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Use green posts for those who have presented their works on the consultation day.

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References: Please capture the page / image (brand posters/ videos/ websites from the original brand) Brand: Value: Media: Poster / Audio / Mini-video What is the headline of the advertisement? Provide your own headline on your advertisement! Make a new

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1. The headline for brand awareness is cool! But how the headline stay connected to the body?
2. I do love the way you guys make headlines and slogan. But again, the next step is to check whether the headline fits / represents the offering or not, ok? ;)
3. Check your call to action. #betheone must be the slogan. See the references about CTA on the given slide: advertising project and the other previous PPTs.
Example of CTA: buy now, shop now, click, visit, etc.

Thank you!

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1. Very clear special offering/feature! great! it will help you a lot in making headlines and slogans since the value and the focus are clear. "different from other products in terms of its look."
2. the body is also clear, very helpful to make your headline. Good job!
3. Please check and make your slides presented in English.
4. Direct selling ad shows complete and excellent elements.

This group deserves A+ for the progress.
Please complete your work and keep the spirit high! Thank you!

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1. Clear target audience!
2. Love the headline and body, hopefully you have enough practice and pronunciation checking before recording.
Since you mention that you wanna audiences fully aware with your product, please mind the intonation, pace, and clarity. ;)
3. For the direct selling, look for the most suitable strategy. Don't forget to make the elements step by step so that it could be connected to one another like on your brand awareness.
4. Don't forget creating CTA for the direct selling.

Good luck & thank you!

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Clear and excellent!
You deserve A+! mean it!

Thank you.

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1. Raising focus on female football players? ah cool! it's new and interesting. The important point is that you can execute the symbol and story well to promote your brand's value.
Please try your best to make persuasive promotions and put the elements step by step.
2. Powerful slogan!
3. very excellent progress! you just need to complete it with the figures.

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1. Please catch up on the progress!
2. Follow step by step to make each element of the advertisements.
3. From the values, pick one / some that you want to highlight.

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I really love the way you created the steps and present the detail.
However, here is my suggestion to improve it better and more detailed:
1. Check the grammar: Connect you each others
each is followed by a singular (each other)
also, I suggest you check the headline, make sure it's not confusing but still easy to remember.
Here is mine, as an example:
connect each of you better

2. Body: use it for free with no time limits. get connected to anyone everywhere every time.
Limitless and free!
Grammar and composition check.

3. But for the direct selling, all elements are cool and clear!
Great job!

Thank you! Keep the spirit on!

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Really appreciate the way you analyze your references also look at the opportunity and put it as your reason for choosing Indomie.
Next, do step by step in choosing the promoted value - the target audience - body - headline - slogan, etc.

Come catch your nice starting move!
You can do it, team! ;)

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1. 4 Desember 2017 --> how to write the correct date format?
Example: December 4, 2017

2. Headline, for brand awareness, please make it different from the name of the brand.
Example:
- brand: good time
- slogan: have a good time

3. There are many parts that are still in Bahasa Indonesia. You know what to do and which to fix, right?

4. But I appreciate the way you adapt to the aimed project.

Keep the spirit on and pay attention to some details! ;)

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Catch up on the progress!

headline, body, and the target audience in brand awareness ad is already clear. Go to the next detailsthen!

Thank you.

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Microsoft HoloLens Direct Selling Ad  English Assignment

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Group 2 TETAP KAWAL #2019GANTIPRESIDEN Adya  3 Tian  9 Gius  20 Harsa  25

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Cool! Thanks for the significant progress.

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Cool! Thanks for the significant progress.

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GROUP 8_GOOGLE MEET BRAND AWARENESS ADVERTISEMENT

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GROUP 8_GOOGLE MEET DIRECT SELLING ADVERTISEMENT

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