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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JzZOsNclR6g

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Hi Alejandra,
I liked the ideas you presented and I understood why you had chosen your character.  However, there are some elements to consider:
1. You didn't use your outline, which was part of the instruction, you used text and this affected your presentation.
2. some language elements: "he don't study that he want." Doesn't after He and WHAT he wanted sounds better. this means, more work on verb forms and structures. "he never attend" past.  start: past.
3. you didn't have a conclusion.

Action plan: record your voice with your speech of introduction and send it to me on whatsapp before Friday.

Task: Below

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Hi Alejandra,
You did an interesting job explaining interesting information about the natural disaster, you acted up well.  However, you did not use much indirect speech and this was a vital part for your task.  Additionally, you need to keep working on your pronunciation: rivers, established, droughts.  Also, try to avoid spanglish ideas: "independ of the season."

Task: Good
Platform: Very Good

Regards,
Anderson

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https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B6L6E7x-9EhzcGtPd2xnRmdqdVE/view?pref=2&pli=1

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https://padlet.com/teacherandersoncardenas/ouronlineportfolio