control some things of internet but the don´t supose to control private things like text mensaje picture ect.. Because teenagers have rigth to conceal some information of they are private life

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Nowadays we are accustomed to using social networks like Twitter, Facebook, Instagram. Are parents allowed to look at what their children are doing on social networks?

On the one hand, I will start with the arguments in favor, everything on social networks are public, although if you select as something private, anyone who knows how to hack or who can search the internet can see it. On the other hand, the adolescents act as if nothing happened and also they can do it to harass someone easy.

I will continue with the arguments against, everyone has a right to some privacy, so parents should not look at their children, and violate their privacy by asking thousands of questions

In short, I think we need our privacy, even though it is a social network, but parents should rely more on children, but there may be serious cases that require vigilance.

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Almudena Ladero García --> Advantages and disadvantages of the new technologies

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These days, everybody tends to consider new technologies important for their day by day.
Although there are benefits, I would like to analyze the downsides as well.

On one hand, several concerns are raised according to new technologies, in any cases a lot of people feel lack of privacy on social networks and cyberbullying. Moreover, elderly people have difficulties to get used to these technologies. More every day, increase the birth of a new mental disorder and tecnophile people have psychological problems. Additionally, the native digital will take the risk of living in a sedentary society and it will cause serious health problems.  Good!

For contrast, there are good reasons to be in favor of new technologies. For instance, it is a quick form to obtain information about all matters and ir might help you to learn a lot of things like languages, subjects, sports, healthy, books, films or other interesting points for you. In addition new technologies are easy way to meet people all around the world and you can make new friends of different countries to practice or learn new languages and cultures though Internet. Internet make our daily lives easier because you find necessary information when you need it. Many people are disagreed to give electronic devices a kids however it is an enjoyable way to learn among children.

On balance, I strongly consider that new technologies provide benefits for all people and it can enrich our culture because it is a new way to learn a lot of things and the majority of people can access it.  As well as it is a big opportunity to be easier lives for us.

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Currently, we live in a connected world, that is, everything that happens to us, we hang in social networks without any kind of care. In recent years, problems such as virtual harassment have increased, this could be avoided with the vigilance of the parents of social networks. Now I will give arguments in favor and against.

I will start with the arguments in favor, firstly the parental vigilance in social networks will allow access to all of them without age restriction, secondly the young people will not enter undue pages with sexual, violent content ..., thirdly the presence of the parents will make think twice to his sons the content that will be uploaded to the network.

I will continue with the arguments against, the presence of parents in social networks remove freedom of expression to their children, violate their privacy with questions or even leaving them in ridicule in front of their friends. Aside from that they will be able to see the harsh reality of the life of the adolescents.

In short, I wouldn't like parents vigilase our social networks, because we would stop being ourselves, I am against.

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Nowadays We are used to using social networking sites such us Facebook, Twitter, Messenger, etc. Do You think that parents should check what You are uploading in the websites?

On the one hand, if We upload some snapshots, pics, photographs, etc. to our facebook page, We are showing to averybody what We are uploading, so Why parents should not watch it? They are people as well. Moreover, They can give us advice if We upload something ilegal for example, a nude photograph or a snapshot which seems a lack of privacy so They can protect us.

On the other hand, is true that anybody want that our parents spy us all the time like if They were overprotective parents. Furthermore, They can tell our privacy stuff to our friend's mums and that can provoque bullying, laughs, blue jokes, etc.

To sum up, there is no doubt that parents should check our Facebook webpage from time to time instead of watching it every single

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Can your parents look at your social networks?
In my opinion parents can't look at our social networks because we should have privacy. I know that there are anonymous people that can still information about us, but parents have to talk with us, and if it passed, we would talk with our parents. Also we have to know that we mustn't use the social networks for insult,  for criticize or something like that because it's punished for the law. And the mission for our parents it's give us the best education for don't use the mobile phone in a bad way.
However, Internet can suppose hazardous for childrens and sometimes parents can look at our mobile phone but with our permission. If they look at our mobile phone with our permission it also ilegal and it's punished with prision.
In conclusion, they can look our social network, because Internet it's dangerous, but only with our permission.

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Should parents control their children's social networks?
Nowadays, people know internet can be dangerous because everybody can see whatever they want without filters and totaly anonymous.
In one hand, parents have to give a good education to their kids and make a trust relationship to avoid talk with unknown people or upload pictures or things that they dont have to do. This can avoid the intrusion on their privacy.
In the other hand, it can be good to control what they upload, to protect of unknown people because sometimes bad people can cheat kids make them thinking that they are a friend and ask for pictures or another things.
Definitely, if parents give a good education making they think that there are bad people who want to cheat them, and dont trus unknown people, kids wont do it and they will think twice before talk or upload things that kids dont have to.

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