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Once you have made all changes to your draft, you are ready to type your final draft! As you type your speech, remember:
-Your speech should be engaging
-You need to be thinking about what visuals you could use when you give the speech
-You need to include by and your name at the top
*If you want some tips on how to make your speech better, go to the following website:
http://www.forbes.com/sites/jeffschmitt/2013/07/16/10-keys-to-writing-a-speech/#66bc0cc169ca

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Once you have made all changes to your draft, you are ready to type your final draft! As you type your article, remember:
-Your article should be easy to read (fonts should be clear and easy to ready)
-You need to include an engaging title for your article
-You may include a picture to make it more interesting
-You need to include by and your name at the top
*If you want some tips on how to make your article look better and more like a magazine article, you can watch the video bel

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Create an attractive article in Microsoft Word 2010

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Learn how to create an attractive article in Microsoft Word 2010 using styles. See how to format text into columns, how to edit images and finally how to save your style set. Published by Business Productivity. Instructor Ulrika Hedlund.

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Look at the sentences that Mrs. Turner highlighted in yellow on your draft. Each of these sentences has a grammatical mistake. Your task is to read each sentence and determine what the error is. Then you will fill out the editing demons form attached here, explaining what the error was and how you corrected it. If you cannot figure out what the mistake was, have a partner read the sentence to see if you can figure it out together. If neither one of you know what the mistake was, try checking the following website to see if you can find a rule that you might have broken. Once you have corrected each sentence, email the Editing Demons form to Mrs. Turner.
http://www.chompchomp.com/handouts.htm

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Trade your draft with someone near you. Answer the questions about their draft on the attached form. Type your answers in and email it to your partner and CC Mrs. Turner.

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Look at the feedback from Mrs. Turner on your draft and the sticky note with things to review. Add, delete, rearrange, or change parts of your draft to improve your draft based on the feedback.

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Editing Your Draft for Common Sentence Errors! 

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Editing Your Draft for Common Sentence Errors! 

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Re-read your draft, looking for any comma splices, run-ons, or fragments you might have used. Make any corrections needed. Once you think you have corrected any errors with your sentences, make sure that you have at least 2 sentence openers (check your notes for help with this) and at least 2 compound sentences. Highlight and label each.

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Using commas with introductory words/phrases

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Extra Practice with Common Sentence Errors! 

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Extra Practice with Common Sentence Errors! 

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Go to the link below to get some extra practice identifying comma splices, run-ons (this practice calls run-ons fused sentences), and fragments:
http://www.chompchomp.com/exercises.htm

Once you go to the page, complete at least three of the interactive exercises.

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Run-ons and comma splices | Syntax | Khan Academy