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Give each presenter comments. Give them one sentence comments for each of these topics. Tell them how they can improve for next time.
(1) Volume of Voice
(2) Eye Contact
(3) Body Language
(4) Overall Speaking Quality

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No eye contact.
Body language is low.
Always stop.

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Don't always look at Mr Grover. No eye contact with other students.
No more body language.

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He needs to pronounce every words better and more clear.

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I agree with kevin
Add：Rely too much on PPT.
Expression is not fluent, the pronunciation is not accurate.

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You got through the presentation. Good job. Next is to work on speaking more loudly, looking at each student, and starting to use your hands to express ideas. Once you can begin to do this, you can start focusing on pronunciation.

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He doesn't explain very clear.

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Have enough body language.
GU

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looked back at the screen too many times

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good body language

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GUGU PPT
Sound can do better.
Don't be shine , try  your best
The process is clearly

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Need more eye contact.
Try your best.
You can add more word side,

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No more body language.

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Sound is too small.
PPT is too dark that l can not see this clearly
The speaking isn't good enough
Can not read the word clear

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In general it‘s very good.

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Very perfect, except some "Eh..."

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prefect

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Nice
PPT is good
Yes, neverous

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A little bit nervous. Good try

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ppt is beautiful

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Better than before

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Don't read the PPT, use more own words.

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Too nervous

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Sound is too

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Don't be shine , my friend

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Copy picture
Forget what to say
PPT is nice
Topic clear
In the end is a little

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Good example

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So nervous and your voice is not follow the PPT pages

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Always stop
No eye contact
Always look at the screem

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Add more eye contact will be better.
Try not to rely much on PPT.

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You should looks at people
I think you can not only read the sentence.

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Always use one ppt background!

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Voice should be louder. Add more body language.

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No body language

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Voice should be louder.
Need more body language.

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should be loud
There are a lot of grammer mistake in the PPT and your own word.

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Voice should be louder. Word order chaos, the pronunciation is not correct. Need to add some body languages.

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too quiet
pronunciation and language is bad
Always read the PPT, no own opinion
Not good

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Great job completing the speech. Very challenging. I like that you made an effort to keep eye contact and use some body language. Next, make sure to only have 10 words on each slide, try not to read the slide, and start designing body language for the entire speech. Good luck!

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I noticed that you were trying to keep your arms at your side and you did use body language once or twice. Next, really focus on looking at the audience when you speak. Try not to keep looking at the PPT.

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We missed you last night for the practice. As a result, you didn't get to try and and use more eye contact like others. Please focus on looking at the audience and using