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One of the problems of aging society is that it increases burden among the younger generation, which is the backbone that the elderly survive on. Firstly, the more aged population could decrease the vitality of the job market, as there are more retirees than the newly-employed. It could increase the pressure to taxpayers to support the elderly and to pay more insurance which will benefit the older generation, not themselves. It may evoke dissatisfaction among younger workers, making them refuse to pay insurance fees for the elderly. It might lead to a vicious cycle, which undermines the nation's healthcare and pension system.

Secondly, the aged society has a number of chronically ill patients who are suffering from diseases caused by aging, for instance, Alzheimer's disease, or osteoarthritis. These patients need specific treatment and medication, which requires considerable amount of money and highly specialized workforces. Judging by the number of doctors who are specialized in aging-related illness, it is unlike that the current health system can cover up the increased number of patients.

Possible solutions for these problems would be hire the elderly for the public-sector jobs and to expand national health care service by training health care workers. Firstly, if the government hire the elderly as simple labour workers, for instance, a call centre staff, it would less the financial burden of the younger generation and even further, make the older people feel less dependant, and more confident about themselves.

Secondly, promotion of fostering the health care workers can benefit the elderly with better quality of treatments. Furthermore, the expansion of the national health care service will also stimulate the private medical market, which can lead to the increased opportunities for job seekers.

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I think we might have proper amount of food for our body. Perhaps our body might not want to eat too much food. It could be bad for our digest and maybe it is also harmful for our healthy life. In my experience, when I eat too much I can't lay down and go to bed. my stomach could't digest these good and it takes really long time.

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One of the problems caused by an aging population is this means that lower percentage of people in the workforce for supporting a larger proportion of retirees.

According to increase of retirement age, there are lots of old age workers in work area. Nowadays, most of tack related with using computer and internet, but some old age workers are not tend to cope with this task. So, only young workers are then to deal with huge amount of tasks. Unfortunately, these situation might cause young workers' exhaustion and quitting a job, and productivity also could be diminished.

Another problem is that retirees want to continue working. When they are retired, they could be still healthy so, they want to work and earn money to take care of their family but number of jobs for retirees are likely too less and limited to satisfy them.

Usually they could take place some certain jobs, for example, apartment guards or collecting garbage.

There are various solution we could coping with these problems.

First, teaching how to work with computer and internet for old age workers. It could be great influence to their work are and their career. For instance, they can get refund academy fees when they learn something that is helpful for their work. It might be more motivate for them to learn something .

Second, discovering more reasonable jobs might be useful solution for retirees and their family. If they get a proper job, they may live more positive and enthusiastic. It could make them and their family lives are more healthier and brighter.

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One of the problems caused by an aging population is higher burden on taxpayers in order to support government pension system. For example in some European countries taxes are about 30%, and sometimes even more because the birthrate in those countries reduced during last several decades so they have decent percent of seniors.

Another problems older people would continue working not just to have income

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One of the problems caused by an aging population is this means that more people are likely to lose their job or retire in a forced way from their work. That might cause the people got mental problems such as loneliness or depression. This could mean they will not only lose jobs literally but also lose their meaning of life - jobs are alreaey big part of lives.
Another problem is it might mean that we have to make efforts take care of health issues of seniors more than than before. For example, hospitalized people for a long period or people who has struggle with dimensia are likely increasing. This could mean that we should pay more taxes to help or support them and eventually that might make the economy more demanding and that maybe slow it down.

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One of the problems of aging society is that it increases burden among the younger generation, which is the backbone that the elderly survive on. Firstly, the more aged population could decrease the vitality of the job market, as there are more retirees than the newly-employed. It could increase the pressure to taxpayers to support the elderly and to pay more insurance which will benefit the older generation, not themselves. It may evoke dissatisfaction among younger workers, making them refuse to pay insurance fees for the elderly. It might lead to a vicious cycle, which undermines the nation's healthcare and pension system. Second problem is that the older employees group become, the less opportunities remain for the younger job-seekers. The older employees, who usually become the senior member of the corporation, tend to put off their retirement. It is likely to tighten the chances for the unemployed youth because the occupations for companies are limited. So, in short, the young job-seekers are sidelined.

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There are more than hundreds of languages over the globe, but a number of them become extinct annually. Some expect that having fewer languages would benefit people, since they have fewer languages to communiate with, thus freeing them from the burden of learning foreign languages. However, I do not believe that having fewer languages promises the more efficient future. Rather, it would shows us a more monotonous, boring future.

One of the disadvantages of having fewer languages is that it decreases diversity of different cultures. Every language has their untranslatable connotations or notions, which are inherited from their cultures. For instance, in Korean, there is a specific emotion that called 'han', which is similar to sorrow and grief, but could not be fully translated to other languages because the emotion is closely related to the country's history, which has suffered from numerous invasions and brutal colonization of Japanese Empire. If the languages unified, their unique thoughts would also be diminished.

Moreover, having fewer language bears the intrinsic problem: Which language would survive, and which language would die out? In ideal world, people would choose the language through the most logical and rational process - maybe they would categorize and classify the language by its number of speakers and historical values and vote which language will be erased out - but in real life, it would not. Given the failure of globalizing Esperanto and the success of English as global language, it is likely that only the languages of politically or economically powerful countries would survive.  Then the languages of weaker, undeveloped countries would lost its power, no matter how fertile cultural background they have.

In conclusion, I personally disagree with the opinion that with only several languages that exist in the world, life will be easier. I believe that the variety of languages ensure the diversity of society and enriching the culture, thus making one's life better.

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One of the disadvantages of having fewer languages is that it decreases diversity of different cultures. Every language has their untranslatable connotations or notions, which are inherited from their cultures. For instance, in Korean, there is a specific emotion that called 'han', which is similar to sorrow and grief, but could not be fully translated to other languages because the emotion is closely related to the country's history, which has suffered from numerous invasions and brutal colonization of Japanese Empire. If the languages unified, their unique thoughts would also be diminished.

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One of the positives of having fewer language is that it would make things more efficient in a way of we discuss and communicate. We can solve problems more effectively using some specific or chosen languages. In the IT world, the engineers do usually work in English so no matter what countries they are from, they can communicate more efficiently to solve the same task.  The same applies for programming languages too - where different nationalities share languages like C++ or Java. It would be very difficult if each nationality had a different language for programming!

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First, although the students have a variety of concerns, they can be narrowed down to the three groups: financial, social, academic. Second, among the three, the students are concerning more about their academic issues: heavy workload and getting desired degrees.

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The most noticeable point is that the biggest concern of the students was achieving desired degree classification. Many students seemed to feel worried about their future academic score. The second major concern was balancing academic, social and work commitments. The least portion of the respondents was concerned about debt at graduation.

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There's a long article in today's Guardian, by Suki Kim, comparing politics in Korea and America, that you might be interested in:

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alistair.candlin@britishcouncil.org

So do email your answers to writing task 1, before Thursday 28th, at 12 noon, please!!!

Remember:

Divide into paragraphs.

Include an overview.

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First the phone must be removed from the water as soon as possible and then it should be placed on paper towers. Next the case should be removed and the back of the phone taken off. Following this, the phone should be dried with a soft cloth.
After the battery and the SIM card have been removed, they should be dried off. The next step is to use a vacuum cleaner to remove remaining water from the inner sections of the phone. As a final step, the phone can be placed in a bag of uncooked rice overnighr to soak up any remaining water.

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First,the phone must be removed from the water as soon as possible. The next step is the phone should be placed on paper towels, and then the case should be removed and the back of the phone taken off. After this, the phone should be dried with a soft cloth and the battery and the SIMcard should be removed. The next stage is removing remaining water with a vacuum cleaner. Finally, the phon can be placed in a bag of uncooked rice.

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First, you should take out the phone from the water as fast as you can place the phone on paper towels.
And then, after remove the case and back of the phone,

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First, the phone must be removed from wather as soon as possible and then should be put on paper towels. The next step is to remove the case and back of the phone in order to dry the phone with a soft cloth. After that, the battery and SIM card should be taken off from the phone to be dried, and a vacuum cleaner can be helpful to dry remaining water inside phone. Finally, after reassemble the all parts, put it into a bag of uncooked rice overnight to soak up any remaining water.

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First, the phone must be removed from wather as soon as possible and then should be put on paper towels. The next step is to remove the case and back of the phone in order to dry the phone with a soft cloth. After that, the battery and SIM card should be taken off from the phone to be dried, and a vacuum cleaner can be helpful to dry remaining water inside phone. Finally, after reassemble the all parts, put it into a bag of uncooked rice overnight to soak up any remaining water.

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Once the phone is removed from the water, you should place it on paper towels and the case should be taken off. The following step is to dry out your phone by soft cloth. After this, the phone has to be dissembled and dried off once again. As a final step, you should remove any remaining water from the inner part of the phone with a vacuum cleaner and place it in a bag of uncooked rice overnight in order to dry it up completely.

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It could deprive young people of some opportunity to do various physical activities such as playing with friends, making something by hands, observing change of natural phenomenon and so on. We can see easily students who concentrate mobile phone alone or with their friends without speaking. It also could be a cause of cyberbullying that hurt some students heart or lead to terrible results like depression or mental problems. We occasionally contact news stories about who suffer from cyberbullying for a long time

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For example, if you subscribe Youtube or Netflix you can save money and time for watching a brand new movie. It is cheaper than theater and  you do not  need to drive to theater. Also you can watch it again and again whenever and wherever you want. In addition, there are a wide range of topics you can choose, some of them are very good for educational purpose.

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For example, watching it by tablet can be more cost effective than going to a theater. We have to pay at least around 40,000 won for one family, whereas if we use Netflix we can just sit together and watch hundreds of movies for a dollar. Another example what I can think of is that if we use the home entertainment game controler like Nintendo Wii, we can replace outdoor activities with doing the indoor game activities so it can mean the time and the cost can be saved as well.

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In terms of convinience, more people can enjoy entertainment with the highly developed technologies because we do not have to go to certain places. Moving on to cost, people don't need to pay for various costs; transportation, tickets per person and snacks.

We could use Netflix as a specific example. First of all, it enables people in rural area to watch movie without going to certain places, while they needed more than 30 minutes in the past. Secondly, there is more variation of choices. We can only watch recent movies in cinemas, whereas we can choose wide range  of movies from classic to modern. Lastly, we can enjoy movies with cost of just a cup of coffee, without paying extra cost such as snacks, bus etc.

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It is ovious that we all have benefited from new technologies to pass our free time and building social relationships. Nowadays people do not have enough time to gather together because we are really opccupied our work and job. However we can easily communicate with other people doing social network services such as Face book or Instagram. I have two children who usually communicate and make an rapport with their friends by SNS. They are connected to each other very tightly and keep stay in contact permanantly because of SNS. For another example, we can frequente streaming services to watch the movies by Netflix or to listen to music by Youtube.

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Some guidelines on using the long dash, here:

http://www.thepunctuationguide.com/em-dash.html

And some points on colons and semi colons on the same website.

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We are practising writing sentences for the body paragraphs here.  That means you need to include data.

Remember:

Your body paragraphs should include specific numbers.

Your overview paragraph, (after the introductory sentence) should not include specific numbers.

Make clear this difference between a general overview paragraph, and paragraphs on specific detail.

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By 2050 The population of India will still increasing whereas the population of China will be reduced to 1.4 billion. The population of India will have been outgrown the population of China.

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By 2035, the population of China will reach a peak, and start to decrease until 2055. However the population of India will continue to increase until 2055. So by the end of the period, China's population will be at 1.4 billions, whereas, India's population will be at 1.6 billions.

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Please write two sentences about future projections / predictions in the graph. Remember it's always good to compare data.

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The population of both countries will increase by 2035.
After 2035, the population of India will keep increasing and reach 1.6 billion by 2055, whereas that of China will start decreasing and reach 1.4 billion.

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Now I send my recording. It was not a easy job for me. Thank you anyway for giving me new opportunity usung this kind of modern technology.

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Now I send my recording. It was not a easy job for me. Thank you anyway for giving me new opportunity usung this kind of modern technology.

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1. After 2017, the population of India will gradually increase until 2055, whereas the population of china will steadily incline until 2035 and then slowly decrease until 2055.

2. By 2035, after both populations reach 1.4 billion the number of Indian people will start to surpass the population of china, reaching 1.6 billion until 2055, which will be 0.2 billion higher than China.

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Please record yourself doing speaking part 2.  Remember to work from notes, please - don't write out the whole script.

If you want to listen to or read the example, the website I took it from is here:

http://www.examenglish.com/IELTS/IELTS_Speaking_part2_3.htm

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Hello I'm Jieun