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Strengths:

- The contrast between light and dark made the image stand out more.

The colour of the slogan and the logo matches so it looks more professional.

Weaknesses:

- The writing on the piece of paper isn't written very neatly so the advertisement looks less professional.

- The Burn tool made it look patchy.

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today, I made improvements to my product proposal. I am nearly finished with it so I'm happy about that. To improve I could have actually finished the work but the first part of the work needed improving HOW. I learnt that I need to focus more and work a lot quickerHOW WILL THAT HEL_P YOU NEXT WEEK. Next week I need to finish the work and get onto the pre production sheet.

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Today, I finished my product proposal and started my pre production sheet. I feel more confident that I will meet my deadline now that my product proposal is finished. To improve I could have finished the pre production sheet EXPLAIN HOW THIS IMPACTED YOUR TIMEKEEPING. I learnt that if I focus more I can get a lot more work done. Next week I need to shoot the photos and start editing them. This means I have to finish my pre production work at home.

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Today I made my advert, I took the pictures and edited them. I'm happy that the advert is now made and it looks quite good - WHAT WERE YOUR STRENGTHS. What could have gone better is that I wasn't very happy with how the pictures looked but I had no time to change it. I learnt how to use Photoshop more effectively HOW and how to use a digital SLR. Next week I need to finish my evaluation.