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WWW

*Good level of information on how to get to the website and how to get around it.

*Includes information on the separate aspects of the website.

*Text is easy to read.

EBI

*Include a house style to make the document more interesting to look at.

*Include information on how to access and submit assessments

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WWW:

A good use of screenshots to back up your descriptions

Good descriptions of the different aspects on SharePoint

Well structured layout throughout

EBI:

Need to include more details on the points

Need to expand on the site contents page

Use sub-headings to explain what part of the website I am talking about

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WWW

*Good level of information on how to access and submit assessments.

*Good use of images to back up your information.

EBI

*Some of the images have quite low resolution.

*House scheme is quite dull for a publication.

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WWW

*Titles and headings are clear.

*Text is easy to read against background.

EBI

*Some of the images are quite Low resolution.

*Some of the site content poi

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WWW

*Provides detailed and thorough explanations of how to access, navigate and use SharePoint

*Pictures provide a clear representation of what is happening

EBI

*Have a contents page to display where each of the parts of the guide are so they can be easily found

*Improve the layout

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WWW:

A good use of screenshots to back up your descriptions

Good descriptions of the different aspects on sharepoint

Well structured layout throughout

A good amount of detail was used for each point

EBI:

Add a house style/colour to make it more attractive

A few incorrect descriptions, e.g. SharePoint is at the top left, when it is at the top right

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WWW:

- Information is consistent and clear. good use of shapes to highlight key points on your illustrations

- good use of screenshots and clear illustrations to back up your writing.

- Good structure and layout overall

EBI:

- Needs a colour scheme or house style to make your overall presentation stand out

- Create an introduction introducing SharePoint and what it is used for.
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WWW

*Text is clear and easy to read.

*Good use of images and shapes to illustrate your information.

EBI

*There is an inconsistent amount of information throughout the presentation.

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WWW

* Has good detail and thorough explanations of how to use and access SharePoint

* The pictures clearly show what happens when you do things and it explains what to do and how to do it.

EBI

* No sub headings to explain what part of the website you are looking at next.

* Limited text

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WWW

* Has a good layout which provides a clear way to see what pictures go with what text.

* The background matches the school colours,

* The text can be easily read as it contrasts the brown background,

* Provides an in depth explanation on how to access and log into SharePoint

* Explains what the SharePoint icons do and how to find your assignments

EBI

* Need to explain how to start the assignments and how to submit work for marking

* Need to check grammar as there are some mistakes

* Need to finish explaining the last app on the Site Contents page
* Need to add a contents page for the user guide

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WWW
- Good use of illustrations to back up the descriptions of your work.

- Good use of shapes and colours to highlight the key points on the illustrations

EBI

- Information is not as consistent towards the end of the presentation

- Give an introduction to what SharePoint is and what it is used for.

- Seems to be a lack of detail through the presentation

- Check or punctuation and grammar errors.

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WWW:

Good use of screenshots to back up your descriptions

Good descriptions of the different aspects on sharepoint

Well structured layout throughout

Good spelling and grammar

Text is easy to read

EBI:

Include other site aspects (e.g. calendar)

Include a house scheme, instead of just black and white which makes it look dull

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WWW:

- Information is very clear and consistent.

- Good use of screenshots and illustrations to back up your writing.

EBI:

- Lack of colours makes the overall presentation dull.

- Had a house scheme to make your presentation stand out

- Some of the pictures have low resolution which makes it look unprofessional.

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WWW:

I like how the house style reflects the colours of Darrick wood

A good use of screenshots to back up your descriptions

Good descriptions of the different aspects on sharepoint

Well structured layout throughout

EBI:

Need to explain how to start the assignments and how to submit work for marking

A few spelling and grammar issues