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Task 1:

1. Look at your CW3 draft.

2. Can you find an example of hedging or cautious language?

3. Share with your classmate and decide if hedging was used effectively.

4. Is there any part of your essay which would be improved with more cautious language?  (This may be difficult to spot--don't worry if you can't answer this.)

Task 2:

1. Read the example essay on Robotics or Sample 1 on Law.

2. Can you find any examples of hedging or cautious language?

3. Is it effective?

4. Is there any part of these essays which would be improved with more cautious language?  (This may be difficult to spot--don't worry if you can't answer this. Hint:  for the essay on Law, think range of modal verbs)

5. What other aspects of these two essays are effective? What is less effective?

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What works for you?
How do you get started?
How do you divide your essay writing into smaller, more manageable tasks?
What other tips do you have?

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How to get started writing your CW3 extended essay

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How to get started writing your CW3 extended essay

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Ignore using your CW2 and focus on using your CW1 outline.

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How to get started writing CW3 extended essays

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What makes a good introduction?
What makes a good conclusion?
What makes a good main body paragraph?

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1. What is the writer’s position?  How do you know?

2. Why is this a good example of CW3?

3. How could it be improved?

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How do you save the articles that you are using?
Do you use any digital tools to help you?
How do you take notes or annotate?

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This is a good website to expand your productive vocabulary. For example, type in disadvantage and discover collocations such as distinct disadvantage, obvious disadvantage, serious disadvantage, etc.

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Just The Word collocations - helps you in writing English

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CUL AES Coursework 3 Assessment Brief_PM

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A thesis statement should...
•State your position

•Be argumentative, not descriptive

•Answer your full question

•Use clear and direct language (although not over-simplified)

•Come at the end of your introduction and be echoed in your conclusion

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Use this website to check how many academic words you used.  Copy and paste your writing into this site and it will highlight all of the words that are on the Academic Word List (AWL).

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Here are the slides we saw in today's lesson.  We only looked at a few of them, but there are some more examples that may be helpful for some people.

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ISC Written descriptors CW 3_PMP 2020-21 (1)

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Do you have any useful apps you use to organise your research or help with reading?

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Do you have any useful apps you use to organise your research or help with reading?

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Please share below or in the comments.

Has anyone ever used Speechify on Google Chrome?  Is it useful?  Or have you used any other apps that change reading text into speech to save you time?

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xI will argue... I strongly believe...

It is argued that...

This essay will argue that...

make your position clear through vocabulary, hedging, etc.

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1. What do you think the student did well?

2. What could be improved?

3. What mark did they get?  Below pass, pass or above pass?

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Share your thesis statement with your classmates.

1.What is effective about it?

2.What needs to be improved?

Some ideas to think about:

•Is there a clear position?

•Could someone have the opposite viewpoint?

•Can you imagine what the main arguments and counterarguments will be in the essay?

•Does it answer ALL parts of the question?

•Can you understand it?

•Does the grammar/vocabulary need to be changed to make it clearer?

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Essay Question: Over the last decade there has been an increase in the number of entrepreneurs establishing their own business using social media (SM). Analyse the benefits and drawbacks of using SM for establishing a business and evaluate whether SM is primarily responsible for this growth.

Thesis Statement: It is a fact that social media can be a powerful ally to business growth, even though there’s other tools for it.

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| Title: Employees are the most critical resource for any organization. Organizations have leveraged the technological innovation and have started utilizing HR information systems to move away from traditional management methods. Evaluate the effectiveness and challenges of HR Information Systems (HRIS) and importance of employee productivity in organizations.| Thesis statement: HRIS contributes to the efficiency and effectiveness of HR planning, data management, training needs assessment, succession planning etc.
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Thesis statement: The impact of climate change on the Global economies can cause massive damage.

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Thesis statement: The impact of climate change on the Global economies can cause massive damage.

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Title: Climate change is a major reason for global crises with the rising temperature on earth. Many corporations have to be responsible for the environment and adhere to Corporate Social Responsibilities (CSR). Evaluate how effective two UK energy companies are at dealing with the climate crisis.

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Essay Question:

Demotivation in employees has been a major concern for business organizations. Maslow a scholarly motivational theorist, has come up with hierarchy of needs which are human needs that dictate an individual's behaviour. Evaluate the effectiveness of Maslow’s hierarchy of needs in workplace motivation.

Thesis statement: Maslow’s motivation theory is one of the best known and effective theories for workplace motivation.

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Essay Question:Video games is big business and many games are marketed across the globe. However, there is a lot of scrutiny aimed at this industry due to its perceived negative impact on the mental health; especially in relation to children. Evaluate some the risks of playing video games and proposed solutions on how these companies can resolve these issues.
Thesis statement:
In the following essay will discuss there are some risks of playing video games, and the video companies have come out the solutions for video game classifications, also the e-sports have some significant effect for the video game market.

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Q. Scheduling is a major task in project management. Projects regarding product development, production and supplies usually go beyond the scheduled duration or some stayed incomplete. Project managers face the issue to search for alternative methods for scheduling to break the bottleneck period. Critical chain project management (CCPM) is a method that emphasizes the resources required to execute project tasks. To what extent CCPM method can overcome these challenges?
Thesis Statement: This essay will argue that CCPM is more effective strategy of scheduling a project than traditionally used CPM method to avoid delays in project completion.

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Title-Online shopping is now commonplace and, in many cases, has taken over traditional physical stores. Analyse the advantages and disadvantages of promoting a business through social media platforms with reference to two industries.

The thesis statement-The main objective of this essay is to find out the significance and drawbacks of social media promotions in the Retail and Electronic Industry. It will also, discuss the popularity of online shopping in the recent era.

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Title: Agile methodology (Application for project management) is the most effective in mitigating risks. To what extend do you agree?

Thesis statement: This essay will argue that agile methodology can be beneficial for handling risk factors in project management

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Title:

Advancement of technologies has influenced firms switching from traditional marketing to digital marketing. Many people argue that digital marketing has a significant impact on business growth in Tourism industry. To what extend do you agree with the statement.
Thesis statement:
Improvements in technology made firms switch from traditional marketing to digital marketing, and the fact is, this change has made organisations grow significantly.

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Title: ICT in Accounts Consultancy Firms can be beneficial for this field.
Analyze the pros and cons of using ICT.

Thesis statement:
In this essay we will discuss the impact of ICT in accounts consultancy firms. How these systems work, their costs, implementation problems and how efficient these systems are.